Gamegeek posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:04pm for Chapter 2
Excellent chapter, eagerly awaiting more :).
Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:56pm for Chapter 2
Ab fab, again! This is fun. Thanks for the update, Tim.
Ravenfur posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:52pm for Chapter 2
Awww, I love your little Gabrielle! This is a story I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of. Thanks for this chapter and I can't wait to see what comes next!
andy redfearn posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:47pm for Chapter 2
Amazing as always.... dont think ive ever read a piece of your harry potter fanfics i didnt like.. every one of them is a joy to read.. thanks!
Tanaxanth posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:45pm for Chapter 2
Now see Tim, when cookies crumble it makes you want another one and then another and another.
I enjoyed this chapter as I did the last.
To quote Oliver, "Please sir may I have more?"
David3 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:38pm for Chapter 2
I'm really loving this fic. It's fun. It's enjoyable. I can't wait for more.
mrrlyn posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:36pm for Chapter 2
This just keeps getting better and better! I love it! I know that we our worst critics. But dont put your stuf down. this is awesome. All of your work, even the stuff you think is crap is a million times better than 95% of the stuff that is out there. There is a reason why I have heard you referred to as the "god of fanfic" on several differnet forums. and like most when I introduce some to fanfic, I always point them at your works first.
elementalmoon posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:36pm for Chapter 2
I liked this chapter! It wasn't disappointing in the slightest, at least to me :D I can't wait for more from this and your other fics. Especially Perfect Slytherins. Out of curiosity, will you be continuing the Matryoshka Vingettes? I know it says it's complete, but I always thought it had some loose ends. Either way, I love your writing and can't wait to see whatever you have in store for us!
red jacobson posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:24pm for Chapter 2
All I can say is "Remind me to use squished more in everyday conversation"
"Yes Boss" LOL!!!!!!!!!!
Another enjoyable chapter, and if Harry isn't careful, he's going to have Gabrielle as his girlfriend instead of Fleur, and that's a bit EEWWW! *GRIN*
Thanks for the chapter
Clell65619 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:21pm for Chapter 2
This is great. Honestly I'd forgotten what happened in chapter one, so I got the pleasure of rereading the first part of this masterpiece. Harry's accumulation of employees and buddies is a wonder to behold.
- How long until the bulk of the crowd at the tasks are in the employ of House Potter?
- I do believe that having Harry toss the egg into a wine cask is the most original method of letting the egg tell it's tale I've ever seen.
- Very well done.
Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:06pm for Chapter 2
xD Awesome, although there's a certain lack of conflict.