Slytherin66 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:42pm

This chapter was so good it was such a nice surprise that Gabrielle was involved I like her as a character and think she, her sister and the Veela got a bad deal in the books and are often forgotten. A great start to the chapter poor Gabrielle being bored and locked away I have wondered what happend to her during the tournament, now I know.

Harry looking after and teaching Gabrielle was very cute and could be the start of big changes to how kids learn magic. Harry's thinking on magic and how to teach it was very insightful. Looking after Gabrielle showed that Harry has much love to give if he is given a chance to show it . The mini Hogwarts Uniform was a nice touch did Dobby make it? Will Gabrielle get a wand of her own maybe with a hair from Harry as its core.

Harry's bodyguards continue to impress and I like the fact they will be using more words Squished does need to be used more often but whammy-thing was my favourite. Lisa as a bodyguard is a clever idea to have a girl around to counter the Veela charm she will be Squishing the hopes and dreams of many girls if Harry keeps putting on such a great show. I hope Ginny gets Squished at some point and it would cut down on the number of crazy fangirls

Thrasher carrying Gabrielle was a nice detail to have I hope when the Headmaster tries to kidnap her for the second task he loose more repsect and maybe gets his wand and arm broken or maybe Madame Maxime will just beat him up.

The first task was brilliant and the Headmaster loosing respect is always good the fact he was hissed at was a good and did make him look more like a Villain, Harry might end up checking under Gabrielle's bed for the evil villain Dumbledore. A most logical and clever way to deal with the dragon and manipulate the press and the people.

Harry's wine spell is such a good one and the party was good I liked how the golden egg was worked out. Fleur's attitude and her being thought a brat was funny.

I hope the Dark Lords followers continue to be hunted and the other Dark Lord Dumbledore continues to loose power and influence.

Going to Beauxbatons would be safer and I think far better than Hogwarts. It is good that Harry's House has shown their true colours it was never a very nice House to be in for several people but Harry would have been better off elsewhere and a story without Ron and Ginny is always good. I like this more mature Harry it makes him a more interesting character and gives him some depth and it is a welcome and rare change that Harry is happy.

A touching end to the chapter I look forward to the next chapter I love this one from start to finish but I also look forward to the start of year 3 of Perfect Slytherins.

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:38pm

-blink blink-

I am not just impressed, I am DAMNED impressed by this chapter.

Wow!

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:38pm

Not bad, but I didn't laugh as much as the first.

JoFarries posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:34pm

Yea! Another chapter of this terrific story! I'm really liking the way that Harry is getting on with the students from the other schools. And I'm liking how you fit Gabrielle into this, making her a sort of "little sister" to the group. Dumbledore is being an ass, which is to be expected. Manipulative old sod. Loving the original characters, and how you're fitting them in with the Hogwarts students, especially bringing in lesser-known students like Lisa Turpin. Extra points for that, I think. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:31pm

I'm really enjoying this story. It has interesting characterizations with fun interactions. Well done and thanks.

wuoreb posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:31pm

I am really enjoying this. Can't wait to read more.

Professor Complexity posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:27pm

I had tonnes of fun reading this, it reminds me of the time when I first read "This Means War", I couldn't stop reading it, and still heartily enjoy it.

Keep up for good work :)


Joshua

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:20pm

THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!!!! just thought you should know

millercommamatt posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:10pm

Thank you for the translations at the end of the chapter. You saved me from some quality time with google translate.

Icecube posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:04pm

Good work as always. I especially enjoyed the more sedated pace compared with the first. It's nice to see an Harry that is starting to use his supposed fortune and fame in his favour and not stay put and wait for the inevitable trouble. The only flaw that i could find is the characterization of Fleur; i can understand that in GOF her character is really similar to the spoiled and superficial one of this chap, but to me it seemed to be represented a little bit in a too extreme way. Perhaps I can be found at fault since she is one of my favourite character, but in my opinion this is falling a tad too much in the bashing's clichè.
Btw congratulation for another enjoyable work.

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:04pm

I still like this story and as I said before, if you have fun writing, we certainly have fun reading.

carolinakitty posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:02pm

ahh.. great as usual. I like Playful, confident, good with kids Harry.

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:02pm

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Two great stories one that hasn't been posted in a long time or the new one. My mind is in a tizzy. Great job. Awaiting more at your posting discretion.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:57pm

I would have thought in the first French phrase it was rien est impossible but it has been a while. Nice development of the story although it strikes me that you've taken Gred and Forge from the Perfect Situations universe and brought them here in a new and fun way. Your OCs (eg Melissa, Christophe, et al) work well in the context of your tale, so kudos for that. I wish I could found something more critical to say but will have to content myself with the thought that I am happy to be along on your ride (although I do prefer Perfect Slytherins).

wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:53pm

So this will be a harry/fluer romance?

jdekke posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:49pm

I liked this chapter. It was more relaxed. The first one you added so much in from what I could gather 1 week. This was a little slower but better in my opinion. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for chapter 3 or Perfect Slytherins Year 3.

jdekke

lilskippy posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:49pm

Hmm yeah ok I have to say that was a good chapter, I dunno what you were thinking Tim but this story is great even if it is only the second chapter. At this point these are the kind of stories I enjoy reading. Taake the characters and change it up. As usual great job.

jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:45pm

Fantastic Chapter!!!! Great way to start my day with laughter!!!!

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:44pm

i hope to see more posting from u soon y dont u post 2 chapters at a time

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:38pm

Just joyful - I have this smile plastered all over my face reading the conversation with Hermione, and the whole thing with 'rescuing' Gabrielle, teaching her magic and sharing with his friends tightens up my throat.

thanks for a masterful story.