noylj posted a comment on Saturday 26th April 2008 10:14pm

Maybe I have the timeframe wrong, but in this chapter as H&G are heading to breakfast, Harry note:
"She appeared a few minutes later, her robes undone, showing her school uniform. " Now, first of all, if I was into canon, I would say that it was movie pollution that made you write about a uniform.
However, in the next chapter you have Ginny taking off her school robes and Harry noting that she, too, did not wear her school uniform. I missed the scene where she changes clothes between breakfast and Minnie's class.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Saturday 26th April 2008 3:20pm

luv this chapter to this funny, romatic, all around enjoyable tale

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Friday 25th April 2008 9:06pm

i luv this chapter; this tale just gets better and better.

AJ4 posted a comment on Friday 25th April 2008 7:02pm

Excellent story. I really enjoyed the intersting beginning up though the action-packed ending. It was truely a wonderful story and one of the best H/G fics that I've read in quite some time!

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Friday 25th April 2008 6:45pm

OMG i cant believe that in this tale Malfoy is gay the little weasle. i am totally happy that u came up with a funny way to insult malfoy. Bravo...Bravo...Bravo. really great so far luv it.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Friday 25th April 2008 3:26pm

i luv this chapter it is really funny. oh and i agree i like the idea of MMail. Also i luv the conversations that padfoot and moony have.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Thursday 24th April 2008 5:33pm

i like the beginning to this tale. it is funny, sweet, and serious. i have read this tale twice already; just havent had time to comment yet so i am rereading it again to refresh my memory and commenting on every chapter. enjoy the comments keep writing. oh and just to inform you TMW and HOPE. are my favorite so far of your fic. PEEEEEEEEEEASE keep writing

Rovias05 posted a comment on Thursday 17th April 2008 5:09pm

You really didn't need to keep the language G-ratd, you know. And it's perfectly alright to have the war as the centrepoint of a story - all your stories seem to use Voldemort and the war as a write-off or simple background characters. The main plot always revolves around Harry and his love interest(s).

While fine, most if not all your stories share that main plot, which makes most of your stuff a bunch of fluff pieces. WK, GQ was better about that, and I do look for a sequel someday, though.

TMW just typifies the plot you recycle, and it gets tedious. 5/10.

Milarqui posted a comment on Sunday 30th March 2008 3:02am

Well, I finally found the clue about the spy! I've read this story a few times, and the clue was clear: in the message Bellatrix sends Snape about why she wants to change sides, she complains that Voldemort, whenever he wants something, he turns to Lucius Malfoy and Peter Pettigrew!!! She didn't say anything about doing it in the past, but rather in the present!

Ricky Gene Thompson posted a comment on Saturday 29th March 2008 4:45pm

Well having read many HG fics I have to say I prefer your developing of the ship over 90 percent of them! I hope your moving problems are solved soon. A sincere thank you for sharing your plot bunnies with the rest of us.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Saturday 29th March 2008 10:56am

Okay i have read all chapters all the way from "Surprise Snog" and i totally luv it. it is so creative and a little twisted but i like that because it shows ur creativaty. Keep writing, just i dont want ot be rude or mean but u really should get ur spelling up to beat and grammer as well just some advice. Either way i will read anything cause this is so good and a little twisted but like i said before i like that.

Aelita posted a comment on Tuesday 25th March 2008 7:01am

I just reread this and I still think that its great! I also think that you should write some more Harry Potter fanfiction because all you have done recently is not very long! I love all your stories, even the dark ones-which i normally don't like. Anyway great job on this story I Love It! Thank you so much!

Regina Noctis posted a comment on Monday 24th March 2008 2:26pm

Oh. God. I am in the middle of a public library, and I am choking on suppressed laughter. I just LOVE the Mmail idea!! So cute!! D'you mind if I borrowed the idea in one of my fics, too??

Thanks, and I've loved EVERYTHING that you've written, Jeconais! (Especially "Hope". . . wow. Made me really rethink the possibility of a Harry/Gabrielle relationship, a demented Dumbledore, and a truly powerful and emotional Harry Potter. ^_^)

From the newest member,
Regina

P.S. How can I start publishing on this site?

tashriia posted a comment on Monday 24th March 2008 4:56am

Great story, absolutely loved it! Made me laugh and made me cry. Gotta love it when that happens. So glad I read it when it was fully complete, as it would have driven me bonkers waiting for more.

MOD posted a comment on Thursday 13th March 2008 3:06pm

Hey! Did someone tell you that you are really good!

DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 20th February 2008 3:24pm

The end of this chapter reminds me again of what could have been -- Harry at the end of book 5 was poised to be the hero king, the remaker of society, the bringer of justice. To use the LOTR as analogy, he was set to go from Strider to Aragorn. Instead, it turned out Harry was Samwise all along

"T"

Lady_Hope posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2008 6:39am

rereading this over again i have a question about it.
i thought it was imposible for anyone other than harry (except the dumbledores and voldy) to apparate through the wards. then how did mcg and snape go inot thevoid form dumbledores office? thats always bugged me.

Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Monday 11th February 2008 1:10pm

OH btw... At this point Dudley would either be in College - at which i don't think he would be - or working.
Or like me and be looking for a job but no one taking him on at all - Remember. 11 year old - start high school.
High school here, has 5 years, not 7. Hogwarts has 7 for both high and college - Newts being wizarding A-Levels.

College 2- or 3 depending, years.
So if you ever make a change or explain something elsewhere about that, you could say when he left Smeltings and *barely* got into college, he met Sheryl and so on... or that , with harry being all isolationist that summer, harry didn't hear that dudley got kicked out toward the end and had to drop back a year when going to stonewall hence a year-discrapancy. I know this happens as, a lad named leon had moved just a week into our year 10 (4th year hogwarts), and he should have by all rights been in year 11 - a week to catch up isn't much. but they knocked him back a full year.
He already had most of the year's coursework, having done it when he did a full year 10 at his last school. So he had more time for bullying *rolls eyes*

Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2008 2:33am

halfway through this chapter. Just wondering... if Abe could charm a goat to talk english - can he also charm a snake to do so aswell? ... or charm a person to er... communicate like an animal with other animals? hehe.

Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Tuesday 5th February 2008 11:41pm

im guessing that the potion snape 'brewed up quick' wasnt really potion hence no steam? hehe.