By Jeconais
Reviews
stuart posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 3:14pm
you make it hard to read other stories, great chapter. keep up the good work, about the only thing i could ask for is faster updates but not at the expense of your work
Jennifer2 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 1:02pm
Please hurry and write some more.
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 10:11am
Wooohooooo!!!!!!!11
This is the best christmas present I have recieved so far.
I don't know how to repay you for your stories. They help more than I can say.
Thankyou
merry christmas
crs_seq posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 8:18am
Awesome! there's no other word for it. A bit more fluff would not be amiss. but on the whole just luved the chapter. hope U update soon.
phsname posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 12:17am
wow...
that was...crazy...
written very...very well.
cant wait for the next one...haha...i have nothing more to say.
:D
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 12:13am
Very good but very sneaky. I was wondering how you would handle Harry and Gabby waking up at Harry's cottage. I was surprised when you just ignored it! Except for the little by play with Harry and Jean of course. A very good chapter thank you for writing and for the "Christmas Present"!
Bill posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 11:15pm
Fantastic! I love the way you write, Tim. I also look forward to you having Harry kill malfoy. Yes, I said 'kill him!' Anyways, I (as always) look forward to your next update. Merry (belated) Christmas.
phsname posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 10:36pm
lol...u sooo butchered dumbledore, and just about everything else related to hogwarts in this story...
not that it's bad, i'd rather call it...creative...and unique?
haha. i love how it's going. it's very heart-warming.
:D
jalva200 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 8:55pm
OMG!!!
Hahah i love this storie!!!
MORE MORE I SAY!!
Please write more and fast.. its a really good store!
phsname posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 8:31pm
hahahha...wow.
this story is amazing. ur writing is...well, odd.
normally, i despise any kind of super!harry stories, i dont see him as that kind of a character. most authors seem to do it as simply a way of making Harry that much more of a hero, yet you incorporate it into the story in such a core essential fashion, that it just seems right and natural.
i love the characters you've created in this story, harry and gabrielle are both very well written, as are ron, hermione, maxime, jean, and everyone else.
however, one thing i thought was kind of awkward is the dialogue at those crucial dramatic moments...it turned considerably...corny? i cant think of another word. the melodrama got to be a bit too much i think.
aside from that, this is a great work, and has become one of my favorite fanfics.
great job!!
Sarah9 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 7:31pm
Fantastic! And Prévoyez is gone for good now? Or at least, appears to be. That was a fantastic chapter, I really enjoyed the story on Gabrielle's past, being more difficult than we previously saw. Onca again, you've managed to stun me with your chapter. Update soon!
Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 7:26pm
Spectacular! Deleriously Enjoyable! =D
I love this story, and the fact that it has Dumbeldore bashing, on the side of Harry and Gabby's romance is just fancy icing on the tripple decker cake!
The entrance of Beauxbatons was well executed, while I thought that their would be more Gred/Forge-ish entrance spectacular-ness! Though I'll settle for Dumbeldore scowling! =F
I really believe that Pervyous should have gotten a more suitable punishement! But at least the students got a laugh at her expence! Now i just can't wait until Snape, Trelawney, and Malfoy get their punishments! *grins evily as horns sprout from head*
A word of caution though, if you continue to post such amazing calibur of writing, you'll just make your readers expect you to out do yourself every update! (Not that you'd hear any complaints!) ^.^
Once again you grant US the reader with the pleasure of reading your "Outstanding" work, and I thank you.
Write on Jeconais, Write on...
EricThorsen posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 7:17pm
Yes!... No more Professor Stupid! The great castle move was really cool, and so was the trip to Milan. I also liked the way that you dealt with Bill wanting to be Mated to Fleur. Keep it up.
pagemistress89 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 6:10pm
I LOVE THIS FIC! The explanations of veela mating is wonderful, Harry has been perfectly portrayed, and all the characters are done excellently! Please update soon!
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 3:49pm
Totally awesome and fantastic. I am very very interested in just how Dumbledore finally screwed up so badly that Harry can hardly stand to be in his presence... I am also very please with how you handled the attempted sabotage.
Now you just have to show those lingering DE's and unscrupulous potions masters just who it is they are pitted against... and let the games begine!
The side relationship between Bill and Fleur was very well done. The way you used it to reveal the depth of the bond and its less than pleasing side effects was brilliant.
You are as always, an incredible author... now if we could just get you to be inspired to add to TMW!!! oh, well... guess I will have to be content with what I can get!
Love your story, a fan.
PerfesserN posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 2:50pm
Thank you for an excellent Christmas Present. Milan is leaving me hungry for more!
Macabro posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 1:58pm
An excellente chap. I liked it a lot. I'm eager to see the Quidditch Tournament and the next Dumbledore and Snape's actions and Harry's replies. Hope to read them soon...
phsname posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 1:57pm
the only thing i dont really like about this story is the way you presented dumbledore...
while it is a necessity for the way the story is developing, (and i do understand that this was started before HBP), im always gonna be prejudiced towards the HBP-canon dumbledore.
aside from that, this is really looking to turn out great.
:D
AmonRA posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 1:32pm
Haha this is great. The look on Dumbledore's face must have been priceless lol
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 4:36pm