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Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Friday 6th June 2014 11:26am for 7 - Milan

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He carried her into her bedroom and gently placed her on the bed. She made no resistance as he undid her robes, enjoying the feeling of her Mate caring for her in such an intimate manner.

She half-smiled as he used magic to change her bra for a t-shirt – he did have some peculiar notions about not seeing her naked – but she was too tired to protest. He slid her into bed, and a few seconds later, she felt him against her back. As she had before, she pulled his arm over her, and fell into a deep sleep. She was exactly where she belonged."

And that's Harry for you - too damn noble for his own good!! :-D

Marauder Neyo posted a comment on Sunday 1st April 2012 9:21am for 7 - Milan

~"‘I am not another one,’ she said, in a cold voice. ‘I am the last one.’" Who knew? That was just what it takes for Jean's mother to approve... Hehe... ;)

~“I make him sick?” Hahaha!!! XD Loved that part...

~But really, I knew Katie felt something when Harry told them about the bond... But I didn't know then that Katie was the fourth girl Harry slept with... Really, I wasn't expecting that.

~Oh and BTW, great chapter! I enjoyed reading every word! :D

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 9:00pm for 7 - Milan

What an entrance! They sure showed Hogwarts! Great job!

Abraxan posted a comment on Friday 2nd July 2010 7:04pm for 7 - Milan

I would LOVE to see a movie made of Beauxbatons' arrival at Hogwarts! And of Dumbledore's face! I'm SO glad Colin got pictures of it!

Abraxan

ficbob posted a comment on Saturday 16th January 2010 2:36am for 7 - Milan

The whole school? Amazing idea. Nicely done.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th June 2008 5:44am for 7 - Milan

Outstanding chapter to an outstanding story.

gunny

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Sunday 20th April 2008 9:00am for 7 - Milan

this chapter was wonderful i absolutly luved it. i will say it again as i have before this story so fits the title it is almost horrible to read to know that everything u write is completely true of how i see harry in the real HP books. honurable, caring, and protective of the ones he luvs.HOPE....HOPE......HOPE

thebfsgf posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 7:46pm for 7 - Milan

This was AWESOME! I'm new to the site, and my friend recommended this story to me, and I didn't register until just a second ago, and this is really really good! I have to read more, but I have to get off the computer for now.... grrrrrr. Oh well, this story will be here in an hour or two! :D

Rebecka M.

PS I have a question: how do you become an author on this site? E-mail me at hermionegrangerwannab@harrypotterfreak91.com (I know it's long, and fanatical, but it leaves an odd impression, no?) Hope to hear from you soon. Just put something about fanfiction authors in the subject line so I know who the message is from and what it's about. Thanks!

Viridian posted a comment on Friday 1st June 2007 9:06am for 7 - Milan


The way gabby retained some independence was a nice twist - and says a lot about both of them.

Potter's crew was a nice twist, but eminently logical. This is 'the old crowd' from the second war, after all...

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 2:06pm for 7 - Milan

Great chapter. Love your description of the beuxbatons move.
Thanks for writing.
Monkey

izoomzoom posted a comment on Friday 20th April 2007 10:11am for 7 - Milan

Picup Andropov - Don't drive like my brother! ROFLOL

This is one of the best written HP fics I've read in a while. I think I had read up to Chap 3 a while back and I found it again. Keep them comming!

Ben10 posted a comment on Sunday 31st December 2006 1:07pm for 7 - Milan

Très bien

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 12:14pm for 7 - Milan

Katie? Really? Constipated twins made me giggle. Harry’s dealing with the evil teacher was also so funny. That was a truly impressive piece of magic. Wonderful chapter.

ZanyMuggle posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 12:05pm for 7 - Milan

I'm re-reading the first 8 chapters in preparation for chapter 9. I've discovered a perspective I didn't see the first time around.

Like many readers, I felt angry on Harry's behalf upon discovering TBD. This, of course, was weakened when it was discussed that Harry *could* have fallen in love and inadvertently broken the bond. Nonetheless, I still felt that Harry was in a situation where his nature and Gabrielle's choice had robbed him of free will.

Now, however, I have another idea. (Of course, all the other readers probably figured it out and have discussed it to death on the boards - such is my timing. Nonetheless, I continue undaunted.) At most, Harry lost romantic love for 8 years. Instead, he gained the opportunity for a love that is uniquely tailored to *him*, and not just in the Veela-mate way. Gabrielle represents an independent-human-plus-powerful-Veela whose strength and compassion match Harry's needs. Would any other woman have been able to satisfy him, with him being the uniquely powerful person he is? (i.e., did he actually sacrifice anything at all?) Or is he almost a complementary Veela-like individual whose only true love would have to be so uniquely magical, so uniquely powerful,... so uniquely Gabrielle.

Now that I re-read my "insight", though, I realize I've just more-or-less restated the summary of the story. *sigh*

BTW, I absolutely *loved* this line:
“Damn it, I need to date a Veela,” Oliver said enviously.
“Sadly, Ollie,” Katie pointed out, “Veela are also intelligent, and would run away if they saw you coming.”


ZM

ginyginger posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 2:21pm for 7 - Milan

HOPE ! HOPE ! HOPE !

I hope you'll update hope soon !!!
just love this story...best ever !!!!

keep updating !!! don't take too long !!!
( and think about this means war too pleeaaseee !!!!!

bye

Joshua Starnes posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 9:25am for 7 - Milan

It's the old Cultural Relatavist argument - Everything is good to someone, therefore no one can possibly say that something is bad; because someone, somewhere likes it, and someone, somewhere liking it is all that is required for it to be good.

By that logic, every story, every film, every poem, every song, every painting ever done by man is good; especially if they put a lot of work into it, it turned out they way they wanted it to, and most importantly, someone, somewhere likes it. Becuase those are the standards that are most important in art.

Joshua Starnes posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 9:18am for 7 - Milan

If you can't tell someone you think they're doing something wrong in their writing because you just aren't accepting their writing for what it is, then what exactly is the point of a review? Is it only for Ego Fluffing? That seems to be the opinion. Tell Tim how wonderful everything he writes is, or get out; but don't dare suggest there's something he could be doing better because by doing so you prove that you 'just don't get it' and are insulting the people who do like it.

You like his writing and don't see the problems I do. Fine. Why are you getting offended that I see problems?

Michelle posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2006 8:01pm for 7 - Milan

Ah come on! You've left us hanging here! It's been over a month. I'm gonna cry. Nah, just bug you until I see chapter 8 up. How long does Beta-ing take, eh?
I know, I'm being a bum, but that's only because it's so good! Can't wait :D

Tumshie posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 10:53am for 7 - Milan

Check this out, it seems to be a rip off of your fic, apologies if it isn't, I thoight you should be made aware of it

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2528778/1/

jerry posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 8:41pm for 7 - Milan

i can not wait for the next chapter to come out