KenF posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 5:20am

I should have taken notes if I wanted to leave a good review. A few points come to mind, though. I liked the way you handled Harry's discovery of his strange ability and how his friends have been manipulating it. I also liked the part about how he felt when he was a wolf and the danger of getting stuck there.

And he'll have a fine line of work when he graduates as a teddy specialist.

This chapter is pretty clean despite the lack of a beta check. Thanks again.

KingDark posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 5:11am

I simply LOVE, LIKE, any word you can think of that says just that; I simply LOOOVE your story!
You have a real talent in writing man, and i wish I would have the same talent! The humor is hilarious, and I was laughing almost the whole time!
The part of the teddy bear was reall cute, and is THE proof you could be a pro writer!
Keep up the damn good work and i simply can not wait for an update, oh and i havent seen much grammatical errors along the chapter, so perhaps you could/should be focussing on writing a new chapter?
again, GOOD WORK

Kenny

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 4:07am

An interesting start to the chapter. There are a few things for your betas to catch (mostly mis-spelling and word transposition) but nothing too distracting.

The characterisation was good and the battle between wolf!Harry and Fenir Greyback was a great action sequence. I particularly found your suggestions about the drawbacks of the Animagus transformation very interesting.

So - Who is the spy? I would bet Daphne or someone completely unexpected (maybe one of the staff).

Should be interesting to see the reaction of those out of the loop of Narcissa's "seduction" of Harry. :-D

BenRG's Rating: 8/10 - I look forward to the finished product

Life's a Dance posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 1:30am

*Applauds* I am soo happy that you were able to take time out of what I'm sure is your busy schedule to write this chapter. I loved that bit at the end about the teddy bear...and now I wish I could have my favorite clown stuffie fixed like that. Anyway, I hope you had a Merry Christmas, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Cheers

Beau Wolff posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 1:17am

Mmmmmmm. Blue rare. Lop off the horns and hooves and let it nod at the stove as it passes by.

This chapter was well worth the wait.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 1:11am

This is a great story and soooo funny. My sides still hurt.

gunny

Darak1 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 12:53am

Didn't even read the chapter yet, just tought thanking you for the present took priority.

Merry Christmas,

Darak

Ike posted a comment on Tuesday 26th December 2006 12:43am

Great chapter! Its been so long since you've put anything out. Even unbeta'd, i only spotted one error that needs correcting.

"Harry smiled as he walked in and sat down on her couch. "How come your couch is so comfortable?" he asked. "The only one I’ve sat in that’s nicer is Abe’s, and he raided China for it."

Minerva smirked. "This couch used to belong to Albus, but he was under the impression that his four jacks was going to top my full house. He sulked for a week over it.""

Albus would have been right....his four jacks DO top Minerva's full house. Shed need a better four of a kind or a straight flush to beat him.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:53pm

Outstanding, this is so good. Really fun read.

gunny

BigCaanine posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:50pm

I just have to say that I am throughly enjoying this fic... I have not read anything that has made me laugh this hard and yet you still provide the action and adventure along with a bit of romance.

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:47pm

Still good and I like it, Thank you.

Ltank687 posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:44pm

OMG! Thank you so much for updating, congrats on finding a love to finish this tale and I can't wait for the next two parts! Thanks and good luck on that and Hope!

Welcome Back!

Stratagemini posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:44pm

Re: Is not latin for about. That would be De. Re is latin for Again.

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:40pm

Very much excellent. Too enthralled to think about any mistakes made due to short circuiting the beta process.

Thank you for the Christmas gift. Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

Jarrod posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:31pm

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sure I'm just one of a long list but great chapter keep it up.

John Conner posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 11:20pm

As alway Jeconais you spin an excellent tale. This as an excellent chapter. I found the bit with the visit to the Malfoy butterbear factory to be vastly entertaining. The fact that Greyback got his just deserts the way he did was also an excellent touch. As for the end piece with Jenny very well done. Keep up the excellent work.

Gena posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 10:58pm

omg omg please update soon i have read straight threw hey maybe harry can teach ginny that magic can have anything happen it is all up to you. And harry is so sweet i loved it so much. Maybe when harry becomes one with his wolf he wont have such a problem with the part of killing to proctet the ones he cares for. And i love snape 20 points to hufflepuff that was great, I hope ginny is a wolf and have hermione be a fox or ginny a fox and ron a wolf that be pretty cool. And thanks for the x-mas preast now will there be a new years eve present please.... This is so good i want to right more but its about 1am in a couple mintues and i have to go running in the morning. I love it please update soon, it is so good.

Bobmin356 posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 10:54pm

Excellent chapter! Can't wait to see the other parts!

JVTazz posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 10:27pm

YAY!! I've been waiting and wondering if it was going to continue YAY!! new chapter!! GOOD CHAPTER :)

AutumnHeart posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 10:20pm

You are made of awesomeness as always - a fun chapter (I'm jumping up and down on the inside atthe thought that this is only part one of three!) that picks up well from where chapter 9 left off so long ago.

Your use of Harry's 'suicide bomber' spell and the subsequent confontation with Greyback have been a very effective way to get Harry - and your readers - from the lighthearted parts of the story into the more serious ( I am _not_ making that pun) part of the endgame. I don't know any otherfanfic authour who could manage that sort of character and plot development in a story that also reaches the fun sort of crazyness that this one manages.

Thanks heaps for posting this - it was a brilliant Christmas present, and I'm looking forwardto the next bit.