black prince posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 4:28pm

Love this story.
what will the video do to buffy's messed up mind.

shannon oxley posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 1:07pm

Love this. Please finish?

Neil Glover posted a comment on Saturday 28th July 2007 7:57pm

Great story, I hope you'll update soon

Wauzi posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 10:56am

Congratulations, great story! But I would really like to hear(read) the end of it.
Under the Author Notes of part 16 you write:"... and there's only a chapter or two left to go now...", what does that mean, are you near completion?
Update soon, please!!!

Wauzi

Elke posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 4:31pm

I really like this story & hope it won't be abandoned.

Infin1x posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 9:54pm

Excellent story. I escpecially liked hom easy it was to hate Buffy in the beginningbut it slowly evolved to the point where you can only pity her. While I appreciate how quickly things are moving, it gives a good feel to the story, a week for all this to happen seems a bit to fast.

Silent Claw posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2007 1:00pm

Brilliant! I love the geeky tech bits, although I'd think they'd have more than a few BSD machines kicking around if they're going for a nice secure high-tech lab . . .

haroldm posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2007 7:32am

It's been an interesting story. The twists to canon are great. I do hope you will continue this story someday.

Kenjit posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2007 8:13pm

please update soon

Charles Goodroe posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2007 4:03pm

awesome!! more please I really like where this is going!

dennis1 posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2007 5:23am

Excellent chapter, excellent story
Looking forward to more
You mentioned security for the apartments and condos
what about the parking areas?
With Willow being so powerful, is she being fed power to corrupt her? Can all that power be bound by a less powerful magicuser?
Thanks
D

dennis1 posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2007 4:03am

Great chapter
Great lines and funny
Did Faith ever call Cordelia Hot Lips in either series?
I do not remember
But it feels like something that would come from her character
Thanks

Banner posted a comment on Saturday 31st March 2007 6:05am

Fascinating story. I saw this story rec'ed over at TtH, and I'm glad I followed it. It's amazing just how fast someone can grow up, when they are motivated...

Alex00 posted a comment on Monday 26th March 2007 11:52pm

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Update this awesome awesome story.

DarkJester posted a comment on Monday 26th March 2007 6:05pm

WOW Great chapter, ive been folowing this story on another website and just found this, I cant wait for the next chapter

Maddie Pana posted a comment on Thursday 22nd March 2007 3:57am

Great read, hope you'll finish it one day!

Michael Jordan posted a comment on Wednesday 14th March 2007 4:46am

Please finish this and the Knight and the witch story. Both are very good and i want to see how they end.

lenayvonne posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 6:39pm

I love this story! I really enjoy stories that feature a strong take charge Xander instead of Zeppo Xander. I can't wait for more.

alan g posted a comment on Tuesday 6th March 2007 1:09am

Wow great story read it right through kept me interested

Allisyn posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2007 6:26pm

I have really enjoyed reading this piece. Ordinarily I not really a Xander/Dawn fan but I am really enjoying their developing relationship and the development of them as individuals as well. The strong theme of redemption and willful blindness as well as the importance of self examination also makes this an interesting read. I would love to see you finish this piece.