TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:49am

Very good story. Bummer at the end. Time for some payback.

gunny

kainboa posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:23am

brilliant chapter, i really loved the scene with the teddybear.

keep up the absolutely amasing work :)

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:12am

A most wonderful part of a chapter. Thanks for sharing

'Mione

Lee Steele posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:25am

Wonderful, I am so glad you are finishing your story, it is one of my favorites. lee steele

RMM posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:12am

So Happy So Happy!!!! I thought you gave up on this one. I have reread this story without Chapter 10 at least twice. I love the story and this chapter was great a few errors, but nothing that stumps you. I hope that you will update a little faster that this one please ;-)
Good work Thanks!!!

Uwe H. Kloss posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 5:20am

Jippiayeeehhh!
I nearly gave up on this one!

I usually am a bit of a stickler for correct grammar
an spellchecking, but for this one I'll always make
an exception.
So just post and redo it later if necessary.
It's better than some others WITH beta anyway.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 4:58am

A wonderful section here, loved the way that things are going, as well as that moment of horro Harry has, which does show that he feels emotions, as well as he's still a young man, that's been forced into a horrible situation, but is doing the best that he can.

Chris1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 3:21am

Woo!!!

*parties*

Now, I can't wait to see the rest of this *grins*

Very good work :)

Chris

paul2 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 2:10am

hey great story as always cant wait till its finished
just a note you said in the story "he was under the impression that his four jacks was going to top my full house" unfortunately four jacks does beat a full house mite want to fix that for the final betad version
cheers peace

María1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:43am

I love it! I have to say that the waiting has been worth it! I hope we can have more soon. Thank you for the present!

jilumasam posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:33am

Wonderful story so far! Thats about 4.5 hours of wonderful reading (and giggling/laughing!!).

Can't wait to see parts 2 and 3!

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:53am

OH, I love it.
You saied the other parts are already written! *crawls on knees* Please post 'em, pleeeaaaase!

Ronnee posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:53am

The prank was hilarious - my only problem is I'm reading it at 3:50am and can't belt out the sound or laugh aloud without waking the sleeping kids in the next room. I love it. read it more than once and still love it.

margaret1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:47am

Thank you very much for the lovely Christmas present - it was a fun read.

As I was reading this, I was trying figure out who the spy was and I still have no idea *laughs*

I do understand why you don't write Harry/Ginny anymore, but it was great to see them written again.

*applauds*

Pranavss11 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 11:18pm

All I have to say is that "You have a way with words" keep writing.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 11:11pm

Draco has been neutralized, and Narcissa and Bellatrix are working for *Harry* (while Lucius is becoming more and more of a liability to Moldie). Meanwhile, the three *least-likely* people to agree on *anything* (Harry Potter, Severus Snape, and Dudley Dursley) all agree that Vernon Dursley is a moron. (In fact, Dudley knocked Vernon out.) Meanwhile, Petunia is Silenced, Petrified, and bound by three *Hufflepuffs*. Fenrir Greyback is decidedly *dead* after making the error of running into Harry the Wolf, which nets Harry another thousand galleons (and special permission to use the Unforgivables against Moldie and Company). Things are lining up well for Harry; however, he hasn't found the leak yet.

Carina posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 10:07pm

good stuff! keep it up. i like the animagus bit and the mmail lines are hilarious

Verahsa posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 10:05pm

It's as wonderful as I expected, and I'm pleasantly surprised that you were able to take yourself back to the same mood that you were in when you wrote this. Thank you for putting the effort forth to find that certain mental place to be able to key into TMW again.

Characterizations are as spot in considering the fic as they were in the previous chapters. Harry's becoming very serious about getting this completed as quickly as possible, and it shows in everything and everyone around him.

You mentioned it was still un-beta'd, but that's minor. It's clean, crisp, fun, and alluring. It's what I've come to expect from your writing. You could theoretically do without the betas, because your storyline makes up for any mistakes here and there; with your betas' help, this will be as beautiful & fun a story as we dream of hearing from you, and their work is insanely appreciated. :)

In the meantime, Thank you for the Christmas present, Merry Christmas & Happy Holidays to you & yours (and your betas & theirs).

Nicholas

Ariyana posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 9:29pm

I am really glad you updated. Please do it again soon. This is like the one fic of two where I do not mind this pairing.

Ravenfur posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 8:52pm

That chapter was just amazing, even in it's un-beta'ed format. I, and probably a lot of other people here, appreciate the Christmas present. Amazing work and I hope to see another chapter of this (and Hope ;D) soon!
-Ravenfur