Aaron posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:49pm

Close it and do something else? As if that would ever happen!

This story is so witty-- I wonder how it is that you come up with it all. Well, this chapter was well worth the wait. What you're doing with the Malfoy family is great, I love it! Belated Merry Christmas to you.

Jon posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:47pm

The werewolf-wolf battle is a really nice piece of work - and it was a nice gesture for Remus. =)

Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:46pm

If the first part of this chapter's any clue as to what you're about to bring out to us altogether, it was more than worth the wait.

Merry Christmas!

Fred

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:41pm

Outstanding start. I loved the MMails. Really good stuff.

gunny

uthamm posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:36pm

Christmas Present, indeed! I defy you to find anyone who turned up their nose at your work, beta'd or not. Great Chapter - I like how you are incorporating the 'consequences' for the others 'use' of Harry's talent. Ginny's conversation with Blaise and Remus with Minerva were spot on. Actions have Consequences, right?

Very Well Done. Merry Christmas!

writer'sblock posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:36pm

Nice - I like how Harry handles Jenny. I suppose it might be slightly different in Hogwarts with two muggle famlies around?

Jon posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:30pm

Ryan Crys and Matthew Viridian eh? :P

Its been a long long time awaiting for this chapter! Thanks!

Oh, is this the epilouge chapter for TMW? Or did I mix it up with Hope?

Prince Charon posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:24pm

Happy Xmas!

Thank you for the update.

Very, very interesting.

More soon, please.

philh1985 posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:18pm

Yay! A *VERY* welcome holiday present, thanks!!! Loved the Graduate stuff!

Phil

C. Harris posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:14pm

I cannot wait to read it! In fact, I'm going to do that now! I'm so giddy!

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:08pm

Great chapter, the only thing was the wait but, as they say, all great things come in time.

I especially liked the allusion to V for Vendetta by Mr. Lovegood.

DJ posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:06pm

Thanks for the X-mas gift well done. As for "It has NOT been fully beatad yet" I did not see any problems. Also anyone who can nit pick while reading this grat bit of work is to much a pain for you to worry about. Thanks and I look foward to the rest.

BT posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 8:06pm

EEEEEEKK! You updated this story!

Unbeta'd or not, I liked it. Hope you add more again soon!

Lincoln posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 7:33pm

Bloody Ripper! If you do go through and edit it again, can you please leave a copy of this floating in the ether? It was thoroughly enjoyed in its entirity, and i'd hate for any part of it to be lost in a refining process!

Can't wait for the next two bits. Well done.

Lincoln

merik posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 7:28pm

A great chapter as always Tim,and i am sure we all appreciate you releasing this tidbit to us on Christmas :) If anyone hasn't said it yet then have a happy holiday and i as well as others look forward to parts two and three

Robert Owen posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 7:25pm

Bravo!

Crys posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 7:08pm

Well, at least I went out with a bang.

*g, d, rlh*

Seriously, good addition. The tone felt subtly different, but considering everything, that's hardly surprising.

Curious to know what the Padma and scents thing is all about.

Will do a full review when the "official" version comes out.

jason papile1 posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 7:06pm

Great bit, Tim. I have to commend you on the scene with Harry and Jenny. He has shown all the females how great of a boyfriend (and therefore a potential husband) he is. But now he has shown them what a great dad he can be. The writing was sweet for that and not even close to being nauseating. It made me grin while reading it. Of course, there's some action here and some hints at who the spy is. I wish I had the time to go back and see what was flittering around the edges of Harry's memories. Maybe later this week when the wife's at work and I'm not working on the new house. Thanks for the gift, Tim. A Merry Christmas to everyone out there, and a safe and fruitful New Year.

Jay

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 6:55pm

Sounds like my kind of steak. -grin- As for this part of Chapter 10, it maintains your excellent record for superb writing and engrossing storytelling. Thank you very much. I eagerly look forward to the next parts of this chapter and anything else you deign to share. Keep up the excellent work.

readerofhp posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 6:48pm

AHHHHHHHHHHH, that was the best christmas present!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great Jpb. I love this chapter

I hope the wait for the next cha[ter won't be as long, but it was so worth it