Carlos posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 1:41am

Awesome. Simply awesome!

Finn posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 12:41am

Very enjoyable - I always like Harry gets a brain - or someone gives him one - type stories. Thanks for posting

traveller posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 12:04am

Oh, this is going to be a good one, I can tell.

Glad to see you returned to the 'writing for my own pleasure'; those stories (outside of a certain segment that will not be mentioned or we'll be Sue-ed (pun intended, even if it's really bad)) are usually the best.

And to be honest, I've always enjoyed your 'flaws'.

Write on, Maestro, and bring us a work of enjoyment.

Celexs posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:41pm

I like this idea i think it will be a great read. I have enjoyed reading your other stories and look forward to seeing whatever you put out in the future.

Cel

scott2 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:25pm

Classic! The 'hiring' aspect has been done but usually to turn harry into a lean, mean, killing machine, getting fred and george as 'Life coach's' is unique and kind of scary :) looking forward to more.

kartal posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:25pm

I love this story! I've been reading fanfiction for almost 18 years now, and this just went into my top ten favorites list. I truly hope you continue this, but even if you leave it at a one-shot it's still great! Thanks for making me laugh out loud when I've been sick for the last three weeks!

Carol Layland posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 11:00pm

Hi, I just love this story. I laughed and chuckled all the way through and I do hope that the rest of this story can be posted very soon Carol>clayva10@yahoo.com

dianaanne posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:51pm

You've done it again, Tim! (I'm one of Michelle's friends and am so glad she introduced me to your writing. Can't wait to see the results of Sirius' meeting with Dumbledore.)

Anne

cherrypit8 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:44pm

This is great! I'm glad to see another story from you. No worries about the light or non beta'ing...your writing is entertainment at its best. Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Happy writing!

laochodia posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:43pm

Please please write more of this....I love the way you are writing the twins, and the entire concept is wholeheartedly amusing.

Grace Cole posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:35pm

This is hilarious!!!! I am so glad that you are writing this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

athenewolfe posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:29pm

I LOVED THIS

Sashi posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 10:27pm

Let's see: Funny? Check. Interesting take on a Harry standard plot? Check. Over the top and yet reasonable characterizations? Check. Smoothest editing job ever? Ok, there you've got me. Still, given the first three, you think we care about the fourth?

Look, I write and edit for a friggin' living. Would I want to do it as my hobby? HELL no, that's why there's cupcakes in the oven, three kinds of filling in the fridge and five new cookbooks on the way from Amazon. Do what you love for the love of it, and please keep sharing it with the rest of us!

aemilyl24 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:41pm

Awesome chapter! I love this premise. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the great work!

ThunderGod posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:32pm

really enjoyed this story, had a laugh and can't wait for more..I read your stories because they are funny, and entertaining..You are a great writer

Timbo

Knolli posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 9:16pm

I LOVE it! Please More!

LifeScientist posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:34pm

Brilliant! This is hysterical and up to your normal high standards with respect to plotting and flow. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of this and thank you for an awesome read.
Matt

djo posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:24pm

You just confirmed why I regard you as (at least) one of the best fan fic authors in the HP world! I really loved this - it's so over the top that it's probable again!

Flamefoxrose posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:12pm

Thank you for this great story. I really like Fred and George explain and helping Harry. And showing Harry for are his real friends are. I eagerly await the next chapter.

David Drum posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 8:11pm

Hot Damn! That is one hell of a story!