By Jeconais
Reviews
KennethRose posted a comment on Tuesday 18th October 2011 8:30am
Yep, it's official: I love this story. To be quite honest I'm looking forward to see how the relationship between Harry and Fleur goes; as the Twins were planning on getting them together, and yet Fleur is nothing short of a vindictive little bitch at the moment. Gabrielle is so cute the way you've portrayed her, and I like how Harry has a family of sorts, no matter how odd it is.
Keep up the great work!
Kenneth
noylj posted a comment on Sunday 16th October 2011 6:36am
Have I mentioned that an update would be very nice?
Thanks.
Alrissa posted a comment on Thursday 13th October 2011 10:15pm
Shoot. I'm not sure if I sent this before. Apologies if double posted.
Well now, I read a lot of fanfiction. The Harry Potter franchise has grown slightly stale for me. This story came as a nice, tall, refreshing glass of lemonade on a hot day. Thank you. Yes I am thirsty now. It's your fault.
I have to point out the part with Harry and Gabrielle is also refreshing. Most people who add young girls in their stories and put them in a loving relationship with the lead are doing so with less then savory intent. Even when they try to hide this it echoes wrongly. I feel no such taint reading this and so I bow before good penmanship. Consider me fluffy with a smile.
Alrissa posted a comment on Thursday 13th October 2011 10:09pm
Well now, I read a lot of fanfiction. The Harry Potter franchise has grown slightly stale for me. This story came as a nice, tall, refreshing glass of lemonade on a hot day. Thank you.
I have to point out the part with Harry and Gabrielle is also refreshing. Most people who add young girls in their stories and put them in a loving relationship with the lead are doing so for less the savory reasons even when they try to hide it. I feel no taint reading this and so I bow before good penmanship. I needed some fluff..
Alrissa posted a comment on Thursday 13th October 2011 10:05pm
Well now, I read a lot of fanfiction. The Harry Potter franchise has grown slightly stale for me. This story came as a nice, tall, refreshing glass of lemonade on a hot day. Thank you.
I have to point out the part with Harry and Gabrielle is also refreshing. Most people who add young girls in their stories and put them in a loving relationship with the lead are doing so for less the savory reasons even when they try to hide it. I feel no taint reading this and so I bow before good penmanship. I needed some fluff.
Terry Chang posted a comment on Tuesday 11th October 2011 6:27pm
"So you're aware, this has all the flaws that all my writing does, so if you're expecting something deep or meaningful, please go read something else."
I just read the stories, I don't check any forums or anything, so I don't know if things are being said regarding your writing. That said. I enjoy your style of stories very much. Are there some criticisms that can be tossed your way. Sure, but that applies to every writer out there, including JK Rowlings. Anyways, I love your stories, and look forward to any chapters that come out. Thank you for writing these fun entertaining stories.
lwj2 posted a comment on Sunday 9th October 2011 1:16pm
I've been enjoying your work with this story, it's funny and serious simultaneously. The relationships between the characters and how they're developing are fascinating to me.
I do hope you're having as much fun writing this as I am having reading it, I know how much work writing really is.
I haven't said it before and should have, thank you for hosting this site and these neat authors.
Best,
LWJ2
kyoshi posted a comment on Saturday 8th October 2011 9:23pm
It's a super story but I'm waiting for Harry to kick some ass!
71_scorpio posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 1:09pm
I like this a lot. Not only is it fun (hilarious in spots), it's also interesting watching Harry evolve into a fine young man. He's a very likeable fellow; which is quite different from the 'angry boy' syndrome that is so common in fics about 4th, 5th, 6th, & 7th year. (a reflection of JKR's work, I'm sure...)
Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Thank you so much for sharing it. -S
Lia1 posted a comment on Monday 3rd October 2011 9:55pm
Ps...I adore this story. Just re-read it for the...well, I think it's like the 10th time. Please continue at your leisure! :)
TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2011 12:12pm
When I first started reading this, I thought it was a silly little crack-fic. Hours later, after finishing this chapter, I find myself entranced.
chrysa posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2011 3:10am
i love all your stories. please update soon.
Addlcove posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2011 12:27pm
just re-read this story, hoping for continuation soon :)
Gseven posted a comment on Monday 12th September 2011 7:50am
More!Must have MORE!
Tarja posted a comment on Saturday 10th September 2011 10:48am
Can't wait for more!!!
gregstar posted a comment on Tuesday 6th September 2011 11:58pm
Really enjoy every update to this story although I would have loved to see the twins and Gary more involved together like in the first chapters.
Second task next time round?
The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 4:35am
As always, another excellent story. Yes, you could probably end it at the end of this chapter, but my imagination is fed by others. I can 'see' and 'hear' what is happening in a story when guided by a talent such as yours. What I'm trying to say is that I have enjoyed the story to this point and I eagerly look forward to more. Keep up the great work.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 26th August 2011 5:41pm
Its good. I like it a lot, and hope to see more.
Soon, please.
sarahgirl12384 posted a comment on Friday 26th August 2011 2:04am
Love this story... I really like Harry's attitude! I love the characters that you have created... I think they really add good depth to the story!
Halimede posted a comment on Friday 21st October 2011 5:29am