Esus posted a comment on Monday 4th July 2011 1:33pm for Princess
I personally think it's a shame that you discontinued this story. There is conflict in this story, it's just you skipped all of it. You say you wanted to do a piece where Harry went after the unattainable, but already have him snag her in the beginning of the story... This would've been a very fun read if you had shown each stage of his pursuit.
demonheir24 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd May 2011 10:37pm for Princess
I think I would have loved to read this simply for comedy purposes. It's funny.
Crystallina posted a comment on Friday 13th May 2011 9:46pm for Princess
That was totally hysterical. I laughed so much.
EnderWiggin posted a comment on Monday 25th April 2011 6:15pm for Princess
I only have one thing to say, Best Goblin Name Ever!!!
I swear that the following spittake and coughing/choaking fit lasted a good 10 minutes and had me fearing for my life. Well done. :)
wolfey posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd March 2011 10:48am for Princess
this is actually a good idea in general but you rushed it. You could have made it a whole romance story as you stretched out his courtship and all the obstacles he had to barrel through to get her to love him and to date her.
thaumologist posted a comment on Wednesday 16th March 2011 11:41pm for Princess
Doesn't need conflict, I really enjoyed Harry being... well, Harry.
Only seen him act like this in a few fics, but they normally read really well, for the most part because they're fun to read - lighthearted, lots of laughter material, and no big words.
noylj posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 10:41pm for Princess
I don't need drama.
Story was going along just fine.
Would liked to have read about the elimination of all Malfoys and Unbridges from the magical world.
lwj2 posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 4:00am for Princess
That's great. Thanks for putting it up for us.
A suggestion for a side-story, of sorts, after the wedding -- HM's interview with her Minister of Magic and her Prime Minister and what follows thereafter.
kyoshi posted a comment on Wednesday 19th January 2011 4:58am for Princess
Wonderful story. But your right too sweet, needs a little conflict.
Elfstones52 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th January 2011 1:42am for Princess
This was a very good plot bunny! I was laughing for most of it, and had a smile on my face the whole time. While I do love serious fics, it is great to read some funny, happy ones as well. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more!
LordSia posted a comment on Thursday 9th December 2010 2:21am for Princess
I love this Harry. It's... Refreshing, to have such crazy awesome, without involving neither Azkaban nor dozens of ancient sorcerers shoving their knowledge and power into his skull, purely "4 73 LulZ".
Pity you didn't want to continue it.
Quincy posted a comment on Tuesday 30th November 2010 11:05am for Princess
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Why did you have to stop it there?
It's character driven and so long as you can keep it funny and furiously paced it will be entertaining,
I mean it's 4 am and I have a really important paper I should be writing, but I enjoyed it the entire way through.
jimmycranberry posted a comment on Saturday 23rd October 2010 11:55pm for Princess
You truly are a genius, you know that? Truly awesome, had me howling with laughter in many a place!
t3h_shammy posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 7:37am for Princess
the sad thing is you just told us what happened, i just love your writing style and want you to write the ending!
dmacx posted a comment on Tuesday 27th July 2010 4:06pm for Princess
I have to agree with Abraxan. This should be continued.
Not every story needs dramatic tension and conflict to be good, and I'm perfectly happy to read about perfect characters in some cases. This is one of those cases.
As a semi-crack!fic, this was brilliant. I got a real kick out of most of the dialog, and I love love the occasional story where Harry basically steamrolls anything that gets in his way.
In fact, I liked this more than 'Hope', and I enjoyed 'Hope' quite a bit.
Please consider continuing this.
Abraxan posted a comment on Monday 26th July 2010 8:28am for Princess
I wish you'd finish this one. Such a good read!
WingedEagle posted a comment on Tuesday 6th July 2010 12:23am for Princess
YOU CAN"T JUST LEAVE IT UNFINISHED!!!
bertovia posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd June 2010 1:54pm for Princess
I know you said, there was no conflict and the characters are all perfect, but I admit, I really like the way you write happy, powerful Harry. Any woman is going to have to be close to perfect to live in the presence of someone like him, even if he just wants normal. I just smile when I read these stories, and I hope to read more like them from you. Though a little conflict isn't a bad thing.
Ryder654 posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 1:36am for Princess
I completly understand why you chose to kill this story but a part of me still wishes that you kept it going. (sighs) oh well, all things aside it was good while it lasted and I really enjoyed it thanks.
LifeScientist posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 10:24pm for Princess
I've always regretted that you stopped working on this--as a comedy piece it does very well....in a way that TMW can't simply because TMW isn't written from the first person participant perspective.