By Jeconais
Reviews
lovelylady posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 12:41pm
I so can't wait for another update!
Amamama posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 12:41pm
As brilliant as always. Man, I love this story. And the magical theory you have here is quite intriguing. However, I found a small irregularity - the warden is introduced as Claudia Striven, then twice mentioned as Augusta before she becomes Claudia again, further down. I guess it is the same person, beacuse that's the only way it makes sense, so I guess she changed name at some part while you wrote? No big deal, but with the attention to detail you have, I guess you'd want this right too.
Thanks a bunch!
PerfesserN posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 12:26pm
Thank you for a very moving chapter, I'm having a little trouble focusing right now as my eyes are brimming; and I thank you for that too. It has been a wonderful ride thus far and as much as I'd like to see what happens next I know that what happens next will be the conclusion. It'll be saying goodbye to loved ones and friends and that's sad.
Isn't it wonderful to have a story so good you hate to see it finis?
jorrit musters posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 11:37am
wow
Hot48cricket posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 11:25am
That was fantastic!
Tumshie posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 11:13am
Excellent once more, I await the next update with breath well and truly baited
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:38am
Wow. This was a wonderfully fantastic chapter, the scene with Harry riding the dragons was magnificent, as well as Harry really growing into the leader of the wizarding world that he needs to be, the comic part of what Narcissa was supposed to do, followed by what she could have done had Harry been just a little less dedicated,and if she'd been just a bit more determined was great as well.
No Idea Why I Smile posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:19am
well...all i can say is...
Damn...
that was just...wow...very cool...i cant even begin to express it...
damn damn damn...im like in awe now...really and truly in awe...
okay...
the end part is the aweing part...i mean, that dragon ride was so...wow...
i am very inarticulate, no? thats how much shock and awe im in...
Ginny says harry is going to be minister...well, i doubt she realized he was going to be so much more than that...i mean, i can just see him starting a world council with the other creatures, kind of like the UN, only, with every species known and unknown...
and i would love to see Dragon riding lessons...wow...
i am still...omg...
im gonna go now, because i am now kind of embarrassed...
truly wonderful chapter...awe inspiring, and...just...wow...
i love the interaction between Jenny and Harry...its adorable...and...hed make such a good dad...:D
Harry will more than likely tear down all statutes of secrecy before he leaves Hogwarts...
okay...i cant wait for the next - and is it the final - chapter...
i am still in awe, and am going to leave it here...truly brilliant, and wonderful, and i just absolutely love it...
~*NIWIS*~
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:19am
I have just read all the other reviews and mine seems silly now! ah well. I just have to tell you that this story and all your others have helped to change my life other the last two years. I won't go into it, but just to say thank you. Its amazing, the gift you have to reach out to people you've never met and changer their lives for the better.
Thank you.
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:14am
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!!! So much!
Thank you!!!
I am so happy!! I felt I was flying with them. It sounds corrny but you sent a powerful message and given me a different view on life. I'm not ashamed to admit it.
Thank you!
There aren't really words to describe it
Thank you!
Dragen posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:10am
What another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going.
I think that people seeing Moony change into a werewolf was a good idea.
I also think that what Harry said '"There are no limits on Magic, but the limits that we impose. With enough power, we could accomplish anything. Spells, charms, curses, they are nothing but focusing tools for what we want to do. They are the structures and guidelines that we play in, but they aren’t needed, not if we go beyond them and refuse to accept them. I think that is ture.
I like it that Ron dived over Hermione, taking them both to the floor, and rolled under the table, when Harry said he was thinking.
LoL... I love it, Severus Snape blushing like a schoolgirl, who would have thought.
Clover... no-one would think of chick the Kissed Death Eaters, so they wouldn't know if they escaped or not.
Oh I do like Harry using his wolf side to take control of the Werewolves... I don't think they would dare cross Harry. And Harry showed them that he is Alpha.
LoL... Voldemort think that he has more wandless skill then Harry, the fool.
Hermione doesn't like it that Harry is right what he is saying about wandless magic and other things.
I am happy that Harry is helping Blaise in starting her dream job.
I can't wait to see the battel to get the world back to the way it use to be, and see Harry finding the lost races that are out there but hiden. I would like to see what evil will stand in the way, that could be a good sequle.
kainboa posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:01am
this is absolutely brilliant, the scene with the dragon is awe inspiering.
keep up the great work :)
jenks posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 9:43am
love it
Paulo Weber posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 9:34am
Oh,My GOD! This is the most impressive piece of fanfic I've ever read!
Slytherdor posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 9:11am
"The sad thing is that it’s immoral for us to bet on ourselves.
Remus."
lmao
You are BY FAR my favorite author!
I love how you make harry so powerful & out of this word...but then you add parts that make him human!
And harry going to space?
SWEET!
Skip posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 8:23am
An excellent chapter. You are correct that the spy was very obvious, well ..immediately after you told us. I find it very amusing to have Harry as the first wizard astronaut. You are by far the best author I have ever read, and I am not speaking of just fanfiction. The images and feeling you are able to create make me able to almost watch the movie while I am reading. Thanks again!
Kat Armstrong posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 7:51am
Just gobsmacked! Your writing is beautiful as always, and as a couple of others have said, I would have sworn fealty to Harry at the end there as well.
We just need your Harry over here in Northern Ireland to sort our politicians out ...
Crys posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 7:49am
Something feels different in the tone. Harry's much more blatantly in charge, I guess. He's been slowly building up in his command stature, but this is much more an "in your face" kind of thing. Not a bad thing, necessarily, just different.
Did you have to call it Marge's Secret Lingerie Store? *shudder*
Yes, Flint, this proves you do indeed have a few screws loose.
Good try, Cissa.
Interesting insights into the psychology behind the werewolves. The whole mimicing thing.
> Veela tears
*blink* *think* Oh, clever wordplay.
> these hallowed halls.
*laugh* Did you choose that word in particular for any reason? :)
> He’s spent more time as a wolf, and it’s changed his personality slightly,
Ah, okay, ignore my first comment. That was intentional. And now that it's explained like this, it makes more sense.
> "You know," Harry said slowly, "I really don’t care."
<coldly> Good riddance.
> He enjoyed immensely the look of chagrin and worry that flashed over their faces.
Ah, good. We DO have a little torment for the two.
Gack! Jec, you were trying to get us to think Blaise was going to seduce Harry with Ginny in the room, weren't you? Either you or I (or both of us) have been spending way too much time around a certain harem fic writer.
> Ginny seemed to find the need to make deep breathing a national hobby, and stretching an Olympic sport, as she settled down firmly across his lap.
> as she undid her bra with an audible rustling of clothing.
> Molly’s voice called through the doorway
You are evil.
> "What ever happened to my shy little sister?" Ron asked the ceiling.
> "She grew B-cup boobs and got herself the best boyfriend in the world,"
*laugh* And she grew an attitude to match Harry's cojones . . .
> More than just an anything
I'm sure that means something (it's consistently Cissa's .sig), but damned if I can understand it
Love Kingsley's .sig, BTW. Tonks doesn't have one, though . . . "More than meets the eye", "Beauty is only skin deep", "Your eyes can deceive you; don't believe them", all sorts of possibilities.
Harry and Gwyneth made it supersonic and then ended up in orbit . . . Okay, now that's just showing off.
That whole scene at the end was pretty deep. Not bad, but certainly not light-hearted. This fic does have a little of everything, doesn't it?
DrT posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 7:26am
I cannot express how much I enjoyed that chapter (esp. the dragons to the end). It was brilliant.
"T"
Louise Tolson posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 12:55pm