By Jeconais
Reviews
Sheepstamper posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 7:20pm
keep this going....
Stupid Fox posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 6:47pm
Four of a kind IS better than full house.
noylj posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 3:19pm
Are you really going to finish this story in this chapter?
1) I will be sad to see the story end
2) It seems like a lot to cover in one chapter
Great part of a chapter.
MilkaZen posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 4:56am
Sorry but i couldn't wait ^_^
I read the end of chapter nine (again) before this first part of last chapter and i don't know how you did it but it's like if you wrote this chapter just after the 9th ^_^
I wait for the part b ;-)
Thanks for the present ^_^
noylj posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 11:01pm
"I promise that there will not be another massive wait for the final part, because I need to have this story finished before HBP arrives.:
I assume you were referring to the movie?
cheryl lynn posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 2:31pm
i love this story! i was so happy to see that you had updated. please hurry with the updates, i'm anxious to see how it ends.
i'm so glad that you saved dudley and the thomas's, i was worried about them.
i don't usually like super-harry stories, but yours is one of a select few that have captured my imagination and refuse to let go.
so - write, write, write (and don't forget to post!).
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 12:31pm
Sorry.
Have to say EEEEEEPPPP!
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 12:17pm
THANK YOU!!!!!!!
This is wonderful!!!!
This is the best christmas present I have ever received.
Thank you so much!!!!
I squealed for at least 10 minutes when I got the update and would have continued for longer if i hadn't been sat on.
Thank you.
I'm so happy!
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 9:29am
Great chapter, er, third of a chapter. :-)
It's wonderful to see more of TMW. Many thanks for sharing it with us.
Daven posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 12:55am
Very nice found somhin though...
Harry climbed to his feet, a thoughtful expression on her face.
Her or his? and if her who?
that was all i really noticed. Still love it, still want more of it..
Lufio posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 12:20am
Ah, learn something new each day. Was confused there for a while when you called the meat "Blue".
However, the winning hand on the poker game between Minerva and Albus was kinda iffy to me. A Full House beat Four of a Kind? The heck? It'd take a Staight Flush or a Five of a Kind to beat Four of a Kind. At least, in the games I've played.
SilentKunoichi posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 9:52pm
This fic is one of the best fics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. And let me assure you I have read thousands(no joke) and I like to believe I am good at choosing which fics are good. (lol) I absolutely love it! Though my friend thought I should mention, there is a song that fits well with this fic. Welcome to the Family by Little Big Town. http://youtube.com/watch?v=Z95Vbdv2rXI
Here is a great video that went with the song. Though if you watch it, be sure to read the side description first. ;D
jwatt85 posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 7:47pm
This story is adorable. Write more soon.
Eric Heldman posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 11:59am
Hello Jeconais,
I'm a long term reader and first time reviewer for your wonderful story This Means War. I am a big fan of H/G and your story was included in a set of fan-favorites for that pairing.
So I read it (and later re-read and re-re-read...) and have loved the humor, the strongGinny perspective and the development of Harry into a strong planner and warrior.
This review: (as I said first-timer) I have always considered the funny stuff to be the hallmark of this story, but I had to compliment you on the amazing feelings that the stuffed bear Matilda inspired there at the end. Bravo!
Jamie46 posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 1:16am
Happy sighhhhhhhh :) SO worth 18+ months of wait. A fantastic chapter. I loved the Dudley scenes and the bit with Jenny and Hogwarts. I loved the Goblins, and the fight with Fenrir. Poor Harry accidentally killed those guys, but the girls couldn't keep Harry's ability from him forever. Interesting that Narcissa will be saved; we shall presume that Draco will as well (for the reasons she gave and b/c it was part of her deal). I love his new rooms, too. Overall, just one heck of a great chapter. :) Way to go. Thanks so much.
Steven Augart posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 9:34pm
TMW Chapter 10a Review (unbeta'd version)
I've enjoyed it so far, and I am giving this little bit of feedback in lieu of your betas going at it yet.
You write:
I’ve got a list of Aurors and I’ve cleared it with Amelia, as long as we don’t actually kill anyone who is innocent, we’ll have no troubles.
Kingsley
Since you have two sentences linked with a comma splice, I suggest turning the first comma into a semicolon.
You write:
expression on his friends’ face
You probably want:
expressions on his friends’ faces
Matt posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 7:52pm
I'm all for reading the rest unbeta'ed. Hope you're enjoying the holidays. Tell your mother I said hello.
Lurk posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 6:49pm
::screams::
I haven't even read the chapter yet, but the instant I saw your post (the chappies are coming!!!) I came here, saw it, and LITERALLY started SQUEALING! Honestly, if I was someone else hearing myself making those noises, I would hit myself.
So!!!!!!!!!!! ::squeals louder!::
I wish there was some way you could actually HEAR my excitement!
::seizures:: SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAALLLLLLL!!
I'ma gonna go read it now!
SQUUUUEEEEEEEAAAALLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
justme posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 5:37pm
Thank you for the great update. I went back and read the first nine chapters again (for the fifth time, and I still laughed myself sore) before I read Ten. It was worth the wait, though I thought he got over being lied to and manipulted a little quickly ...that could have taken another page or two. I mean most of the staff, everyone who helped revive Snape, Ron and Hermione, Sirius and Remus... everybody that he counted on played with him like a toy (Ooh, let's wind it up and see what it can do...). That just seems a little more than a run and a little animal conflict could cure overnight.
I know, I know... a little deep for a Comedey/Romance.
Thanks again for the great read.
Can't wait for part B.
No Idea Why I Smile posted a comment on Monday 1st January 2007 3:43pm