Adam posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 3:35am for 7 - Milan

Another fine chapter in the wonderful story. I did like the entrance and Colin could probably sell the piccy he took of Dumbledore to Harry and his friends and make some money lol. Now all they have to do is to survive the quidditch.

Maxennce posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 3:18am for 7 - Milan

very very nice. Loved the looks on Dumbledores face and just cant wait to see just what Snape and Draco are going to be like at the formal ceremony the next day. Keep up the great work, really looking forward to your next chapter and just whats going to happen next
cheers
max

margaret1 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 2:58am for 7 - Milan

I'll try not to gush with this review :)

I really enjoyed this chapter. I really like Gabby, she is very sweet - I liked the further explanation of her 'mating' to Harry from Fleur's POV - it does show how much she has sacrificed, and how lucky she is to have a 'mate' like Harry, that won't take advantage of her.

I thought it was cute when Harry was embarrased about seeing her body through her clothes - I like that Harry is now more comfortable with Gabby and being more of himself.

It was impressive the way they moved the Castle and I smiled thinking of that woman being in a huge hole, climbing through mud. I can't wait for Snape, Malfoy, Trewlany and (I never thought I'd say it) Dumbledore to get what is coming to them.

Thanks for another great chapter.

Margaret

Fate posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 2:00am for 7 - Milan

This was wonderful!!
Can't wait for more!
Happy Holiday's!!! :D

ulkser posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 1:41am for 7 - Milan

sikerler

Silent Claw posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 12:20am for 7 - Milan

Aww . . . so cute. Now we just need to see them beat the Slytherians and Dumbledore.

Black's Phoenix posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 11:33pm for 7 - Milan

Well written chapter... that would be an understatement. It was excellent.

The explanations, and the slight twists throughout made it even better. You provided some useful insight into the Harry/Gabrielle relationship as well as the Fluer/Bill one.

An interesting twist was provided when you stated that it was Katie who was the other girl that he had a relationship with but no one actually knew about.

Arkeus posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 11:16pm for 7 - Milan

nice, very nice. I see Dumbledore is a right bastard, and sybill will get her due i hope :-)
good hermione too, this chapter :-)

AK posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 11:08pm for 7 - Milan

Ive said it before and I will say it again, this is the damned best piece of fan fiction I have ever read. I can't rally explain why I like this story so much, but they way you describe the feelings is just beyon anything I have read in fanfics ( I have not read that many books in english and have some trouble comparing with other languages) your level in literature is way above amateur. You are a good writer!
BTW in my opinion you chapter 5 was the best chapter so far, thsi one is good as well but C5 was just mind-blowing!

kupchoi posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 10:57pm for 7 - Milan

Thanks for the update another great chapter love your writhing skills

Chthonius posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 10:50pm for 7 - Milan

Well, I came to this story late - I meant to read it, but kept getting distracted - and I have to say that I definately regret not having taken the time to read it before. I love how this started, where it went, and where it is going.

I can't wait to see Gabrielle's response to Draco's come-on attempt. I would've liked to see Snape's reaction to what "Potter" managed with the Beauxbatons entrance, though I suppose there is the possibility for that in the next chapter.

Chris King posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 10:34pm for 7 - Milan

great chaper in a great story. figured i had better stop lurking and reviewsince you bothered to update on Christmas for us. if you ever try to get puplished let your fans here know so that at least i can buy your book love your style. you make me belive your ships are posible.

Mrriddler posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 10:33pm for 7 - Milan

Woot, this story seriously rock. I don't go for the fairy tales/romances but this is definite one exception I'll make. The line you toe between fantasy and reality is simply amazing. Definite a classic tale that all Harry interested fanfic readers should take a look at. And incrediably original. Bravo, my friend, bravo! Great christmas present to your fans, and happy holidays to you and your family!

Alex00 posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 10:16pm for 7 - Milan

gret chapter

Antosha posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 10:02pm for 7 - Milan

My, my, my!

Much wonderful stuff to enjoy. The entrance lived up to the build-up--not an easy trick! Bill and Fleur's squabble was a nice insight into their relationship--and into Harry and Gabrielle's...

And the idea that the Bond had in fact molded Gabrielle in part to be what she is is a fascinating twist, and an interesting look at just who Harry is!

Harley posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 9:45pm for 7 - Milan

Greet chapter as usual. I must say I look forward to every new chapter of this story. Keep up the good work.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 9:33pm for 7 - Milan

:) What a great chapter. Thanks for sharing, and on Christmas, too! I'd say more, but I'm honestly so tired from the holidays that I fell asleep mid-chapter, woke up *very* confused (dreaming of Harry and Gabrielle in Milan, and waking up on my couch in the dark is disconcerting), and just now carefully finished the chapter. But it was great. I *loved* the entrance that they made... And Harry left behind the "traitor" ;) yay! ... And now the Quidditch can commence! :-D hehehehehehe...

Roy1 posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 9:18pm for 7 - Milan

Yet another phenomenal chapter in this bunny, Looking forward to the following chapter(s) that are sure to be incredible.

surendra posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 9:17pm for 7 - Milan

I read hundreds if not thousands of fanfics. All of your fics are in the top notch. I see markings of a great author. Keep it up. I am not trying to be condescending. LOL. I infact learned that word from this page :)

D posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 9:12pm for 7 - Milan

A very, very, very well written chapter. By far your best to date. Happy Holidays to you and I eagerly await the next chapter.