Rick D Gale posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:05pm

I LOVE IT! and I can't wait for the next chapter!

I only have one comment to make - and I may be mistaken. I always thought the dark mark was on the Left arm (refering to the line: Karkaroff was lodging elsewhere, as really didn’t want anyone collecting the bounty on his right arm).

But really - who cares! It's your story and you can put the dark mark where ever you want!

Thank you for all your great stories and for hosting this site.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

Ali posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:02pm

It is a bit rougher than some of your prior works, but still enjoyable. I stand by what I said in response to your explanation - don't sell yourself short. You're not a crap writer.

This was a fun romp, and I'm interested in seeing what else you've got planned. It reminds me a lot, stylistically, of This Means War, which was also a story of yours I had a blast reading. I hope you keep it up, and you have fun writing this.

Kat Traxx posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:32pm

Positively brilliant! I've never actually seen this approach taken before and not only was it extremely well written, but I was very sad to see only one chapter so far. Thanks for making me smile and laugh!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:27pm

Tim,
Though the years I have enjoyed your writing very much. This new work is off to a good start, and I look forward to more.
Thank you very much,
John

Wookie13 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:18pm

Nicely done! I look forward to the coming chapters! I believe this is the first story of this kind that I've read and while I don't usually post comments this is a great beginning. I love your other work as well. Hope and TMW are 2 of my favorites.

jenks posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:13pm

Oh man this one is a winner!Love what you've got so far.Hope to see more soon.

rkwahl83 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:12pm

I like this twist on Tri-Wiz. I hope to see more of this story.

Vandrvekn posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 7:02pm

Love this. Harry's always needed professional help, I just never pictured Fred and George getting it for him. Wonder if they'll hire Luna as his press secretary.

Shepherd posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:30pm

Nice beginning. I'll definitely be eagerly awaiting future chapters.

247sleeper posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:55pm

Another great story by - You!

Thanks so much :)

Concealed Convict posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:50pm

Is it inappropriate to cheer? Amazing start, good sir, and one I hope will develop into an equally entertaining story. I love the fact that you aren't taking this seriously, and have let your mind run wild. It's ... epic.

Thanks for writing
Keep up the good work and update soon
C-C

Jamie Meeks posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:48pm

I find myself quite entertained with your "shitty" writing... we must have different ideas about quality. Sure, this particular story is a little over the top (as I'm sure you intended...) but I love it anyway - or perhaps that's why I love it. I do hope more of this will be available soon. No pressure, though.

Rob Roy Baars posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:46pm

Just wow, really nice

Papa MidNite posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:37pm

Awesome story and a really fun read

Galantdramon posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:17pm

Oh
My
God
*falls out of chair laughing*
I don't care if it's not the most polished work since that dude shaking a spear, it's funny, I like it, please, do, continue to write funny stuff...heck, even more of this would be nice but you're the writer, so in the end its up to you

Ladynero posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:16pm

*howls with laughter* Oh man! I'm totally *Loving* this story and can't wait to see what happens next. Fred and George should be named Janus. Or Chaos.

thanatos posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:00pm

dear god man, couldn't stop laughing the entire way through! awesome new story you've got up :D

Trscroggs posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:55pm

You're right it is over the top, but it is a good over the top. Loving this story so far and I can't wait to see what the twins, and by extensino Harry, get into next.

Mark Safransky posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:53pm

LOL! This was hilarious. One of better efforts of late. Say, wasn't Gibbons one of those "I was under the Imperious" Death Eaters? I hope that will come out in the Daily Prophet when it's reported that someone sent his arm as proof. Can you imagine the dust up in the Ministry when that comes out? Oh boy, is that going to good. Love all the help Gred and Forge subcontracted. This is going to be one wild year, can't wait to read more. Bring it on!!

drgonzo2 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:48pm

Truly a GREAT start! I hope your muse likes this one, as it would be a shame to see it abandoned.

Cheers... G