alanis posted a comment on Sunday 19th June 2016 10:19pm for Chapter 14

Ok I just read the cahpters that I missed and they were great. I am rather sad that you plan on having Kate gone from Harry's life because you actually managed to make the two of them together make sense, what with all the darkness talk. At the begining when it started to look that way I was sceptict since well Kate is an escort. I am wondering what you plan on doing with all the different agents that seem to be popping up in Harrys life and will Harry trust them or find out what is happening? Another thing is there going to be some sort of trial in the muggle world because of the atack, one where Harry has to testify? I have to admit I am a little dissapointed that it isn't finished yet but all great things take time so I really hope you have fun writing and am totally looking forward to the next chapter.

Thodekke posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2016 2:23pm for Chapter 14

I wasn't sure how to take the end of this chapter. That scene was painful to read. Not because it was written poorly, but because it was written well.

On the bright side, I guess this opens the door for Harry/Sinistra or Fleur. Doesn't mean I really like it much.

This is a phenomenal story. You're an excellent writer. Keep it up!

Jimbocous posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2016 7:42am for Chapter 14

Great stuff. Hope to see more of this as RL permits. As always, thanks for a great read!!

Rob_Wrecks posted a comment on Saturday 21st May 2016 9:37am for Chapter 14

OHh man, I seriously hope a new chapter is gonna come soon. The ending for this one shocked me greatly as I was truly liking Kate.

Carick posted a comment on Monday 16th May 2016 3:55pm for Chapter 14

I found this by chance it is a very well thought out take on adult Harry Potter it has all the need parts good writting, plot and story arc but is it a lost fanfiction doom not to be finished I hope not for if finished it will be an outstanding story

Biblio388 posted a comment on Thursday 12th May 2016 7:20pm for Chapter 14

This is an absolutely awesome story. I have only read this and White Knight, Grey Queen so far but they are definitely some of the best I have ever read. Hope to see this continued and will happily continue to read it well into the future.

Priyansh posted a comment on Tuesday 10th May 2016 7:47pm for Chapter 14

Abondoned? Or continued?

Semkirk posted a comment on Wednesday 13th April 2016 5:27am for Chapter 14

Great story! Devoured it in one sitting! More soon, please!

incogn1to posted a comment on Thursday 17th March 2016 10:55pm for Chapter 14

Always love your stories as I come back to read them again and again.

Comosicus posted a comment on Thursday 11th February 2016 7:42am for Chapter 14

I'm reading this for the n-th time and can't stop wanting for more. Hope you will soon find the time and inspiration to return to this story. Or to Konoha's Legion. An update to either of them would be greatly appreciated.

Keep up the good work.

zabyne84 posted a comment on Monday 11th January 2016 5:17pm for Chapter 14

So glad to see some new chapters of some of my Favorite tales when I checked in today. I'm glad to see Kate gone frankly. While as there seems to be some... unusualness/abruptness to it, I predicted it around the Club Scene. She seems to have realised Harry's love towards her, and she does genuinely love him. But she is a scarred individual, and this is the clearest predictable outcome. She tried to stop it happening by helping Fleur step up, but in the end, Fleur had a moment of insight, rare in those situations, that held her back. Emotions often cloud clear thinking, and it could have gone that way, but it didn't and the ship has sailed onwards. So where do we go from here? Hmm far be it from me to guess, although I will anyway, but I'm excited to see how it turns. Fleur: Could step up, but she Isn't ready. It could work though, but it would bring along a level of Angst that doesn't mesh in my mind's eye. Aurora: I don't see her as a true contender. She doesn't love Harry as others do, you've done an amazing job keeping her in a perfect role. Not quite a love interest but still around enough to raise an eye brow. Dawn: And here is my top vote. Utter dedication to Harry. Heart of gold, who shares a similar coldness Harry has. Now that her Free Will has been arranged to her liking, the world, or Harry, is her Oyster. Natalia: Not even a small contender. Harry/Gabby/Dawn, 3 empathetic powers who have ways around the Normal ways of reading a person's intent. I do however, see her joining the Organization on some level. PR was mentioned already. She will fall for Harry and his drive, and slip away for her operative roots I suspect. Gabbi: How Adorable she is. Reminds me of your Gabbi from Happily Ever After, in that she is a total princess and totally fixated/dedicated to Harry. But she is not a contender for Harry here. Age being the primary factor. She will forever be an important part of his life. Likely will never seek a sexual relationship with anyone, ever. Just live her life being a Psuedo Daughter to Harry, cause we know he isn't going to let that slip away. She is a Moral Compass as much as she 'leeches' from him. Not her herself, she would Kill in a heartbeat I suspect, especially for Harry, but more that she is a constant reminder that Harry does what he does, and is who he is, for very important reasons. Look forward to more. And even though I didnt review on the New Perfect Slytherin chapter, I'm very excited to see it wrapping up. I've read it probably 8-10 times, and keep coming back when i need a good smile. Superb writing.

BAFan posted a comment on Thursday 31st December 2015 4:35pm for Chapter 14

Damn. I haven't commented before this because I was enjoying it so much and was too intent on getting to the end. Let me just say that I absolutely hated this last scene. It froze *my* heart too. Very sorry to read that Kate is out of the story. If she's smart she'll vamoose before Harry's Girls - or Fred and George - decide to pay her a visit.

I hope that someone - Hermione maybe - finds Natalia's appearance on the scene just a little too innocent to be real. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

`Debbie

Thatguy89 posted a comment on Thursday 24th December 2015 5:12am for Chapter 14

Just read this whole story and it is amazing, will it be updated?

darkstar6000 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd December 2015 3:48pm for Chapter 14

love the story! I'm sorryto deliver bad news but this story was posted on ff.net under the name ayrian and you weren't listed anywhere. jbern the lie i've lived was posted by joeducie as well if you know how to get intouch since he is inactive. Truly sorry!!!

mc2 posted a comment on Sunday 13th December 2015 2:52pm for Chapter 14

I love you writing. I get so hooked into your stories, no matter the situation you bring out a great tale accented with brilliant humour. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon

InMemorium posted a comment on Thursday 5th November 2015 5:56am for Chapter 14

I was just curious what the status was for an update of this story. It has been just a little over 10 months since your last update, and I am very anxiously awaiting the next installment of this story.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Sunday 1st November 2015 10:56pm for Chapter 14

Hi! It seems like this story is getting bigger each time I read it. Now, it's gone international in a James Bond-like way. When Harry was pushed into the triwizard tournament, he immediately realized that he was in over his head, so he sought expert help. I hope with this situation, he will again realize he's in over his head and at least consult his team of 'experts.' I would hate to have him caught in the international machinations with realizing what's happening!

Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 21st October 2015 8:29am for Chapter 14

I feel like such a moron, not reading "In Progress" before starting this Epic - and Enthralling - but unfinished work.

I cursed, aloud, making me fully aware of just how deeply I'd gotten involved in your tale.

Hope leads me to favorite this story and return to check for updates, some day.

M

violetangel676 posted a comment on Tuesday 13th October 2015 5:03am for Chapter 14

I wish you would update this wonderful story, everyday or at least every other day I come on here and check to see if you have updated, and I'll admit everyone of my hopes is dashed but how I truely wish that you would update just please update, if only to tell your loyal readers that you're still alright please oh please

Lisagrace posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2015 11:03pm for Chapter 14

I was just re-reading, loving this story. Poor Harry and Kate.