John Wilburn posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2012 1:47am

Tim

Ok, this is the third or fifth time I've read this chapter and it's just as good every time as the first time. What I'd like to know is what happened to Chapter Six. It was here before you changed the format. I'm really enjoying this story, so Thank you very much for all the hours of enjoyment.

Sincerely,

John Wilburn

jknezek posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2012 6:56pm

I love this story and was thrilled to stumble across chapter 6 last night. A great addition and I hope it posts "for real" soon. I read it quickly while feeding my twin infant boys, so I didn't catch everything figuring I'd see it posted today. So far no luck, but I feel lucky to have read what I did.

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2012 12:24am

Great chapter but I have not gotten any alerts for this chapter from about July last year.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2012 8:52pm

Wonderful. Loved it.

The imagery of the second task was great. The fact that the Merpeople were enjoying the rides (and the squid taking two) was great.

Loved the rest, too.

Looking forward to more, and hope that tne next time you update, a notice goes out that the story was updated.

Thank you for writing!

Tom A.

mwinter posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2012 3:43am

I found that you had updated your stories from a yahoo group that I am a member of. Your site for some reason did not update that you updated. Might want to check on that cause It does seem to work for others. this chapter was great. I do hope that the time between now and the next update isn't so long. But I'll wait anyways. Of all the chapters so far this has been one of your better cliff hangers yet in the story.

red jacobson posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2012 1:12am

Nice; but you ended the chapter too soon! I'm really looking forward to Fudge and Bagman and the others getting the spanking they richly deserve

red

wolfkin posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2012 9:43pm

I didn't know you'd updated this one til I saw in on the Caer Azkaban group! Great, great update. Personally, my bet is the person in shadows at the trial is either the Queen or the PM. I love the way you handled the second task and that Fleur is finally on Harry's side. The scene with MacNair and friend was perfect. I've always loved stories showing Death Eaters not knowing how to handle a "victim" who can fight back and Harry's entrance to the Wizengamot was priceless!

Considering Harry's had nearly a week to recharge, his vengeance against the people who hurt his friends and family should be . . . messy. They had a much better chance when he was going after then immediately after the 2nd task. Oh and you never said if Malfoy's clumsiness was fatal or just crippling. Either is fine, just curious, you understand. -_^

Patiently waiting for the next chapter. ^_^

Clell65619 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2012 4:56pm

- Wonderful chapter... Oddly though this chapter doesn't show up in the index for this story and I never got an announcment for it. I only found it when I noticed what I thought was the last chapter had a 'next' option.

Anand posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2012 3:49pm

Hey, great chapter. Loved the idea of a "shelving" charm. Your take on the 2nd task was brilliant, never considered that the lake was above the Chamber. On a side note, the site didn't show chapter 6 as the latest update...

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 29th January 2012 12:21pm

I can hardly wait for more. I love all your stories and hope you can finish them. Thanks for writing. It is a joy to read.

Bigshot posted a comment on Friday 27th January 2012 12:09pm

When did you post the new chapters of Hogwart's Dawn and Konoha Legion? The bug is obviously that the alert didn't show up, but you never said anything about putting them up.

Excellent read, yet again, but I've come to expect that from your work. Can't wait for the next installment.

rkwahl83 posted a comment on Thursday 26th January 2012 10:18pm

Nice part. I like how you have Melissa handeling the trail. Can't wait to see how Fudge gets into even more trouble with the second part of the trail.

jayjons posted a comment on Thursday 19th January 2012 1:39pm

when are you going to update or complete this story? i love it

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2012 9:56pm

Wonderful, and most unexpected. The image of the draining of the lake will probably stay with me for quite a while. I like that you brought them all together as a team in this chapter. Not just the champions, but the whole gang with veela, friends, employees and students, all pulling in mostly the same direction and with lots of fun teamwork. The snubbing of Umbitch was beautifully underdone, and the whole thing with the ministry's inability to even be stupid when everyone's watching them.

Oh, and i have to mention my delight when i was re-reading Ch 5 for the umpteenth time and found a link to another one at the end. It wasn't there when i started. Since you obviously did this just for my own personal delight, i will make you king of some nice place when i take over the world.

Thanks a bunch.

g

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Saturday 14th January 2012 2:49am

What a great story and a wonderful chapter. The way Harry did the second task was a magical feat and I'm sure the audience was enjoying it. The trial was rather fun and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. Thanks for sharing!

duochanfan posted a comment on Wednesday 11th January 2012 1:23am

Awsome so far. I love the interaction between Harry and Gabrial, she is just so cute. I can not wait until I see more of this fic. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Huggles
Duochan

keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2012 7:56am

Thanks for the new chapter

I was really wondering if you had gone for objects instead of hostages... Good one here!

About the hole in the chamber of secrets... I was half expecting said hole to be made in the Slytherins' common room, as it is supposed to be under the lake ;-p

"Years one and two are yours, along with years five to eight." eight? I must have missed a book!

Wow! I've never seen so much s..t hit the fan after the second task!

I hope to read more soon! The next part of the trial should be interesting, too :-)

Addlcove posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2012 12:38pm

Hoping continuation will be comming soon :)

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2012 7:04pm

As I have said for most of your stories. Keep up the Great Work!!! I look forward to reading your stories and can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 7:22pm

-laughs uproariously- Well, now, that's a different Second Task and I do believe that it's going to give the Ministry quite the black eye as well as making Harry look very, very good to a lot of folk; that it's also put the Ministry in considerable trouble with other wizarding governments as well as with Her Majesty is even better. I reckon the British wizards are going to get quite the housecleaning out of this. In the meantime, it appears that Harry's developing quite nicely as well as developing quite the network of friends and allies. I suspect, when all is said and done, both Albus and Tom will very definitely rue the day they got Harry involved in the Tournament (and really, it's always good that the villains and incompetents rue their actions as they go down to defeat and humiliation).