Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 6:56pm

A great transitional chapter for Harry.

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 6:02pm

lol nice update i hope u update agen soon and not as long inbetween them as i would rather shorter chapter then long ones that take for ever

john78 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 5:13pm

I have been a reader of fanfiction for years now,I've seen good stories never finished and crappy ones go on for 50 or more chapters.You are among a hand full of really good authors who put out new and very well thought out stories that make waiting weeks or more for a new chapter well worth the wait.So form a person who loves to read to a writer who takes time to put pen to paper for fun Thank YOu

aemilyl24 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 5:11pm

This chapter was fabulous. Keep up the amazing work - and please try to update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also - this is in the future - but I do hope that you'll continue this story when they go to Beauxbatons.

LeprechaunJV posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 4:21pm

Excellent Chapetr........ What Harry told Dumbledore was beautiful and Glad to know Dumbledore has come to his senses.
Look forward to your next update.......
CHEERS!

lancelw posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 4:03pm

Thank you for the update. Love this story.
looking forward to more of this and all your works.
:)

darthme1011 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:56pm

AMAZING i love the harry/kate interaction that played out

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:47pm

Thank you for posting!
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wizco posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:47pm

I've been waiting for this for such a long time, but it was well worth it!
I'm not really much of a reviewer, I just wanted to let you know that your work is appreciated.

Cheers,
Wizco

rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:18pm

GREAT GREAT update, loved it.

bonnie posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:16pm

Another great update! Welcome back.

00_Knight posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:03pm

Always glad to hear from you jeconais!


As per your usual performance, another outstanding chapter added your resume!

Thank you for your fiction, without it, I probably would have never learned the difference between mediocre and outstanding! Your work, and this site helped me to find excellent authors with a passion for producing stuff better than the original. No offense to JKR but you and others could give her a run for her money in the HP-verse.

Silly_Billy posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 2:02pm

I've read so many HP stories that I had half forgotten what went on in Chapters 1-3, so I re-read them and I still laughed soooo hard.

Well done on a masterful story that just keeps giving.

ficbob posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 1:37pm

Great read
Great christmas scene and a great dance.
But the Mom and Pop and Harry and Kate scene was awesome.
Thanks

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:40pm

Great story. So glad it is still being written.
You just couldn't keep evil Bumbles, could you?

Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 12:03pm

Love this story. Great part with Kate and with Dumbles, he finally got hit by a clue by four.

And Gabby's just way too cute. :)

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 11:04am

An excellent chapter thanks for it.

A nice start to the chapter for Gabrielle anyway, I had forgotten there would be no xmas tree that year because of the Ball, A big Potter party would be good and Harry has a reputation to maintain.

Elf fights would be wild I am surprised the Twins did not start an elf Fight Club.

Flying a Hippogriff was a great detail to have as Harry seemed to enjoy it and Gabrielle Harry is always good. Hagrid could do wonders for the reputation of Hippogriff’s if students were allowed to fly on him and make some gold if Harry is included.

Nasher is such a great name and should be his official name Lord Nasher has a nice ring to it.

The elves getting what they want for xmas and without the fear of being set free a very nice gesture and an army of devoted elves is good to have the Death Eaters would look less menacing if their robes look bad or are itchy.

I liked the decoration on top of the tree and the lines "She has you wrapped around her little finger, Nonsense I just happen to like being curled up in that position, it is a mere coincidence."

Interesting gifts from Nasher and Thrasher but now at least their family lives will be easier with their fathers gone. It will make interesting trivia "Who did Harry Potter get his first ring from?" Nasher and Thrasher.
Harry expanding his knowledge of wine is good especially if he marries a French girl and the passwords for the twins is useful, Slytherin would be tricky but being able to speak to snakes should count for something.

The bodyguards now look very cool now and the charm on their glasses was a very Slytherin idea and will make them the best bodyguards available in time. Such a sweet gift from Gabrielle I imagine giving her own hair is a big deal and the pendent should be very useful if or when Harry is in trouble. I am so pleased Harry is going to Beauxbatons both he and Hermione will be much better off.

The Ball was a lot of fun and well done and should keep people guessing and dinner without Fleur will be good. Dancing with Aurora was a great twist I hope the promise is kept and if skin tight spandex clothing is involved bonus.

Kate dealt with Draco brilliantly maybe we now know why Draco ended up with the younger Greengrass.

Well spoken by Harry to Albus I think the old man got off too easy but with his fame and power its better for Harry and the world not to have him as an enemy.

This was a very enjoyable chapter with many happy, fun and cute moments and with some well done emotion and hint of sadness. I look forward to the next chapter it’s so rare for Harry to be happy and at peace as well as have fun and I do like Gabrielle she brings out a nice side to Harry that is not often explored.

NuitTombee posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 9:17am

I can't decide if it's a good thing or a bad thing that everything Harry did he did it well. I loved the story though and now I'm off to see Naruto.

Best wishes with RL and the stories that you keep us entertained with.

Thank you,
James

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 8:56am

Beautiful chapter. Harry's answer to Dumbledore's question brought tears to my eyes :)

madrymon posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2011 8:33am

Loved the new chapter, re-read the whole thing again. I can't wait for more!