noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 16th May 2006 1:00am for 9 - London

Re-reading, since there hasn't been an update in so long.
Your own sentence says "...if you think..." so it clearly has to be "another think coming." One should always do what is right and not what is easy.
When you write about "the final part," I hope that doesn't mean any time soon...

DawnsRedemption posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 1:55am for 9 - London

WOW! Some stories just seem so right. This is one of them, everything you write seems to fit together like it was ment to be. You have perfected Harry&co's characteristics reflecting how they would act as adults (which I've seen some authors royally stuff up).
Well done! You Rock!

David Gilles posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 11:01pm for 9 - London

Oh wow, this story is amazing. I don't generally like reading post hogwarts stories, but this is the cream of the crop. I can't wait till you put out a new chapter. Please do it soon...

Chrisyansick@hotmail.com posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 4:42pm for 9 - London

Perhaps the best chapter you have ever written.

BloodRevan posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 4:31pm for 9 - London

Hehehe. Fuckin' Awesome.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 12:13pm for 9 - London

WOW!, Now that I got to this point in this story I had to leave a review. I have never seen a story this well with a Harry/Gabrielle ship. And the back story of why Harry has had girl troubles, gives it that perfect touch. I hope you update this story very soon. It is getting to the good parts. I want to see what you have Harry do to propose to Gabrielle.

Keep up the Great writing
MPF

Elina posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 8:18am for 9 - London

Wow. I can't believe how much I missed your writing. I really enjoying this story. I just miss Remus. :(

masiypotter posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 8:05am for 9 - London

yea! this story is fantisic i love so far keep writing

WWIIIKitten posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 12:40am for 9 - London

Ok, read and reread (and reread and reread and... Well you get the point) the chapter now and for the life of me I can't think of anything to say. Not a damn thing.

That only happens when there's nothing I can comment on, bad or otherwise.

Wait. Not true. I can say one thing. One small point of criticism. There's not enough; I want more! *breaks down in tears*

Ok, ignore that. Just wanted to let you know that I read it and VERY MUCH appreciated it.

Kit - who feels this review was useless, but felt compelled to say *something*

Hannah3 posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 3:53pm for 9 - London

So, is the next part the final one?

mike8 posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 11:40am for 9 - London

First I would like to say Great Job, I look forward to your stories and drop whatever I'm doing when the update and read them. Second I always heard "you have another thing coming" too. And finally I can't wait for the next update.

-Mike

Justblaise posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 11:03am for 9 - London

It was an okay chapter; definantely entertaining but some things were a bit much.

Again, Snape and Malfoy seemed too dumb/irrational to me. Something I didn't really pay attention to before, though, was that the way you characterized Harry seems a wee bit too smart. Don't get me wrong, it's quite entertaining and maturely written, but it seems like he can just do....everything. Other stories have gotten dull with writing characters like that, so I'm hoping it doesn't happen here.

And at the end: I thought Trelawney didn't remember any of her real prophesies, and given her normally morbid-toned predictions, why would she See a romantic trip to New York? I know none of this story can be considered canon, and certain characterizations probably tie in with your overall plot, but still...

As for your desire to hinder readers from sending "when you gonna update" messages, it seems like a lose-lose situation: if you don't mention what a chapter's status is, you'll get said messages; if you say that it IS ready, you'll get "when are the betas gonna finish" messages" (i'm a member of your yahoo group, and made the mistake of not selecting the batch email function...aside from the annoyance of flooding my inbox, I'd say a good 70-80% of the messages were asking when the betas would be finished with Hope 9)

I won't just heap critcisms on you; as always, your creativity and writing style are top-rate.Keep it up

redquail posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 10:23am for 9 - London

Thanks this chapter is as good as is always put out by you and your betas. Hope to read more soon

Fiona O'Neill posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 9:27am for 9 - London

I meant to ask will be finding out anymore back story to Chang and Voldemort or has it all been explained?

Fiona O'Neill posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 9:26am for 9 - London

'Lo there

REally enjoyed this chapter although I felt that Harry's pretended disinterest in Gabbys plight when confronted by the Hogwarts professors a little disconcerting coming from asupposed responsible adult.

I'm intrigued by the possible storyline that Snape is doing something to Dumbledore.

I love the Quidditch team idea.

Thanks for writing

Fiona

ThunderGod posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 8:42am for 9 - London

well I did something I wasn't going to do..I started reading Hope before i was finished..and Its great as usual for Tim, and am left waiting for another chapter..I should have learned with TMW..oh well it was worth it..it gave me a few hrs of enjoyment and entertainment..

Any ship seems to be workable when Tim writes it...keep it up

ThunderGod

harrison potter posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 3:09am for 9 - London

Great great chap.Damn Malfoy got away,bollocks.

Again great Harry/Gabby dialogue with all the fluffiness and whatever that entails in their Fairy Tale relationship.

Can't wait for next chap.

Jamie posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 1:14am for 9 - London

this was definately worth the wait!! gotta say you are one of the best ff writers on the net, cant wait for the next update

haphazard1 posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 12:42am for 9 - London

Definitely worth the wait! Trelawney will be trouble, but I think Harry will be able to overcome it. That fight may bring everything to a head with the Ministry corruption, the Mouthpiece, and the rest, though. With the way the younger generation (mostly former DA members) are pulling together, things may finally improve.

Loved the quidditch matches and the Lee Jordan commentary, and the Gryffindor team deciding to create their own professional club. The duel was also tremendous fun; you write these action sequences very well. And seeing Malfoy humiliated again and again never gets old.

Now for the long wait for the next part. When each chapter is this large, though, there's really no room for complaint. Keep up the wonderful work, and I'll look forward to finding out what happens when those pictures go public.

patrik svensson posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 12:24am for 9 - London

Great story,
keep up the good work.