John Conner posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:37pm

Another fun chapter. I know you said in your notes that you where surprised that this was so well recieved. Don't be, it's a great story and it's a lot of fun. Keep up the great work.

Dave Harris posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:36pm

Thanks for sharing yet more of this story. In many ways it reminds me of some of the cavalier Harry that you wrote in the last portions of This Means War, where he realises that he can have fun even if he does have to kick Voldie's ass.

Nevertheless, it still reads like a unique approach. Recently I don't think I've read this sort of light-comedy proactive!Harry for a long time, as many of the newly-written fics that go back as far as the TriWizard Tournament are heavier on the manipulative!Dumbledore or confrontational/betrayed Harry feelings or utilise rather a lot of sarcasm; from that perspective, this is very refreshing.

Looking forward to the next Chapter, though if you're starting Year 3 of Perfect Slytherins I certainly think it's a good use of the time instead! :)

Charles Newton posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:35pm

Still want a HarryHarem that includes Hermione NOT a sister, but you da boss...Excellent work here; the little healing smooch from Gabrielle a foreshadowing of something?
And excellent news about The Return To The Perfect Slytherins; it's on my daily check for updates file.

marcelhm posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:27pm

enjoyed the interaction with Gabriele a lot. so I am curious as to what your thoughts behind it all are. Also nice to see a story where dumbles isn't just a manipulation jackass.

carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:19pm

I'm throughly enjoying this Harry. He reminds me somewhat of a cross between Tony Stark and Bruce Wayne with a bit of Deadpool's sense of humor thrown in. I appreciate your willingness to keep sharing your writing with us and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter of this and of Konoha's Legion

Gamegeek posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:04pm

Excellent chapter, eagerly awaiting more :).

Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:56pm

Ab fab, again! This is fun. Thanks for the update, Tim.

Ravenfur posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:52pm

Awww, I love your little Gabrielle! This is a story I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of. Thanks for this chapter and I can't wait to see what comes next!

andy redfearn posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:47pm

Amazing as always.... dont think ive ever read a piece of your harry potter fanfics i didnt like.. every one of them is a joy to read.. thanks!

Tanaxanth posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:45pm

Now see Tim, when cookies crumble it makes you want another one and then another and another.
I enjoyed this chapter as I did the last.
To quote Oliver, "Please sir may I have more?"

David3 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:38pm

I'm really loving this fic. It's fun. It's enjoyable. I can't wait for more.

mrrlyn posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:36pm

This just keeps getting better and better! I love it! I know that we our worst critics. But dont put your stuf down. this is awesome. All of your work, even the stuff you think is crap is a million times better than 95% of the stuff that is out there. There is a reason why I have heard you referred to as the "god of fanfic" on several differnet forums. and like most when I introduce some to fanfic, I always point them at your works first.

elementalmoon posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:36pm

I liked this chapter! It wasn't disappointing in the slightest, at least to me :D I can't wait for more from this and your other fics. Especially Perfect Slytherins. Out of curiosity, will you be continuing the Matryoshka Vingettes? I know it says it's complete, but I always thought it had some loose ends. Either way, I love your writing and can't wait to see whatever you have in store for us!

red jacobson posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:24pm

All I can say is "Remind me to use squished more in everyday conversation"
"Yes Boss" LOL!!!!!!!!!!

Another enjoyable chapter, and if Harry isn't careful, he's going to have Gabrielle as his girlfriend instead of Fleur, and that's a bit EEWWW! *GRIN*

Thanks for the chapter

red

Clell65619 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:21pm

This is great. Honestly I'd forgotten what happened in chapter one, so I got the pleasure of rereading the first part of this masterpiece. Harry's accumulation of employees and buddies is a wonder to behold.

- How long until the bulk of the crowd at the tasks are in the employ of House Potter?

- I do believe that having Harry toss the egg into a wine cask is the most original method of letting the egg tell it's tale I've ever seen.

- Very well done.

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:06pm

xD Awesome, although there's a certain lack of conflict.

cjonbloodletter posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 1:34am

awesomeness acheived

flymolo42 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 7:00pm

It's not studious literature, but I love it. It would be funny if Draco tries to hire advisors to copy Harry, but I can't think of who they should be.

Anxiously waiting for more.

DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 1:58pm

You know, if this Ginny really is 'the psycho-stalker from hell', then she will notice that the twins are arranging Harry's 'romantic education' and will be really peeved about not being included. . . .

Geddon posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 11:17am

Nice to see some new fics from you, good work as always.