anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:26pm

Excellent believable intimacy without overdoing it too badly. The Arthurian legend bit, the fish & chips & golfing, the mild asides involving Hogwarts staff and the Gryffindor crew... very fun. Wonderful chapter. Thank you for updating on a holiday!

Ron posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 3:22pm

Actually, your changes to the legend make it much closer to the truth, except for the era.

MysterioX posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 1:44pm

i say this is my fav out of all ur other fics. I hope u are gonna kill off draco after he hits on gabby? just an idea

ulkser posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 10:25am

another one of your miracles. i jsut want to say please do not make any appearances of any dark lords. there could be action, figths but please no wars. i want to see harry teaching other stuff like dada but not all the time.

very good so far. it will be nice to see some other female characters try to get harry and compete with gabrielle as much as they could.

it is been a week and you haven't updated. when will be the next update?

TimGold posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 1:52pm

I adore this fic! It's absolutely everything i wanted to read! love every second of reading it :>>

solar1 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 12:30pm

great story so far!

Juhi posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 1:27am

this is seriously one heck of a story. brilliant! keep it up. waiting eagerly for the next few chapters! :)

Ruskbyte posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 10:31am

I'm not usually one for the nightclub scene (never have been really) but you managed to pull it off with such aplomb that even I found it alluring. Nice.

Looking forward to the arrival of Ollie and the twins. I wonder if the Beauxbaton students will survive?

Brad Crawford posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 7:50am

wow and excellent chapter yet again tim. loved the little action with the aurors dealing with the drug dealers and the scum useing the daterape drugs! keep up the great writing. hope your block for tmw is gone soon!

Fate posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 12:11am

This was absolutely lovely!
Well done!
I just love the attention to detail, plot and character development that you put into your stories. :D

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:38pm

I like this Harry. He has more depth than other Harry's. That sounds wrong but basically I really like this story and i think incorporating veelas into the story is very intersting.
Thankyou for putting in the time and energy to write these stories for us.

(I know I say this in every review but where is Hagrid? Why does noone like him?!!)

cheryse posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:09pm

I just wanted you to know how much I am enjoying this story. I had never considered this pairing before, but I find myself addicted to the idea of Harry and Gabrielle.

While I am anxiously waiting more chapters for this, I was wondering if there were any other fics of this genre that you would recommend.

Humbley grateful for sharing your story,
Cheryse

rmcclain124 posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 3:41am

Wow! How am I supposed to be blown away by the next chapter if this one's already done the job.

'Tis the gift of a great story teller to be able to take an idea that sounds utterly unrealistic (Hope) or absurd (WK,GQ) and make it plausible--let alone--probable.

Keep it rolling, Tim.

Bethany posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 8:55pm

Tim,
I must say that this chapter was your best so far in "Hope". I especially loved the dancing scene, I felt like I was right there in the club with H&G, watching them dance together. You truly have a gift for taking your readers so completely into your universe that it becomes so real. We get to experience everything from the look of Gabriel in her dancing outfit, to the smell of booze on Harry's breath.
I loved drunk Ron and Harry, I've always been curious what Harry would be like completely pissed, and that scene far surpassed my imagination.
Thank you for your writtings, and thank you for blessing us, your fans, with the privilage of reading them.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing Gabriel make Harry weak in the knees!!
Bethany

patrik svensson posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 5:15pm

grejt story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

samitus posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 3:41pm

Back when chapter two was out, I often despaired that this was probably my all-time most favourite HP fanfic, and that it wasn't continuing at all. I feel very empathetic with Gabrielle's feelings towards her Mate, as I sometimes catch myself having similar thoughts about this fic. :D I'm definitely rooting for the story here, very good work all in all!

Terry Chang posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 1:16pm

blow me away with the next chapter now!!! ... yeah, like that demand will actually work. Reread this for the nth time. wow.

anon posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 3:15am

oh my gosh that was just so good. do keep it up, youre really talented!! ((:

Uchethegirl posted a comment on Saturday 19th November 2005 11:35pm

:) Wow. A bit on the cheesy side, but so wondrously so. I don't want to beg for updates pathetically just now (it's late, and I'm too tired to do it coherently), so I'll just end this review here, with the repeated statement that you are a stunning writer.

Joseph Fritz posted a comment on Saturday 19th November 2005 9:04am

Great chapter! Please post more soon!