Deborahsu posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 2:01am for 7 - Milan

I love this story. It is unique, well written, and somehow manages to be even better with each chapter. Thank you!

Jesse Hannon posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 11:52pm for 7 - Milan

K havent read the chapter yet (7) but just thought you should know that in your msg about spelling things wrong you spelt please plese, lol, i just found it funny, will review again after the chapter, cheers and so far so good.

Drake posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 8:40pm for 7 - Milan

I'm not sure if you remember or not, but I think it might be prudent to note that Durmstrang is supposed to be in Bulgaria, or at least that's what we can tell from the fact that Krum plays for Bulgaria. Plus, it makes it sound like Durmstrang is a slavic name, and what better place than an eastern european country. Great chapter, can't wait for the next. Merry holidays and a happy new year.

Ruskbyte posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 5:15am for 7 - Milan

Katie was the fourth girl, huh? Didn't expect that - I was betting on it being Hermione.

Loved the arrival at Hogwarts. Can't wait to see all that's going to happen now that the board's set and all the pieces in place. One almost feels sorry for the bad guys. Almost.

jmcqk6 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 6:13pm for 7 - Milan

WOW! Great chapter! I especially enjoyed the arrival at hogwarts, and Harry's secret army that he didn't know about. Great work here! I can't wait to read more!

Regress posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 12:13pm for 7 - Milan

Nice!

I love the entrance, flying the entire castle over would certainly have left quite the impression. I also like how you've taken pains to show that Gabrielle, as human as she may seem, is NOT entirely human and reacts very differently than most of us would.

The only criticism I have is that it seems to me that Olympe seems to have handed over the reins of her school to Harry and Gabrielle. Although they are doing a phenominal job, I was a bit surprised that Harry would just jump in to control so quickly and blatantly. I suppose that would be him being older and more mature than the child we know from the Canon, but it was still a bit of a surprise.

Good job, thanks for the update during the holidays, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

ana posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 12:00pm for 7 - Milan

I love this story =)

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 10:59am for 7 - Milan

HAH! Suck on that lemon drop you meddlesome old codger! It should be amusing to see how much Harry and his self named crew can screw up Albus's day.

Evelyn posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 10:08am for 7 - Milan

Thank you. It was a beautiful present.

petrina posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 2:51am for 7 - Milan

wow. impressive bit of description and ideas. i like the language too. and the plot is getting better and better. well done!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 4:36pm for 7 - Milan

Delightful Christmas present, even if I didn't get to it 'til a few days later. It's going to be interesting to see where this goes but I get the feeling Trelawney isn't going to like it.

Thanks again.

stuart posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 3:14pm for 7 - Milan

you make it hard to read other stories, great chapter. keep up the good work, about the only thing i could ask for is faster updates but not at the expense of your work

Jennifer2 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 1:02pm for 7 - Milan

Please hurry and write some more.

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 10:11am for 7 - Milan

Wooohooooo!!!!!!!11
This is the best christmas present I have recieved so far.
I don't know how to repay you for your stories. They help more than I can say.
Thankyou
merry christmas

crs_seq posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 8:18am for 7 - Milan

Awesome! there's no other word for it. A bit more fluff would not be amiss. but on the whole just luved the chapter. hope U update soon.

phsname posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 12:17am for 7 - Milan

wow...

that was...crazy...

written very...very well.

cant wait for the next one...haha...i have nothing more to say.

:D

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 12:13am for 7 - Milan

Very good but very sneaky. I was wondering how you would handle Harry and Gabby waking up at Harry's cottage. I was surprised when you just ignored it! Except for the little by play with Harry and Jean of course. A very good chapter thank you for writing and for the "Christmas Present"!

Bill posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 11:15pm for 7 - Milan

Fantastic! I love the way you write, Tim. I also look forward to you having Harry kill malfoy. Yes, I said 'kill him!' Anyways, I (as always) look forward to your next update. Merry (belated) Christmas.

Sarah9 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 7:31pm for 7 - Milan

Fantastic! And Prévoyez is gone for good now? Or at least, appears to be. That was a fantastic chapter, I really enjoyed the story on Gabrielle's past, being more difficult than we previously saw. Onca again, you've managed to stun me with your chapter. Update soon!

Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 7:26pm for 7 - Milan

Spectacular! Deleriously Enjoyable! =D

I love this story, and the fact that it has Dumbeldore bashing, on the side of Harry and Gabby's romance is just fancy icing on the tripple decker cake!

The entrance of Beauxbatons was well executed, while I thought that their would be more Gred/Forge-ish entrance spectacular-ness! Though I'll settle for Dumbeldore scowling! =F

I really believe that Pervyous should have gotten a more suitable punishement! But at least the students got a laugh at her expence! Now i just can't wait until Snape, Trelawney, and Malfoy get their punishments! *grins evily as horns sprout from head*

A word of caution though, if you continue to post such amazing calibur of writing, you'll just make your readers expect you to out do yourself every update! (Not that you'd hear any complaints!) ^.^

Once again you grant US the reader with the pleasure of reading your "Outstanding" work, and I thank you.

Write on Jeconais, Write on...