Michelle posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 12:41pm

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! Probably the only non-H/G story I will every enjoy! Continue as fast as you possibly can, please :D

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 11:05pm

Wow, that was amazing. I cannot wait to read on, it's almost necesity. I'm so amazed at this story. It is of the highest quality in my eyes.

Hoss posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 3:41pm

Quit a good story to this point and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I find it interesting that in this story that Dumbledore is the new actor it the move, but in This Means War it's Harisson Dumdledore that pops in to my head, go figure. Keep the good work and I hope your haveing as much fun wrighting this story as I'm reading it. Thanks

InAshenSilence posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 3:58pm

WOW.... WOW.... I'm speechless. This has been extremely well written thus far. I feel that I've been flattened by your talent. I look forward to more.

Inimene posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 11:15am

Woah! That one of the best post-Voldemort storys I'v read. While the manipulation was a little off it was great for the story. I havent seen many Harry/Gabrielle storys so the pairing is quite refreshing. Keep up the good work and update soon.

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2005 7:13pm

Okay, I must leave another review. Nit:

"Harry," Gabrielle called in English, as she
put her head around the door, a nervous
expression on her face.

She calls out his name - in English? mmm... wouldn't his name be his name regardless of language?

also, update soon!!1!eleventy-first

your fans are getting restless. ;)

ginyginger posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2005 2:31pm

I just love this chapter, I think it's maybe the best of this story, but I can't wate 'till the next one !! when are you going to update ??? soon I hope !!! more then 10 days !!! that's tooooo long!!!

bye ! update sooooonnnn !!!!!!!!!!

Macabro posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 2:26pm

This was an excelent chap. I like a lot all the story. Want to read more...

Tahlia posted a comment on Tuesday 6th December 2005 5:09pm

Hey Jeconais, this is the best fan fic ever, with TMW a very close second. You definately have a creative way with words. PLease, please, please update soon, I'm going through withdrawls and have resorted to reading crappy 3rd rate fan fics by wannabe writers. Keep writing in lots of Harry and Gabrielle time, those moments are touching.

PLease!!!!!! When are you going to update?

AmonRA posted a comment on Tuesday 6th December 2005 1:15am

Wow... This story is amazing! I'll definitely actively seek the next installment.

Daniel Hensley posted a comment on Sunday 4th December 2005 11:31am

I find this story very interesting. I was wondering when you were going to update next.

Roxy posted a comment on Saturday 3rd December 2005 3:34pm

Okay, so I recently stumbled upon your story, This Means War. I enjoyed that enourmously by the way. Well after reading that in a record of 2 days, I just had to check out your other storys. This is the first one I clicked on, and surprise surprise I was hooked:) I love your writing, its amazing, you have a talent with words. You have also, with this story put a spin on Harry Potter that I did not think of. And this chapter, actually blew me away. Amazing. Please update!

borgeirgens posted a comment on Friday 2nd December 2005 12:32pm

Absolutly awesome! This is probably the only fanfiction I am regulary checking for updates. When will the next one be? One thing I noticed was the way you used absolutly many times. It's probably my imagination because I read the chapter so many times. Who am I to know?

ulkser posted a comment on Friday 2nd December 2005 12:30pm

it's been more than a week. in fact 9 nine days since your last update. in your group, you once said that you would update once a week. and you did like taht with last three chapters and we got used to that speed of updates. so please update please update please update please update.


you really wirte superb. one of my favourite writers uot there. please don't make us wati more.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2005 3:13pm

Awesome chapter, great job with the whole beach trip. it rocked! I really enjoyed the whole chapter entirely, I think as you write more your getting a better and better hanlde on the chars and the story is improving even more. Cheers!

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2005 2:26pm

Wow. That chapter rocked top to bottom, especially the whole date was amazing. Great job.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2005 1:42pm

Damn good chapter J! I liked the discussion between ron hermione and Jean. That was very well done. Also harry's temptation test of gabby was brilliant and well played. Amusing job on the smack down of draco and snape.... very good. Then brining the others into help train the team is damn cool! Cheers!

Jon3 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th November 2005 2:24pm

Woah..simply woah, this is one of the best stories of read, can't express how good it is in words but ill be looking forward to Chapter 7. :)

Jimbocous posted a comment on Wednesday 30th November 2005 1:41am

I really like what you're doing with this so far, and I'm glad you've come back to this piece. Thanks!

Sean Melton posted a comment on Wednesday 30th November 2005 12:44am

I've now read Ch. 6 an even 10 times, and I think it's some of your best work.

The line "Sleep took him in an instant. He was content, his heart was at rest. He was no longer alone." is a really nice bit of wordcraft. It gives me little warm fuzzies for Harry. :)

-Sean