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Aristide posted a comment on Friday 18th November 2005 5:02pm

Hi. Look, i know, you could be tired of this story but for god sake, you must complete it! It's too much good to remain unfinished.

bye

Aristide

Jack posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 7:16pm

That's just wrong... I have never watched the show, but I had tried several times previously to get into this story, and could not get past the first chapter. When Kinsfire mentioned he was borrowing something from the story, it reminded me of it, and I gave it another try. I finally got through the beginning, and nearly inhaled the rest of the story! This is good stuff.

There were a few things that went over my head, as I am not a Buffy fan, but I did not have all that much trouble. About the only thing that still really confuses me is the importance Buffy placed on a soul. The term SIT bugged me for several chapter before someone made reference to future slayers, and the reference clicked.

I would have liked to have seen more balance between following the characters -- X got the Orb, and then almost seemed to disappear from the story for a bit.

The only upsetting thing is that I had it in my head for some reason that the story was complete! As I was reading through the last few chapters, I kept thinking to myself "he is leaving an awful lot of loose ends to tie up at the very end," and then ... NO ENDING! Doh!

Aw, well. It will go on my list of stories that are close to complete, but with no end in sight, along with TMW! and a few others.

One last thing... You make me want to actually watch some of the show, but I get the distinct feeling I would be disappointed with the characters compared to your versions.

Donna posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd November 2005 10:11pm

Love the story! This is the first BTVS fic I've ever read, it's very good. As Xander has always been my favorite, it is nice to see someone writing him as strong, resourceful and successful.

Just a note about your thanks to John your "Beta".... you should fire him. Your work is rife with errors that should have been easily caught. I signed in with my email, if you are interested in a good beta let me know.

Jay posted a comment on Saturday 1st October 2005 6:07am

I'm looking forward to the new chapter. Would appreciate a link to it however... I switch computers alot. And only have this linked on my laptop right now.

Keith posted a comment on Thursday 22nd September 2005 12:48pm

I have reread this for something like the fifth or sixth time, and I find myself hoping that Willow gets her second (or third, or fourth or whatever) chance from Xander. I think she's FINALLY gotten it through her skull about the whole action/reaction/consequences thing, and I think she'll actually finally change.

I admit that I'd like to see Buffy change as well, but that's me. I like all the ones with any hopes of redemption to survive and prosper. Maybe get her head out of her butt and learn to work for Xtech?

FairyQilan posted a comment on Saturday 17th September 2005 5:22pm

Nice! I'm waiting for the rest. I like everything in this story. Normally i'm a spike fan(before season6), but the story is put together so well i can't help but hate him. Write more soon please!

red jacobson posted a comment on Friday 16th September 2005 6:28pm

Hey Tim; how come you didn't let us know there was a new chapter up? Loved it; and I'm glad that Buffy is starting to learn the truth. I hope that Willow is able to be redeemed; the signs are looking good.

Also, how long before Xander Dawn and Faith boot Kennedy so far out of the apartment she bounces on the way down?

red

Quizer posted a comment on Wednesday 7th September 2005 7:12pm

Another great story!
You know, I have never even watched Buffy... Consider it a credit of your incredible writing talent that I stayed up until five in the morning to read this!
I'm starting to wonder, however... Why is it that all of your multi-chaptered fics are only one or two chapters before completion and that last chapter never appears?
Do something about that! ;)

Quizer

Kevin Morse posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2005 7:18am

2 of your stories have caught my attention, This on Wild Horses and White Knight, Grey Queen. Found this one (Wild Horses) on Aug 30 and started reading it at 11:00 at night. Finished it about 4:30 in morning. You make a massive cliff hanger. Some thoughts.
1) Does Xander still have that special ring tjat made spike a super vamp for a day. I thought he was suppose to deliver it to Angel. I didnt see the follow up episode.
2) It felt like a Harry potter x-over when that fellow showed up with a sword. Glad it wasn't.

kate posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2005 4:46pm

please more
please moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease moreplease more

it's been quite a while fromur last up date
please more

kat

john m posted a comment on Friday 29th July 2005 10:31am

can't wait for the next part please soon

Mark posted a comment on Wednesday 13th July 2005 4:42pm

Wow. Is there anything you write that isn't brilliant? Once again, I'm extremely impressed.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 11th July 2005 10:46am

Loved it! More!!!

brad posted a comment on Wednesday 29th June 2005 4:11pm

Tim you have done a fantastic job i cant wait for the next few chapters and as for work go man go!

james posted a comment on Sunday 26th June 2005 1:01pm

Hey Tim,
How's it going. I hope everything is fine with you. I love this story and I just want to know what is the status with this story and with Witch and the Warrior. Just wondering. Thanks in advance.

Joseph posted a comment on Tuesday 14th June 2005 3:00pm

More please. Ive read this whole thing 5X already, today is the 5th time.

Madelyn posted a comment on Saturday 21st May 2005 9:42pm

Why, oh WHY must you torture us like this?!!  Always with the cliffhangers and the convenient dropoffs that torture the hell out of us poor readers!  I would considering an arsenal of pitchforks, but since pitchforks are usuall detrimental to the writing process... I suppose I'll refrain.  Damn it. 

Anyway, one thing wondering about the story.  As an American, I always thought that the legal age of consent was 16.  Then again, state laws do differ.  Is the legal age different in California?  Or did I just get a bit of the wrong impression and assume that Xan's reluctance with Dawn was being legally unable to do so, rather than morally unable to do so. 

Anyway, loved it as usual.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  (And the desperate refrain of a thousand voices resound in a somewhat annoying chorus... "Update... Please Update.")

paul posted a comment on Saturday 21st May 2005 10:33am

great story one of the best buffy fanfics i have ever read

John posted a comment on Wednesday 18th May 2005 5:51am

This is great stuff. I hope that you update soon. It was just mean leaving it there, I want to see Buff's reaction to Spike's admission on the tape. I hope to see more of Angel in in the future. He's my favorite character. I love this story. Update soon!