Slytherin66 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:26pm

A fantastic story so far very clever and funny. Its great that Harry is learning all he needs and learning about woman and a girlfriend is a must. The twins were really something the way they dealt with Sirius was a joy to read "bad padfoot" The bodyguards and dark mark arms was an interesting idea. I can't wait for the next chapter this one ended well.

Bill Hagridsson posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:25pm

Fun stuff! I don't think I've ever seen this take on the Tournament. As for deep & meaningful? Meh...who needs that? I like where this one is heading and look forward to more of it.

Panaka posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:23pm

Genius, pure Genius!

miahtech posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:23pm

I love it, and look forward to more.

Dakaath@TTH posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:21pm

I like it.

Its funny to see the Twins as the genius business men they are, orchastrating everything with a showman's touch. I espeically like the bodyguards, Crusher and Smasher easily beat all those stories out there where Harry hires ex-hit wizards.

you take a cliche like bounties on death eaters and you give it a new and creative edge, Sirius using his money to prove his innocence.

Everything about this story so far has been amausing and I can't wait to see where it goes.

vheritas posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:19pm

I absolutely adore this story!
Smasher, Crusher et al sound like the beginnings of the Seven Biker Dwarves from Hell, Fred and George are a hoot, Sirius is wonderful (as is the book drooling Hermione), the payment/incentive scheme is brilliant, and I am seriously hanging out for updates.

booster-t posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:19pm

This is FANTASTIC! It's so wacko that it works ... I can see George and Fred doing just that ... not sure about Crabbe and Goyle ... looking forward to the eruptions of the two Mt. Weasleys

K. posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:12pm

LOVE IT!!! I want to read more of this, and soon!!! *grin*

wraithwolfe posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:10pm

I like this alot. An interesting twist on how to handle the tri-wiz tournament. Look forward to reading the next chapter.

veela504 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:10pm

Fan Freakingtastic! More, please. Definately more!!!!!!

Nic Clarke posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 11:00pm

Brilliant! As other reviewers have already said, this story is better than 99% of HP fanfiction currently being written. Perfectionism is all well and good, but it can also be taken too far - your stories are well plotted, well written and to be honest there's not much else you can do to improve them. I'm looking forward to whatever comes next.

timt020 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:49pm

This one could be very good, Please update soon.

Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:48pm

You leave is with thar cliffie? Oh, good work, man. Good work.

Entilzah posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:46pm

Love it! Unleashing the tornado that is the Weasley Twins and your usual spin on Harry. Great piece! If we get more of this than I am a happy man. If not... well, still happy man!

wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:43pm

I love this story. I love about 90 percent of your stories lol. But this is a review for this story and a request. Can you plz update some of your buffy stories? Like the warrior and the with and wild horses?

paulaluv2001 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:42pm

OMG This is so funny! Can't wait for more!

jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:41pm

ROFL!!!!! what an absolute hoot...and I really enjoyed reading it!!! I read your explanation and I don't care one jot...If you want to write a rollicking good story that's a tad over the top and light on the "deep" stuff...go for it...it's a fun read!!!

Liz :))

Dicknorn posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:38pm

This sounds like a very interesting and original twist to the tri-wizard tournament. I would quite enjoy reading a few more chapters to this story. I hope you do continue this one as it appears that the plot and time line would have some very funny Fred and George inspired madness.

rowin posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:37pm

Great so far hope you continue this story and your naruto one.

Primy148 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:33pm

Another great fc. I like the touch of Godfather.