ophelia frank posted a comment on Tuesday 25th May 2010 1:36am for Chapter 2
Hey, Wow great I loved this soo much and can't wait till you do post the next chapter!! But I can wait if you are working on your other works...still absolutely loving this so thanks for sharing! :)
James7964 posted a comment on Monday 24th May 2010 8:40pm for Chapter 2
Love the story. I have missed your writing and am thrilled at the path that this one is taking. It's great to finally read a new plot line for HP, something that hasn't been done over and over till its dead. Keep it up.
Tlcatlady posted a comment on Monday 24th May 2010 6:25am for Chapter 2
Love this! I especially enjoy Harry teaching Gabrielle to do the "impossible". :) I'm glad you decided to keep going with this, it's truly a brilliant read! TLC
Rob Shell posted a comment on Monday 24th May 2010 2:28am for Chapter 2
This is a great story so far. I like the way Harry is handling growing up. Anything including Gred and Forge is bound to be either incredibly stupid or incredibly brillant, possibly both. I like the fact that they used loyalty as a reason to help Harry and phase Ron out. The way I see it, while he will always be thier brother, Ron had his shot and blew it so they feel no remorse over replacing Ron as Harry's mates and the paycheck isn't too bad either. Though I choose to believe that they would have done this without the paycheck, it's just easier if they can pay for all the thing they need to teach Harry and keep him alive. Anyways, keep up the great work, I'm always willing to read anything you write.
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Saturday 22nd May 2010 8:26pm for Chapter 2
Excellent. And so much fun even when it's serious.
Love Gabbi. I hope Harry's not just leading her on.....
Thanks for the story. Looking forward to more.
71_scorpio posted a comment on Saturday 22nd May 2010 7:45pm for Chapter 2
*SMOOCH!* Love, love, love this story. You've taken the whole concept of Harry hiring out bodygaurds & tutors and made it wacky, fun, and super shiny!
I adore Crusher & Smasher and how they've turned Crabbe & Goyle into thier apprentices. *giggles* Usually when you see those two in a fic, they're very flat and 2D. These guys are funny & likeable, if a bit dim.
I got a laugh out of the DE bounty only being for the arm & not the whole person. *snort* I keep picturing a bunch of one armed wizards wandering around trying to make up believable stories about what happened without admitting that they were captured for the DE bounty.
I also like your take on Gabby & Fluer. I adore a bitchy Fluer and yours' is perfect. And Gabby, I could just eat her up she's so sweet. Thank you for posting, I can hardly wait for more.
Ryder654 posted a comment on Friday 21st May 2010 9:41pm for Chapter 2
another hit keep up the good work.
Hagrid posted a comment on Friday 21st May 2010 5:01am for Chapter 2
Yer know, its hard ter type with tears of laughter rolling down yer face, but I just had ter let yeh know that this story in'int over the top as yer put it, its Over The Moon it is. Never knew why 'Arry EVER forgave the red weasel for doubtin' him in them books by JKR. I were there, I saw how hurt young 'Arry looked, how hurt he was when his so called friends turned there ruddy backs on 'im. You keep spreadin' the truth.
Markus Gabler posted a comment on Thursday 20th May 2010 3:53pm for Chapter 2
this story proofs once more for me why you're on the top ten of the list of my favorite FF authors (Hope still holds place 1 on my favourite story list). I'm quite curious where thoose relationsships are heading to.
I'm realy, realy looking forward to the next chapter....
Keep up your fascinating work, please!
h_p4eva posted a comment on Thursday 20th May 2010 12:09pm for Chapter 2
Another great chapter I love your work. You might not think much of this story but personally I think you are a genius and this is the best story Ive read for a while keep up the good work.
Ranglar posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 8:35pm for Chapter 2
Yes! I really like Perfect Slytherins (and everything else you write, including this story, of course). The first story of yours I read was TMW when I was a die-hard Harry/Ginny fan, but you've managed to make me like all kinds of other pairings as well.
Bashalinge posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 5:38am for Chapter 2
loving the new Harry keep the story running I await the next chapter
adun007 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 1:07am for Chapter 2
This piece of literature is very well written. I read something about it being boring but actually I was having a fun and interesting read. although you might call it less than your average level of work, personally, the quality is up there with This Means War.
SirKaid posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 3:24pm for Chapter 2
Gabrielle is absolutely adorable. I also like that you're including Harry's teaching abilities. Far too few authors recognize that Harry's an incredible tutor - after all, he took Neville from loser to sword-swinging hero in half a year. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Patrick Rice posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 12:14pm for Chapter 2
Another great chapter. I really like the way you have written Harry's relationship with Gabby. I have always liked Gabrielle, and have loved the way you have written her in other stories. This is the best use of her child character that I have read.
Thanks again for sharing this story with us.
johncgardiner posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 2:43am for Chapter 2
Very good read thank you
Anthony May posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 5:19pm for Chapter 2
As always, a brilliant chapter! Great story, I can't wait for Fleur to let her guard down and let Harry in. Keep up the great work!
WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 2:57pm for Chapter 2
I really like what Harry's doing for Gabrielle! He's a really good big brother. He should teach more students.
He's also a really good boss, I think, haha! And a great chooser of friends...
Great story, anyway, and I'd like to read more of you soon!
Zicou posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 9:59am for Chapter 2
I can't wait to read more so...
nothorse posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 8:06am for Chapter 2
I really like what you're doing. It is kind of a wish fulfillment fantasy, but it is very well done.
I wonder how you want to turn Fleur around. If you want to do so. I don't really remember herfrom canon so I don't know whether the portrayal is accurate. If it is, making friends with the annoying litle sister is probably going to deepen the dislike for Harry.