VelvetMouse posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:56am for Chapter 2

My abdomen is sore from giggling the WHOLE WAY THROUGH THIS.

And that, perhaps, is the best compliment I can give. :)

(As I've said before, I read things because they entertain me. And this is sure entertaining the heck outta me! Can't wait to see more!)

coronal posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:56am for Chapter 2

wow. this is just flippin' cool. i got nothing else to add.

RobF posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:53am for Chapter 2

Great chapter. I loved the way Harry handled the first task, and can't wait to see what he has planned for the second.

Lokilos posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:50am for Chapter 2

Nope, you were wrong. I loved this part just as much as the first part. The dragon thing was great and the interactions with Gabrielle are fun to read. Can't wait for the next chapter.

ToriCat posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:44am for Chapter 2

This is absolutely awesome, as all your other works are!!!
Love it and can't wait for more updates from you!!!

XanDutch posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:42am for Chapter 2

Lovely chapter again. I enjoyed reading it.

smoss posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:32am for Chapter 2

Dude, we need more

bertovia posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:30am for Chapter 2

Another great chapter. I really like this Harry, he's funny, devil-may-care, and there's none of the angst we usually see in him. I like how he's adopted Gabrielle as his little sister, and made his "employees" his friends. I like this story a lot, and look forward to the next chapter.

Tira Misu posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:29am for Chapter 2

You win at life.

Sonicdale posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:29am for Chapter 2

Awesome work. I've noticed the theme of growing up - especially Harry - in your work. This time around is a bit more nutty than some of your other work, and that is a good thing.

I'm a bit curious as to a few characters that havent shown up yet ... but I can wait. Good work.

JaCee2u posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:27am for Chapter 2

Awesome. I like that you got away from the obvious choice of Millicent as the female bodyguard, and went for speed as opposed to brute force. I wasn't expecting it, I must admit.

Adding in Gabrielle as an "affection interest" was an amusing way to go about bringing her into the story as well.

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

JaCee

Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:23am for Chapter 2

Why has no one collected the bounty on Snape yet? He is wearing the dark mark. Also since harry can speak to snakes why could he not speak to a dragon after all unless mistaken both snakes and dragons are reptiles.

Love the story, looking forward to more.

Ruth Smith posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:19am for Chapter 2

Brilliant! Certainly not disappointed!

Chris15 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:19am for Chapter 2

Nice chapter.

Really enjoy this more mature Harry who is dealing with his problems but also having a good time with his friends. Usually when Harry grows up stories have him isolated and training full time, but you have him effectively using his resources and delegating most of the day to day operations and only handling new things.

Like the character of Christophe, is Harry planning a brewery, Vineyard, or something similar. Might be nice if their was a magical wine to go along with Fire Whiskey and Butterbeer.

The Gabrielle interaction was cute, though I do wonder who will be Harry's chosen hostage since he and Ron haven't made up.

More soon please.

Tiberianfest posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:18am for Chapter 2

such a good story, i cant wait for the next chapter.

jesterod posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:17am for Chapter 2

i so love this story and i hope you continue it after harry leaves hogwarts

cmzanna posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:16am for Chapter 2

So happy to see more of this story from you, and any work from you is a welcome break for me. Great description of Dobby's joy after Harry thanked him and of course the whole scene with the dragon had me laughing. You've got such a gift for making me believe what you're writing. Thanks.

DragoFlare posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:09am for Chapter 2

This was another enjoyable chapter. Great work as Uasual.

DJ posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:08am for Chapter 2

Thanks Tim.

Crys posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:07am for Chapter 2

Oh, and Lisa's "handle" is Squisher? *grin*