By Jeconais
Reviews
Stahchild posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:51am
Fantastic beginning. I'm liking this already.
I hope all goes well for you in Real life and I'm very glad you haven't decided to give up on writing completely.
Best of luck!
dan26 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:49am
It'll be interesting to see who Fred and George actually pick to be harry's girlfriend?
ljdlb posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:37am
Excellent, quite funny.
I needed a good laugh and this gave it to me, look forward to the next update whenever you fell like doing and posting it.
Cheers
Luis
ED PLATT posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:35am
Very nice chapter a good start to what appears to be a very entertaining story please post more soon.If this is the level your writing is going to be at you have nothing to worry about you still write better than most fan fiction writers kEEP WRITING AND I WILL CONTINUE READING.
ED
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:33am
Heh. This is lots of fun. The wine fountain spell is another one of those little things that goes by without thought in the original that really could be a big deal.
Ken Norton posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:28am
It is great to see more writing from you. This is a great twist to year four and I love the bodyguards that Harry has hired.
Jarrod posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:27am
Wow, this is the sort of silly oddness that we expect from you Jeconais. Keep it up. I really like how the twins just decided to spin this around and run with an opportunity.
migele posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:20am
Rofl.
I love it. This one is very amusing. I wonder how the next one will be.
A bit fast on the pacing though.
Neil Glover posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:18am
Another brilliant start to a story, I hope that you will continue this.
amysds posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:17am
I'm so excited to see a new story! I love all your writing and love the over the top stuff you do. Super Harry etc. Also love it when you pair Harry with a different character like Gabrielle. I haven't actually read this chapter yet (sorry) because I wanted to wait for another chapter so I don't go crazy with anticipation! I like the author to get ahead of me a bit... Anyhoo theres so many ways to improve the fourth and fifth books- hated six and seven. I've always loved Sirius acting like a real Dad or laughing it up over Harry's antics with the ladies. Ok now I'm rambling and will try to end it but not go back to the top and read yet....who am I kidding?! I'll totally read tonight and now this review is worthless - sorry!
Longreach posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:11am
Oh god this was so good it HURT (I fell out of my seat laughing at one point and damn near broke my wrist).
Please oh please for the love of goats MORE!
PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:08am
That was by far one of the most enjoyable reads I've had in quite a while!!!! I LOVE the 5,000 Galleon bounty on Death Eater arms! That is by far the most original way to deal with Death Eaters that I have ever read. I greatly look forward to see the next installment!!!
PA
Waywren Truesong posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:56pm
*spends a while laughing hysterically*
This was just the thing to reduce finals stress. Loving it!
Garnok posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:55pm
MORE! This was getting good just as you ended it. Some of the talking back and forth was a little confusing. It jumped characters without revealing who was speaking. Other than that it is a great start.
Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:54pm
A great story, keep it up.
DrT posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:33pm
Very fun story. Great use of Padfoot, and of course of the two boys from Luton! I have some idea about what you've written about writing. I know I am still 'epic-ed' out myself. Still, some ideas still beg to be written. . . .
Tira Misu posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:32pm
I think I love this more than I've ever loved anything you've written before. And I REALLY love your other fics. But this? This totally owns me.
mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:29pm
Um how is this worse? And Um... do you plan more for this story or is it just as is? cause really I could do more with these kind of stories with the laughter and all. By the way great chapter.
Vincent posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:26pm
*Blinks several times in a row*....Harry asking the Twins for help?
Is he insane or something. (then again it Is Hogwarts, a place where insanity is the norm)
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:04am