Greg Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:55pm for 9 - London

Another excellent chapter! Now that you have taken care of Malfoy I really hope you'll do something equally as good to Snape! The next chapter is sure going to be a lot of fun. :-)
Keep up the good work.

asher1978 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:51pm for 9 - London

Outstanding part. I really enjoyed the Quidditch and the duels. Keep up the great work and more soon please.

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:49pm for 9 - London

No new info on whatever is wrong with Albus. You're doing a masterful job of masking his real situation.

Such wonderful jobs of both Harry and Gabrielle utterly humiliating Malfoy.

I liked how you distinguished who on the Hogwarts faculty team you were singling out. Two deez and one utterly immoral player. The others were innocent bystanders and they (well, you) treated them as such.

That block off the bond thing is still perking? Huh. Couple possible directions that can go. My "reader" and "writer" sides are fighting over which I'd vote for ;)

That quidditch team thing blindsided me. Grand idea, though. Solves many, many problems for our hero and heroine and their future. Gonna call them the London Lions? :)

Good ending of the duel. Malfoy escapes so he's a continuing irritant.

Hmm, Trewlaney with a smear campaign . . . That'll get ugly for a little while.

Most definitely looking forward to more. Wonderous yarn you're spinning for us, boss.

Serendipity posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:49pm for 9 - London

Oh, yeah. Forgot to say this in my last review about two minutes ago, but the use of the Fidelius and Riddikulus charms was brilliant and hilarious. Never let it be said that Harry can't strategize... :)
~*~LIZ

Serendipity posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:47pm for 9 - London

Wa-HOO!!!!! Harry, Oliver, Fred & George, and Angelina, Alicia & Kaite on a PROFESSIONAL team together? Their OWN professional team? You ARE going to write about one of their games, aren't you? Oh, I hope you are. Loved the duel, by the way, and Lee and Percy are wonderful, and I'm a mite bit concerned about Trelawney... but...

GO GO GRYFFINDOR!

That was great. Do it again. :D

Cheers,
~*~LIZ

Scott Holmes posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:41pm for 9 - London

nice, very wonderful piece of work yet again.
i really enjoyed reading it.

light fan posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:39pm for 9 - London

The long wait was worth it! What an extensive chapter, full of action and many surprises. I'm glad you've returned to one of my favorite fanfic stories. Thanks!

Yojo posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:37pm for 9 - London

This chapter was utterly amazing, and well worth the wait. THANK YOU! keep up the excellent work; I loved the effort you put into the quidditch matches, it really goes above and beyond everyone else. Great job with everything!

Alvin Au posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:37pm for 9 - London

great chapter... definitely worth the wait... when Malfoy was getting taken to school during the Professor's match was simply awesome... althou would've been even better if Albus got some as well... the fight between Malfoy and Gabby was DEFINITELY one of the more interesting duels i have read... "Transvestite For Hire" was hilarious... please keep up the good work and i hope you get a lot of reviews for such an amazing chapter... take care... =)

Lacus posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:34pm for 9 - London

Ich Bin Ein Berlinner - means 'I am a Berliner' quoted by JFK in response when the Berlin Wall was constructed. Great chapter despite the long wait for an update till next time

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:31pm for 9 - London

This was an especially excellent chapter. The only problem with chapters this long, is it leaves too much in my mind for me to comment on individual parts. I would just like to say that we all appreciate your work and the assistance that your betas have provided you.

I agree with you on the "You've got another thing coming" part. 'Think' doesn't make any sense, at all.

Thank you for writing and sharing your work.

Mike (MoA)

Cromi posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:22pm for 9 - London

You make me happy. Thank you =)

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:21pm for 9 - London

Excellent chapter!

Krum still rocks. :-)

The faculty match was awesome! One of, if not the best written Quidditch matches I've ever read. It's not very often that I feel like I can follow a written game like that and get excited about it.

Lee Jordan was excellent throughout.

I love the idea of Harry & company starting their own team.

Harry Apparating all over Hogwarts--and the world--is highly amusing. Krum's reaction was even funnier than Hermione's.

Thanks for sharing this with us. :-)

freakyfinger posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:18pm for 9 - London

I've been waiting so long for this! Well, I'm not gonna complain . . . I rarely update my stories . . . I should write more . . . Anyway, will Trelawney release the pictures before or after Harry publicly asks Gabrielle to be his wife?

cmzanna posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:18pm for 9 - London

whew! what a wonderful installment! completely love the way you dealt with Gabby directly disobeying an order from Harry. Never saw the Team idea coming at all, and it's a marvelous one :) can't wait to see what you finally do to Dumbles and Snape, plus I hope Trelawny and Malfoy have ajoining rooms in the dungeons or something... they need to get theirs and I have no doubt that they will be dealt with masterfully.

Thanks for another delicious chapter and here's looking forward to the finale!

Roxy1 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:13pm for 9 - London

Wow.

Great chapter, probably my favorite one so far. This made my day, I almost fell off my chair when I saw that it had been updated!

I loved how you had Viktor help train Gabrielle. I also loved the stratagy of the Fidelius during the duel. I never would have thought of that, and I doubt any other writer would have thought of it either.

I cant wait until the next chapter, but it will be sad when its all over and done with. The final part will be both a happy moment for me, but sad because its over. love-hate.

But great job on the chapter, and I cant wait for the next one!

Black Dragon Knight posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:11pm for 9 - London

This is one of the best HP stories that I've found, and I really enjoy how you make the Gabrielle/Harry pairing believable. All of the Quidditch matches were done nicely, you can almost see the moves you described in your head. The duel was an interesting way to get Draco to reveal himself, I liked Harry's line about Draco reverting to form. Is the next part the final part?

Tim Henderson posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:11pm for 9 - London

This reminds me of a standard Super Power Harry story the way the Concorde reminds me of a biplane!! It far and away outclasses it. This is outstanding and your penchant for writing books diguised as later chapters makes it even more so. You have an amazing gift for this, thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:11pm for 9 - London

Cheers! I'm so glad to have been able to help in some small way. This was SUCH FUN! May your muse inspire you again soon :D

Bryan Sherrell posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:09pm for 9 - London

Finnaly! You updated! Very good chapter. Nice and long to. I hope that Trelawney isint going to get away with "The Ministry Mouthpiece". That would kinda suck. But very good, all the same. Next time try not to take a full 4-5 months updating next time. people will think that it is abandoned. And ceatch Malfoy, he is a bastard and should have been killed off in HBP.