darthloki posted a comment on Wednesday 17th February 2010 8:44am

Great. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love fics where the others see the errors of their ways re:Xander. He always seemed to get the short stick, and yet he had the most potential.

wataru posted a comment on Thursday 11th February 2010 12:15am

Please, finish this story. it is the best dawn/xander story i have read.

Knitsmcgee posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 4:56am

Just wanted to add my agreement in with the group here. Please please please finish this up, especially with all the new traffic from the TTH crossover.

Peej posted a comment on Friday 16th October 2009 11:16am

I know you haven't post much in a while but could you please see your way to completing this story? This is the best Dawn/Xander story I have ever read.

civred3 posted a comment on Friday 9th October 2009 9:59pm

I jioned this site just so I could read this story it is one of the best fanfics I have ever read could you please finish it. If not could you at least tells you aren't going to finish it so we can at least move on.

Ka-ris posted a comment on Thursday 1st October 2009 9:20am

please
I just read this , start to here and want to read the rest

please post the rest SOON

jessicanewby posted a comment on Sunday 6th September 2009 3:53pm

This is amazing. I understand that you haven't worked on it for almost five years but this story diserves a finish. It is some of the best work I have written and I even with my extensive imagination what you could write is better than anything I could think of. This is me begging you to finish it!

Jhawksun posted a comment on Wednesday 26th August 2009 8:02am

please update soon love this story

DJHaire posted a comment on Tuesday 25th August 2009 9:54pm

Jeconais,

Just wanted to dop a review for "Wild Horses".

I will admit only finding this story by accident through reviews of another story on Twisting the Hellmouth. I decided to give it a shot and have enjoyed it.

My favorite points:

1) a truly developing X/D relationship
2) Andrew growing up and truly earning redemption
3) Xander gaining parental figures who push him to be his best.
4) XTech Security - Taking the fight to the demons
5) Queen Dawn of Sunnydale High. I wish I had pulled the same during High School.

Personally, I want to see more of this story. If more is on another site, can you direct me there? If not, please post here so I can read!!

-Daniel Haire

JellyFish72 posted a comment on Monday 24th August 2009 11:25pm

*pouts* Are you ever going to come back and finish this story? I absolutely love it - I've read it at least 20 times. I want to know how it ends!!! *pokes* Do I need a bribe or a threat?

qbotu67 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd August 2009 5:15pm

I'm REALLY hoping that this isn't the last of this story!!!! You really are going to post the last 2 chapters, right?

ryanblack posted a comment on Tuesday 14th July 2009 12:47pm

Ihave loved this story forever please update

kcgx23 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st July 2009 1:57pm

I love it, looking forward to more.

redhandgrunt posted a comment on Tuesday 9th June 2009 12:31am

I must reiterate the need for more of this story. I hope you get back to writing it.

elked posted a comment on Friday 5th June 2009 2:34pm

Hiya there,

isn't it rather suicidal of Simon to give Xander the Orb without any warning of the possible consequences? I would be a lot more careful with a trigger-happy guard at my back ready to defend his boss. And isn't it rather foolish of Dawn and Xander to test something with no questions asked and only minimal research into its properties?

Ikke

elked posted a comment on Friday 5th June 2009 6:39am

Hiya,

interesting chapter. It makes me think.

What I really love about it, is the character "Molly" and her ability to listen and make you feel welcome. On the other hand, the portrayal of Spike rubs me wrong somehow. Could be, that I read to many stories in which he is Xander's friend (e.g. "hera's list" by toots).

I'm rather torn about the "Big-Brother-is watching-you"-method employed. Yes, I do see its use in this story and in real life. I just see the potential misuses as well and that bothers me.

C U Ikke

wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 21st May 2009 3:34pm

wow great story...hope you update it soon.

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Monday 11th May 2009 11:13am

I was reading all your HP stories over and over again when I decided to check out the rest of your stories, and I was impressed. Although truthfully, after I got done being shocked, I couldn't understand WHY I was impressed, because you are just an incredible author all over the place. Keep up the fantastic work!

OlorinBlack posted a comment on Tuesday 7th April 2009 1:04pm

More! This is far more believable than the pitiful outcome Mutant Enemy came up with. And did you see what THEY did to Dawn? Hideous

Was wondering when the videotape would show up.

elked posted a comment on Wednesday 4th March 2009 1:17pm

Hiya,

I simply love this chapter. No nagging.

Ikke

P.S.: Just one tiny remark. The contradiction with chapter 2 concerning the rebuilding of the High School.