Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2012 12:34am

Aaaaaah! Cliffhanger! Oh, I hope the next one comes soon! ^_-

jayjons posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2012 12:34am

ummm. i thought you posted this chapter already. maybe i read it in an email? but i have read it before.

cmzanna posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 11:32pm

so happy to see an update! the whole bit about Harry walking on the water made me grin, the descriptive images were terrific. Thanks!

loiosh posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 11:17pm

Love this new chapter it was worth the wait!

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:58pm

Wait, WHAT!?! How could you just end it like that! This was a great chapter, a beautiful chapter, and it ends in a cliffhanger! Gahhhh! So wrong! Now I have to waith MONTHS for you to upload the next one. Noooooo!!!!!!!

jilumasam posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:46pm

"And, erm, wow, what a response to the first chapter. For something that was supposed to be just a bit of fun, it grabbed a life of it's own. And I didn't think it was that good. I suspect some people will be disappointed with this chapter -"

And that is exactly why I continue to read this story and enjoy it. Because it comes across as someone writing to have fun. Really enjoyed chapter 6 and currently reading all chapters again. Thanks for writing such a silly and fun story!

BioHazard82 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:41pm

Great chapter.

Genericrandom posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:33pm

I'm thrilled to see more of this. I like where things went, and the way you've wound this setup is great. One of the best parts about this chapter is the fact that everything matched/flowed/felt contiguious from the previous chapter. Aside from how long it's been, there wasn't really a feeling that you'd updated more then a month ago or something. I suppose that could be because of how long you've been writing... but whatever. It was nice to see.

Looking forward to more as always, and thanks for wiriting this and putting it where we could read it.

scribbler posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:25pm

It's a great story and I really look forward to the next chapter. I'm disappointed, of course, that Harry's not with Hermione - but perhaps there's a chance in the future?

Anyway - very, very creative writing and a thoroughly original plot. THANK YOU for taking the time to put fingers to keyboard and share with us all!

Regards,

the_scribbler

peruvianprincess posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 10:03pm

Went back and re-read the whole story for continuity and to refresh my memory. Masterful chapter, as always. Bit of a cliffhanger there at the end. I will be looking for resolution, soon I hope. Thanks.

BioHazard82 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:47pm

Great chapter.

jgkitarel posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:28pm

Nicely done. It's interesting to see Harry play hardball in the political and legal sphere while building his own sphere of influence. The irony of this chapter comes from the fact that while the Ministry has laws, the rule of law is effectively nonexistent, much to the disgust of those in it who are honest.

Fudge overplayed his hand here and expected Harry to fold. Instead Harry didn't and is now making Fudge look even more foolish. Is Harry breaking the law? Indeed he is and it will eventually bite him. Fudge wanted an easy show trial to sweep the matter under the rug, Harry is using this to embarass a lot of people.

Amelia is in the unenviable position of having to preside over the farce.

Shepherd posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:22pm

Good chapter, although you seem to have Harry refer to Umbridge by her middle name without having first heard her middle name.

supergirl3684 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:14pm

This is too great!! I about fell out of my seat when I saw the new chapter was posted! I love how you write Harry. He's caring yet at the same time he'll do whatever it takes to take care of those he cares for. I also really like how you have those working for him coming to accept him not only as their boss but as a person, freind, and brother. This is an amzing story!

Orion posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:13pm

Great! This is a lot of fun to read, and I'm always happy to read more of anything you care to post. As always, thanks for writing, and sharing it with us. (And also thanks for the work you've put into the new version of FFA.)

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:11pm

Great update. I cant wait for more!!

Davideg posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:07pm

i love this story thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Cycla posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 8:27pm

I have always looked foward to any of your updates, and this one as with all the others delivered. The story is well writen, thought out, and followed through tiil the end. Just wish they were all longer for the simple reaosn I enjoy reading your stories.

Stick97 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 8:21pm

So glad to see this back up! I suspect the heart in the lake will have a bit to do with the plot, as well as Fleur's reaction to feeling Harry's love for her sister. I also can't wait for people to tell Fleur to stop being a leetle girl and to grow up. :) Still love the smackdown on both Percy and Umbridge. Nice work as always.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 8:10pm

Very Good chapter

I hope that Dumbledore have pay for his actions