By Jeconais
Reviews
James13 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:18am
Arm bounty! Awesome!
hallow posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am
I love your work, this one had me in fits of laughter the whole time, you have an excellent writing style, and are able to add personality quirks to the people you write about that make them seem so realistic and life like.
I hope in the future there may be many more stories like this.
Hallow
Charles Newton posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am
And once again, The Great and All Wonderful God Author What Am Jeconais has Blessed His fans with His Magnificent Gift of Story.
Please may we have More?
Dragonmage182 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am
Awesome so far. Any story that the twins play a part in kicking ass and taking names is good in my book. Also a new interesting way to go with the story. Not many people use the method of Harry hiring someone. As always you have yet to disappoint.
CaffeineAddict posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:11am
I like this so far. It's irreverent, funny, and otherwise lighthearted. At the same time it flows well and it doesn't seem stilted. If this is "shitty" I wish a lot of fanfic authors had that level of skill. It may not be anything deep or moving but I like having a laugh every now and then. I'll comment on your explanation here as well if you don't mind and just say this: what better reason do you have to write this stuff than for personal enjoyment? If you didn't enjoy it then what would be the point?
Cheers,
CA
Kal posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:05am
It has been far too long since I laughed so hard. THANK YOU!
94caddy posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:57am
Hilarious story. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:56am
Good show. I am always pleased to hear from you and you certainly don't disappoint with this offering. Thanks for writing. W.
Akraa posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:51am
Absolutely hilarious. My only critiques fall into matters of technique, so I will leave them by the wayside. Nice work.
Zicou posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:50am
wow another of your story that looks awesome!!!
Continuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.
Chris1 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:22am
Awesomeawesomeawesome :D Thanks for sharing this!
Chris
shebvixen posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:17am
Very Kick Ass! Great Job, very funny!
W Mayberry posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:07am
LOL Great Start! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Hope the Muses allow you the chance Soon!
noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:02am
Very good. I like the few stories where Harry actually has a brain or is proactive or knows to get some help.
You write however you like and I will continue to enjoy. The only reasons to write fanfics are 1) for the fun of it or 2) to try to polish your writing style. The latter can be done with original fics and the joy of rejection letters.
PMON posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:01am
This is amazing work, and deserves to be listed as one of your best story beginnings to date. While you seem to believe that your new work is worse, I am of the opinion that your writing talents merely lean towards humour and possibly parody. Even in some of your more serious fanfiction, there was a strong sense of irony at points. I don't doubt that you could indeed be a professional writer, assuming you stuck to your strengths. I hope you will write more of this soon, as it seems like it will be good fun.
Edward Becerra posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:01am
Jesus Quack!
This is a MASTERPIECE!
It's hilarious, and its only lack is that it's not epic in length. I can only hope that you'll add to it now and agan whenever the muse strikes.
Sincerely,
Ed Becerra
lauren2 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:59am
LOVE IT!!!
I never stopped laughing, can't wait for the next installment.
Lauren
lord_silver posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:49am
Hey great star to a story!
It was excellent. Also I read your explanation & agree with everyone that
we are looking forward to whatever you produce, however you may produce it.
You still are the most talented author in fandom & even though you say that you have given up on being a professional writer I really think that you have what it takes.
Thanks for a great new story.
wuoreb posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:41am
This is really fun. I love the idea of the twins fixing Harry's life. Can't wait to read more.
DizzyG posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:21am