wuoreb posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:31pm for Chapter 2
I am really enjoying this. Can't wait to read more.
Professor Complexity posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:27pm for Chapter 2
I had tonnes of fun reading this, it reminds me of the time when I first read "This Means War", I couldn't stop reading it, and still heartily enjoy it.
Keep up for good work :)
Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:20pm for Chapter 2
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!!!! just thought you should know
millercommamatt posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:10pm for Chapter 2
Thank you for the translations at the end of the chapter. You saved me from some quality time with google translate.
Icecube posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:04pm for Chapter 2
Good work as always. I especially enjoyed the more sedated pace compared with the first. It's nice to see an Harry that is starting to use his supposed fortune and fame in his favour and not stay put and wait for the inevitable trouble. The only flaw that i could find is the characterization of Fleur; i can understand that in GOF her character is really similar to the spoiled and superficial one of this chap, but to me it seemed to be represented a little bit in a too extreme way. Perhaps I can be found at fault since she is one of my favourite character, but in my opinion this is falling a tad too much in the bashing's clichè.
Btw congratulation for another enjoyable work.
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:04pm for Chapter 2
I still like this story and as I said before, if you have fun writing, we certainly have fun reading.
carolinakitty posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:02pm for Chapter 2
ahh.. great as usual. I like Playful, confident, good with kids Harry.
mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:02pm for Chapter 2
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Two great stories one that hasn't been posted in a long time or the new one. My mind is in a tizzy. Great job. Awaiting more at your posting discretion.
Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:57pm for Chapter 2
I would have thought in the first French phrase it was rien est impossible but it has been a while. Nice development of the story although it strikes me that you've taken Gred and Forge from the Perfect Situations universe and brought them here in a new and fun way. Your OCs (eg Melissa, Christophe, et al) work well in the context of your tale, so kudos for that. I wish I could found something more critical to say but will have to content myself with the thought that I am happy to be along on your ride (although I do prefer Perfect Slytherins).
wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:53pm for Chapter 2
So this will be a harry/fluer romance?
jdekke posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:49pm for Chapter 2
I liked this chapter. It was more relaxed. The first one you added so much in from what I could gather 1 week. This was a little slower but better in my opinion. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for chapter 3 or Perfect Slytherins Year 3.
lilskippy posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:49pm for Chapter 2
Hmm yeah ok I have to say that was a good chapter, I dunno what you were thinking Tim but this story is great even if it is only the second chapter. At this point these are the kind of stories I enjoy reading. Taake the characters and change it up. As usual great job.
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:45pm for Chapter 2
Fantastic Chapter!!!! Great way to start my day with laughter!!!!
Silo posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:44pm for Chapter 2
i hope to see more posting from u soon y dont u post 2 chapters at a time
Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:38pm for Chapter 2
Just joyful - I have this smile plastered all over my face reading the conversation with Hermione, and the whole thing with 'rescuing' Gabrielle, teaching her magic and sharing with his friends tightens up my throat.
thanks for a masterful story.
John Conner posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:37pm for Chapter 2
Another fun chapter. I know you said in your notes that you where surprised that this was so well recieved. Don't be, it's a great story and it's a lot of fun. Keep up the great work.
Dave Harris posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:36pm for Chapter 2
Thanks for sharing yet more of this story. In many ways it reminds me of some of the cavalier Harry that you wrote in the last portions of This Means War, where he realises that he can have fun even if he does have to kick Voldie's ass.
Nevertheless, it still reads like a unique approach. Recently I don't think I've read this sort of light-comedy proactive!Harry for a long time, as many of the newly-written fics that go back as far as the TriWizard Tournament are heavier on the manipulative!Dumbledore or confrontational/betrayed Harry feelings or utilise rather a lot of sarcasm; from that perspective, this is very refreshing.
Looking forward to the next Chapter, though if you're starting Year 3 of Perfect Slytherins I certainly think it's a good use of the time instead! :)
Charles Newton posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:35pm for Chapter 2
Still want a HarryHarem that includes Hermione NOT a sister, but you da boss...Excellent work here; the little healing smooch from Gabrielle a foreshadowing of something?
And excellent news about The Return To The Perfect Slytherins; it's on my daily check for updates file.
marcelhm posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:27pm for Chapter 2
enjoyed the interaction with Gabriele a lot. so I am curious as to what your thoughts behind it all are. Also nice to see a story where dumbles isn't just a manipulation jackass.
carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:19pm for Chapter 2
I'm throughly enjoying this Harry. He reminds me somewhat of a cross between Tony Stark and Bruce Wayne with a bit of Deadpool's sense of humor thrown in. I appreciate your willingness to keep sharing your writing with us and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter of this and of Konoha's Legion