Orion posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:10am for Chapter 2
Great! Lots of fun to read. Thanks for the update.
Silly_Billy posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:08am for Chapter 2
Once again - a lot of fun!
I had to read this, even though I had to go to work early.
Who needs money anyway?
LifeScientist posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:02am for Chapter 2
Great job on this! Though the end of ch1 was awesome and I certainly hope that there will be more visits to that whether with kate's help or not, you did a great job with Harry in this chapter. Most definitely looking forward to more.
Thanks as always for your excellent efforts.
Oldwolf posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:55am for Chapter 2
Another superb chapter.
Dumbledore getting a PR lesson? Unusual, but nice to see the old boy getting a reminder of the basics.
I wonder how poor Draco is feeling now that his former protection is likely considering the possibility of him being another paycheck?
All in all, as good a chapter as I've seen in a long time from anyone.
Kathleen posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:52am for Chapter 2
Very interesting! Showmanship -- what a great idea! The Gabrielle connection is intriguing -- loved your Gabby bond story. Are you hinting at the possibility of that in the future?
Ps slytherins story update next? Hurray!
MadMax666 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:47am for Chapter 2
What's not to like about this chapter? I thought it was great! Especially how Harry 'defeated' the Dragon...it's not magic, it's all smoke and mirrors...oh, and ignore that barmy old man behind the curtain. He only thinks he's pulling the strings.
Great to see you writing again. Keep up the good work.
Ian Major posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:47am for Chapter 2
Wow, for a chapter you think people would be disappointed in, this was great! If this is what you think will disappoint, please go ahead and keep disappointing me ;)
Anniejay posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:45am for Chapter 2
Brilliant funny and I look forward to the next chapter
zac posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:35am for Chapter 2
This is probably the best new story that I've read in a long time. Thank you so much for taking the time to enrich our lives with your incredible storytelling. I am always excited when I see that you have updated one of your stories.
Michael Foerster posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:19am for Chapter 2
I bow to your genius! wow, if this is Hogwarts' Dawn, what's afterwards?
-- Beauxbatons High-noon, then Drumstrangs Dusk? --
Just kidding. You do your thing as the muse frolics for you, and I'll read, amazed by your extraordinary work.
Thanks for sharing.
zoroz posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:19am for Chapter 2
awesome chapter, thanx for the update. please keep going this is one of the most original fic's ive read in a long while :)
patrick1 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:16am for Chapter 2
I rather enjoy this style of story, its a lot of fun to read. keep up the good work.
Celevon posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:00am for Chapter 2
Another excellent chapter! Thanks!
Aote77 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:50am for Chapter 2
Nice, another great chapter. I look forward to future ones.
millie johanson posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:44am for Chapter 2
I am a real H&G fan and just finished your This is in the "Drabbles and Ideas" Second Time Around I hope some day you will add to it.
but back to this story just wanted you to know I am a fan of your stories.
I like the was the detailes that the twins have put into helping Harry and the people who wanted to help and for different reasons.
Good luck with it and all you write.
blackdog posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:34am for Chapter 2
Yes this was absolutely terrible... so much so that I cannot wait for the next installment... patiently ;)
tony s posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:29am for Chapter 2
LOL. I rather liked this chapter. I honestly don't think you've lost your touch...just changed it a bit. Write because you enjoy it. Leave the critiquing to us. Cuz thats what we enjoy. Good work, and i look forward to the next part of Perfect Slytherins.
Lordamnesia posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:26am for Chapter 2
Great new chapter, I love the interaction between Gabrielle and Harry the best. It's very much like a family starved person like Harry to help a little adopted sister like that, and Gabrielle's response to what she see's as most likely her Knight in Shining Armor is perfect.
Can't see what your so down on about this story. Yes, it's not serious, yes it's a bit different then what you normally have written, but what I don't think you realize is that your quality of writing sure as hell hasn't gone down, and your dry humor works exceedingly well. Keep up the incredible work, cause I sure as hell look forward to the next chapter!
Zooxle posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:23am for Chapter 2
Wow, it was only about 2 weeks (if that many) since HD chapter1 was released. I love this story. Gabrielle is so cute in there.
I see you are going to update Perfect Slytherins as well, so you get...... BONUS POINTS.......
Anyway just wanted to say, you work is great, update more frequently than many other authors and write fantastic stories. I for one can't wait to see what you produce next.
Professor_Chris posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:16am for Chapter 2
Another great chapter... Wow is Dumbledore stupid or what??? Looking forward to seeing what happens.