007_rock posted a comment on Monday 26th January 2015 3:19pm for Chapter 14

Did you really have to end the part with Kate? She fit nicely into the plot. Every rich playboy should have a lovely escort to run to when things do bad and he needs some no strings attached comfort. Prospective girlfriends and interests just doesn't cut it. So sad you ended it.

Maybe we can have a brief reappearance somewhere down the line?

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 25th January 2015 10:29am for Chapter 14

An excellent chapter.

I do like the various powers showing interest in Harry and that the cold war is still going on in the mafical world.

I like Natalia and its nice Gabrielle has a role model. It was a pity Gabrielle did not get to spend time with Harry but he did make her happy.

What was done to the Minister's house was funny.

I liked Kate but I am glad she is gone I would much rather Harry was with a Veela eventually.

Thanks for this chapter.

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Friday 23rd January 2015 4:13pm for Chapter 14

I'd love to see this one updated. It's to good to just leave unfinished.

wohatli posted a comment on Friday 23rd January 2015 1:39am for Chapter 14

I absolutely love this story.Please don't quit on this storie.I have recomended this story to all my friends

firedrakegirl posted a comment on Thursday 22nd January 2015 5:18pm for Chapter 14

This was another fantastic story! I do hope for an update soon!

hellstorm posted a comment on Monday 19th January 2015 5:51am for Chapter 14

Love this story so far Please update with the next chapter as soon as your schedule allows

Meg posted a comment on Thursday 15th January 2015 5:36pm for Chapter 14

Damn it, Tim. I really liked Kate. :P

I probably should try to leave a review that makes up for just getting caught up with this now. Since my brain is a bit overloaded with evertyhing that's happened in the last few chapters, I can only say that I'm so very glad you've continued with this and it's certainly going in directions I never imagined. You rock!

yrlastin posted a comment on Wednesday 14th January 2015 11:36am for Chapter 14

Great chapter, Thank you.

Can we get an estimate on when you're gonna post again?

GinnyLover posted a comment on Tuesday 13th January 2015 9:51pm for Chapter 14

Loved the chpater and I love the story. However I just re-read Happily Ever After and was wondering when we might see the start of Castles in the Sky?

firedawg posted a comment on Tuesday 13th January 2015 8:35pm for Chapter 14

An amazing story and yor right Kate is an wonderful character. I hope we haven't seen the last of her. The confrontation between her and Harry just didn't jell with me. It didn'seem right. I like this Harry and the combination of characters and their role in the story. I amlooking forward to the rest of the tale. By the way I have read your other stories and this by far is a firm favorite. I eGerly await your next update. Thanks for a great read.

hsanders posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2015 8:42pm for Chapter 14

wow, just read this story and the charecter development is among the best of any fan fiction that I have ever read, heck, better than some regular fiction in fact!

Ryan Price posted a comment on Friday 9th January 2015 4:44am for Chapter 14

Jeconais- There are things I want to say to you that won't come out right. But here I go... I have the distinct honor of being a very bizarre type of hp nerd. I love Harry. And I love the world. And I love what you've done with it more than I can say. I'm also a special ops US marine. I started your fanfics before I joined. And after boot camp I read them again. After combat training I read them again. After my break up from someone who I thought was the one.. I read them again. You inspired me to start my own story. One that I sadly, abandoned, due to lack of time and change in writing style. Two days ago I returned from a trip that I can't say much about, except to call it the worst time of my life. Images I'll never forget and a friend whose smile I'll never see. I got back more depressed than I've ever been with no light in sight. Then I happened to Google 'jeconais' and stumbled upon this story. You might say 'It's just for fun' or whatever, but I started it a few hours ago. I cried for an hour when I saw you had something new. Before I EVEN READ IT I cried. I haven't cried since I was 12. I may not have cried out of happiness, but it was what I needed. You saved me tonight. Not from anything like suicide, I love myself way too much for that, but you saved me from a sadness I don't know how I would have dealt with. I'm only on chapter 5, but I've laughed more in the last couple hours than I thought I would ever laugh again. You have a gift. A special one. One that I'm grateful to be a part of and one that I hope you never give up. You have no idea who you touch and in what ways. I can't thank you enough for what you've done for me.. and I'll never be able to. Just know that you have a lifelong friend and fan in me. Thank you, jeconais. Even though those words don't seem to fit what I mean. -Ryan

Dupapier posted a comment on Tuesday 6th January 2015 6:24pm for Chapter 14

Thanks a lot for the Christmas gift and the great chapter.

Ace of Hate posted a comment on Sunday 4th January 2015 3:34am for Chapter 14

Damn, I had been hoping that Kate would be one of the choices, but that blows, so now it's between Fleur and Sinistra

LordSia posted a comment on Sunday 4th January 2015 3:04am for Chapter 14

You know, I was going to protest Kate being removed like that, but... Her being a cold professional - whether she was faking the relationship all along, or just not interested enough to give up her own life for it - actually does work out in a rather more interesting way.

As always, love your work, and I eagerly await the next update.

mykakal posted a comment on Saturday 3rd January 2015 3:44pm for Chapter 14

I think like a lot of the readers, the final scene with Kate will displease a lot. I was choked when I read it the first time. I think she's lying and she decided to teach Harry a last lesson about not mixing work and sentiments and voluntary hurting him in order to deal with his love for his teacher (Kate here). I agree that Kate was more sentimentaly involved with Harry (because of the freeby or of the day at the kickboxing championship) than said and she decided to stop it for whatever reason (fright, a blemish on Harry's reputation, to keep her freedom...) Congratulations for the author for the quality of story and to succeed to surprise us each chapter.

james8998 posted a comment on Friday 2nd January 2015 7:03am for Chapter 14

Love it. While how things ended with Kate were expected, if a little sharper than I foresaw, my reaction was not. Surprisingly sad, I liked her more than I thought. Aurora might be my favourite. Which is another surprising development.

Thank you so much for posting. Incredible story.

tsa100 posted a comment on Friday 2nd January 2015 1:27am for Chapter 14

Absolutely love this story. Hope you have time to keep the chapters coming!

kstchr posted a comment on Wednesday 31st December 2014 6:26am for Chapter 14

Well, I may be in the minority but I'm not sad to see Kate go...I was hoping he'd choose to date someone else than her anyway, and I find I like Natalia more now. That was certainly some harsh talk from Kate, though...can't wait to find out more of the "whys" of her leaving Harry. It will be interesting to see how/who the Americans finally get into place with Harry after seeing all their "spy" reports! I'm soooo glad that Fudge finally got what's been coming to him, as well - would love to see how his little meeting with Her Majesty turned out! lol Got a great kick out of the applesauce bit, too - that's kinda what I pictured happening, Fudge having to shovel his way into his home, wading through applesauce...oh, what fun!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Wednesday 31st December 2014 5:23am for Chapter 14

All in all the story is developing in a direction I wouldn't have expected couple of chapters ago.

Fascinating. Looking forward to see just how many turns are still ahead.

Thank you for writing.