maddogxxiii posted a comment on Tuesday 19th December 2006 8:39am

We are all eagerly awaiting the Chapter 10 to be posted so pleaes, please, please put it up :-)

finally_sso posted a comment on Monday 18th December 2006 1:32pm

I like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I also think that you should finish the story called The Darkness I like to know how it ends.

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Monday 11th December 2006 7:13pm

I was really gald to hear that you have the next 'chapter' written, I am looking forward to reading it. Please update as soon as you can, I am really looking forward to it.

The Great Phoenix posted a comment on Tuesday 5th December 2006 9:48pm

PLEASE FINISH THIS!!! IT'S BEEN THREE OR FOUR YEARS!!! PLEA-HEE-HEASE FINISH IT!!!!!

I applaud your story's incredible awesomeness!!!

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Saturday 2nd December 2006 4:12pm

this is so far an outstanding plus story. I am curious of how things will go i expect more action in the next chapter thought i have to quit reading it for now because the next chapter isn't out yet.

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Saturday 2nd December 2006 12:48pm

MMails are a cool idea it almost makes it a new cannon idea. i resently read one that these two muggleborn developed it new. I think that it would increase the value of many stories. Oh on to the reveiw of the chapter not the notes this one was a good chapter it created the set for harry's busyness. i find myself realigning cannnon years in my head when reading the story automaticly which is a testement to the writting of the author. the malfoy's main money maker is butterbear makes sense and shows in this story that it was made from stealing it form ABE.

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Saturday 2nd December 2006 7:55am

the cliffys are always good when subtle. this was defenatly a good one. i thought i would point out that my machine needed restarted before i could go on to the next chapter and my family was on line so i could not read the next chapter until later. even with reading it before it was still a nag to have to wait. oh and i found a mistake to insted of too, i'm a terible editer so when i find one it's shear luck so even more so with this author, and bata

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Saturday 2nd December 2006 7:50am

Abe's a riot, the joke was good, i like the dumbledores' charitors interatction. It makes them more human and less two demisional.

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 3:32pm

loved the apperation lesson almost as much as the reaction to the plan the girls had, though the funnyest part was the sirius fainting

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 1:00pm

Loved the Mmail Portkey and the change in snapes charictor over all like i said in my first review i have read this several times though i have only read the hbp once and not even all the way thru so that gives you some idea of the level of quality this story is.

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 6:29am

Good Chapter i get a kick out of the Draco Gay section everytime. Though the Snape givving points with the subtle info on his reasoning was masterful.

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 4:11am

on to the third chapter this chapters detox scene is a reminder of back to the future when doc was inlove. though i enjoyed the added imagry my mind puts in

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 12:55am

I don't do review so this is a bit strang. I have read and reread your story This Means War. It is beyond your quality of writting, that is to say i often reread your work because of your high quality of story telling but this story has past beyond even that. I have counted the number of time i have read this story even being incomplete as it is and it is over 10 times. i am not sure if it is thirteen, fourteen, or fifteen. I just started to reread it again and find your expresion of the story on Fanficauthors is by far better then when i first read it on fanfiction's site. i find it halerious and cand wait to read the next chapter and review it as well. this is a new thing for me so forgive me if i am long winded.

jgkitarel posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2006 8:16am

Well, I see Harry's up to his usual trick, and you managed to pull a powerful Harry without being excessive. After all, if you don't know it's impossible, how can it be.

Oh, correct me if I'm wrong, but the French translates to "How someone can be so blindingly stupid is beyond me!". Correct?

I'll admit to taking some liberties with the translation. I have enough experience with translating languages to put things into a context that makes some sense.

dawebgirl posted a comment on Tuesday 21st November 2006 9:20am

This is a fantastic fic - excellent writing style and plot, with interesting characters. Please update soon.

sejones posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 2:54pm

You have a really wicked sense of humor! I was laughing out loud for several of the scenes you portray. One question, what happened to the Saddie Hawkins dance? Did Harry sleep through it in one of his periods of unconciousness or has Halloween simply not arrived yet? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter for this and "Hope." Thanks for the entertainment.

thumper posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 12:19pm

Great story One of my Fav fanfic's I would love to see some more of it when you get around to writing

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:56pm

I just finished reading this story again. I like to revisit my favorite stories occasionally. I have always been a "Super Harry" afficianado and I like the tone and pacing of your stories. I realize that you are giving us a great gift with your stories and that being the case it would be most ungrateful of me to make any demands of you; it would be very well received if the final chapter were to be forth coming. I'm hoping your muse will point you in that direction. However I'm likely going to be grateful for any of your efforts in the Harry Potter world. Thank you. Wolfric

HalfBloodHarp posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 7:32pm

"I promise that there will not be another massive wait for the final part," eh? Have to roll my eyes at that one. I read what you've got of this story three or four times through now, since I first discovered it a couple years ago, and I haven't seen a tenth chapter. And HBP was released not my last birthday, but the one BEFORE that.

Come on, I'll give you cookies if you finish it. Cooooo-kkiiiiiiieeeesss. Honestly, who can resist cookies?

And as you say, "the dominos are set," making a massive cliffie for us poor, poor, cross-eyed readers. Not cool, my friend. Not cool at all. I've read a substantial number of the other stories on this site waiting for you to post the effing thing, dammit.

/rant

Though maybe it's a good thing you haven't posted. I'd have gotten even less of tonight's essay done. *crosses out last two sentences*

Anyway, love your story, even if it does make Harry a bit too unrealistically macho and Snape unrealistically light-hearted, and everyone just a leetle unrealistic in general. It's fun, it's happy, and it has some deep profundities anyways.

POST!! You know you want the cookies.

pnthrgrl343 posted a comment on Monday 23rd October 2006 6:14am

I may be forced to leave similiar comments on EVERY SINGLE SITE this story is posted on. You haven't abandoned it have you? (It's not under the abandoned category, so I'm still holding out.) You said it yourself, there's only one chapter left! I'm begging, hands and knees. Update either this or Hope and I'll happy as a clam. =)