Brandon R posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd January 2013 6:59pm

"Hey everyone it's Jeconais! Let's wave to him." As a group all readers of great fanfiction wave to jeconais.

That bit had me laughing, alot. It was probably funnier cause i was tired, but nontheless it made me chuckle. You sir are a true artist of language...ok maybe not per se, but a damn talented author and anyone who says other wise should be...should have...well something extremely unpleasant done to them.

I've read Hope and WKGQ, many times (2 and 3 respectively in my all time top 5 fanfictions ever) I can't remember if im remembering this right, and if im not completely disregard this part, but you said that you would be able to write something that well again? or something like that. Well i have to disagree, your writing has not diminished in the least, it's only taking a different route that leads to the same destination.

In case you were wondering that destination was Happiness for the readers as you are a talented writer and anything you write is more than worth reading...Unless you dont think thats the case, in which, the destination becomes the bahamas. Though how you would write to get there is beyond me.. well anyway, thank you very much for this fabulous chapter and story!

Brandon R

jua-chan posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2013 5:11pm

Yay, another chapter. I am really enjoy this story, it is so funny but also very serious at times.

The revelation about Fleur is interesting. I didn't expect that at all. I wonder how that part of the story will proceed.

I absolutly love Gabrielle. She is so well writen. It really shows that she is not a normal human child but it is also obvious that being a Veela is not all about sex.

Hope to read more from you soon. Well done.

AzurePrince posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2013 3:17am

Oh, I just read one review that asked what would happen if anyone tried to hurt Gabrielle, in my honest opinion I think that would be perfect to put in. Would probably see a raging Harry! Thank you again for this wonderful story.

AzurePrince posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2013 3:13am

I'm loving this story so far, I am happy there is no proper pairing with Harry for once. But the complex situation you put between Harry & Fleur makes me wish they get together for good, it's just the power of your writing making me feel that way because I certainly did not feel that way when you first mentione the will be no Harry pairing. I can't wait to read what will happen next in Harry's life.

Any news on when we can expect the next chapter at all?

X_Matt_X posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2013 2:31am

Very interested in the romantic drama you're setting up. Equally curious as to how you're going to handle it!

keichan2 posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2013 8:04pm

"dancing a romantic slow dance with the Durmstrang boys" Bwahahaha! I knew it! :-D "and I needed a week to recover!" :-) I do wonder if he will need more time for this one ;-p "You have the body of a Greek goddess, combined with fashion sense of a Swiss nun" Ouch... "You just have to be Annie" When you mentioned that it was the same club, I wondered if she would be there... "before remembering her promise not to get involved with Harry herself." I had wondered what was happening... "It would be nice to have a new sister." :-D that's what I thought would happen, too. "and Harry would react, and it would be terrifying." Well... I think that Harry would react the same way if someone hurt Hermione, even though she is NOT one of love interests... What would really be terrifying, would be if someone ever dared to hurt Gabrielle. THAT would be terrifying! "Like living stone. Like Hogwarts" That is an interesting comparison... And I can't help wondering if it have any link with the title of this fic... Thanks for the new chapter. I hope to read more soon!

LordSia posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2013 2:51am

I do like it. Especially the parts where you don't have everything fall in line, but still avoid making a complete train wreck of it all.

Mmend15 posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2013 1:30am

interesting to see how seriously you took Harry's forced growing up. not many people remember or even admit that growing up forces you to lose something important in yourself. great story i really enjoyed reading it

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2013 7:35pm

The disturbing thing is that Harry may have lost some of his humanity during his time alone and bonding with the school at such a deep level. I wonder what it will take for Fleur to take the risk and for Harry to let her in?

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2013 3:08am

Wow is all I can say!!! I just love this story. How everyone is tied together with each other and how Harry, is actually the glue that hold the group together. I love Fleur and Gabby's parents. Michael is a hoot, having his flirting turned back on him by a guy no less.....the twins are so out there. Great to see that even though they started this, they now realize the are the followers. Thank you for a great read and can't wait for the next installment!

Nytefyre posted a comment on Tuesday 15th January 2013 8:35pm

Really enjoying this light hearted take on the Tournament, especially the method of Harry's growing up.

Thanks for posting..

Children-of-Bodom posted a comment on Tuesday 15th January 2013 3:29pm

I did a little dance in my chair when I saw you had posted a new chapter to this wonderful story. And as always I was not disappointed. I am happy you are back to providing us with your fiction's and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Not to sound too greedy, but I am hoping that we can soon enjoy the next installment of your Perfect Slytherins series as well :)

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Tuesday 15th January 2013 3:47am

Great to have you back.

Yeah, life can really take it out of you if you're not carful, but it beats the alternative.

Good chapter to come back to. Love what you're doing with Gabby. She's going to be quite the young lady when she grows up.

Now we get to see how the rest of the people respond to Harry and his friends day out and get ready for the third task.

Four way draw? That ought to make the graveyard scene exciting. Heaven help anyone who trys to 'kill the spares' there.

Thank you for sharing with us.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

Heliosion posted a comment on Tuesday 15th January 2013 2:47am

As usual this was a well done piece of work that keeps me coming back to this site over and over again as I love your brand of work. Looking forward to the next chapter

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Monday 14th January 2013 7:50pm

Wow, Jeconais, this is Harry taking the Chuck Norris path to badassery! Excellent work with the scenes this time, you really pulled in a lot of different interactions to make sure that the whole cast got a bit of screen time here, and all of it in meaningful ways. I think that the doubts Fleur is showing by the end of the chapter make a lot of sense for the character, given what she has seen Harry doing over the course of the Tournament. Our second-most favorie half-Veela (We all know that Gabby takes top honors in this fiction.) is absoultely right in her perception of Harry. He's forced himself to grow up early, and as a consequence has lost a lot of the need for interdependance on others that most personalities retain from normal social interactions. This is not to say that he can't use the sort of social linking involved, but he's become much more insular in his dealings with others.

That being said, I also think that Gabby's right, her sister's letting her fears make her pass up a pretty good opportunity for something good. Oddly enough, I think that in a lot of ways, Gabrielle's view of Harry sort of fits well with his own less than complete social upbringing during the formative years. I think that because of the way he was brought up, combined with the training he's gotten this year, Harry's probably very close to exactly the sort of person that a child Veela needs if they want to reach their full potential. It's a pity that Fleur's grown old enough that adult cynicism is getting in the way of a good thing for her.

I'll be looking forward to the next installment of this.

jknezek posted a comment on Monday 14th January 2013 6:37pm

Interesting and fun as always. Now that you've proved Harry is the complete bada$$ and that all women swoon before him, can we get back to having fun with magic and wiping out bad guys?

Tenchifew posted a comment on Monday 14th January 2013 11:25am

Brilliant story.

Love it. Very unusual, brilliantly written and with some of the best characterizations I've seen so far.

Looking very much forward to see how Fleur/Kate situation will pan out.

Thank you for writing.

loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 14th January 2013 6:14am

thank you for the update, i had a very happy birthday reading it

chichi323100 posted a comment on Monday 14th January 2013 4:16am

It was a plesent surprise to see another chapter so soon i always liked this story and konohas legion.

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Monday 14th January 2013 4:11am

i loved this update. i cant wait for the next one