Kalen Darkmoon posted a comment on Wednesday 11th July 2007 10:01pm for 12 - London(2)

A beautiful, heart-warming and well written story. One of my very favorites. I always have mixed feelings when a good story comes to an end - happiness that such a great story was seen through to completion (far too many good ones go unfinished), but also sadness that such a great story is over. Thank you for all of your (and your beta's) efforts to share this story with us.

Meghan posted a comment on Saturday 7th July 2007 5:53pm for 12 - London(2)

why are you holding back the update?! gah

john17 posted a comment on Sunday 1st July 2007 2:44pm for 12 - London(2)

Good Story. The thing with Dumbledore forcing the mating is a bit out of place and isn't as innocent or good as Gabby making a mistake for good reasons. But you explained why Dumbledore did what he did so that makes it okay.
Overall great story though, hopefully be finished soon.

busted posted a comment on Wednesday 27th June 2007 6:01pm for 12 - London(2)

I loved this story and i am really looking forward to the epilogue :D

Thanks for the great story..

writer'sblock posted a comment on Tuesday 19th June 2007 3:50pm for 12 - London(2)

I'm sad to see this end, but I'm happy with how it ended. It had the happy-goodness feeling that almost all your stories have.

rottenking posted a comment on Friday 15th June 2007 9:56pm for 12 - London(2)

really liked hope, was a great fanfic, i read it a week or more ago and reread it last night, one thing i was confused about is the fact that dumbledore suggested gabby mate with harry for the sake of the war ( this was just after the second task)

but we know that voldamort didn't come back into play till after the third task...
now you may put it down to his dementia or such but i doubt that, because i don't really think their would be any way of him knowing that voldamort would be returning ( and thus with his logic needed France to win the war)

noylj posted a comment on Friday 15th June 2007 1:32am for 12 - London(2)

Did I miss the epilogue?
Could you not only finish all your other stories, and write several more new ones, could you (at some point) come back to these two people? Their story can not be complete.

snuffles007 posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:40pm for 12 - London(2)

Excellent, as always! I must say that I was genuinely shocked when the Death Eater attack occurred. I can't wait for the grand finale.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th June 2007 9:46am for 12 - London(2)

Wow, that was by far the most amazing story ever. I absolutely adore it. Nothing quite matches up to this story. I'm glad it ended the way I did but I'm absolutely heartbroken I'll never get to read anything new in this universe. Amazing, simply amazing. I commend you on your fabulous skills, this story blows my mind.

Sirius771 posted a comment on Sunday 10th June 2007 6:50am for 12 - London(2)

A very great story. One of the best i've read. When will the epilouge come out?

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 1:08pm for 12 - London(2)

I was listening to some tunes while reading this and i found te perfect song to explain Gabrielle's romance....Iris by the GooGoo Dolls....anyway this was pretty sweet so i'll end it off here cause i gotta go!

DAUFahnder posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 4:30am for 12 - London(2)

Thank You :)

tomanak45 posted a comment on Thursday 7th June 2007 9:34pm for 12 - London(2)

I started reading this story about when you hit ch. 7, and it's is by far one of if not the best story post hogwarts i have ever read. The deatail ,and emotions you put into each character was great, and the thought to make such a story is awe inspiring.
Loved the sotry.

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 7th June 2007 8:08pm for 12 - London(2)

so when is the last part up adn when do we get the uther harry gabby fics like Happily Ever After

Meg posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 5:59pm for 12 - London(2)

Well, I wanted to wait to review until the chapter sunk in...but it hasn't. :) So, rather than a point-by-point...

I loved that you took care of the match, the announcement, then the Dumbledore/Snape/Draco issues in one fell swoop.

I also loved that the fic came full circle.

Can't say much more other than this was awesome, the "obliteration" was more than I imagined (though wasn't it in Red & Yellow, not OLT? Or did it get edited out of OLT and I just can't remember the original?), and I look forward to the epilogue.

Thanks,

Meg

marcelhm posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 5:22pm for 12 - London(2)

well I'll read the epilogue but already wanted to thank you for writing another great story for us lowly fans ;). the fact that I loved it should show in the fact that the time now is 3:30 here and this isn't a habit of mine. so thanks and good luck!

hubem posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 3:50am for 12 - London(2)

Bah. Great chapter. When is the epilogue gonna be out?

warpwizard posted a comment on Monday 4th June 2007 9:00pm for 12 - London(2)

Good chapter, very meaty. I prefer Quidditch as background material too, though it didn't bother me in this fic.

Inziladun posted a comment on Monday 4th June 2007 11:30am for 12 - London(2)

Well I've been reading the fic as you updated and I've really liked it.

You have used a not overdone pairing and you have made it so that its neither immoral (if this term even exist in the fantasy world) nor the easy way, that its saying that veela appear to be 9 until they are 16 when they suddenly grow... (not that I don't enjoy those).

Appart from that, the way that harry became who he is (he found merlin's grave) its quite original (at least I've never read it before that way) and its not
divine intervention... So great that too.

So all in all its been great to read this fic and I'm nearly wanting to tell you not to finish it, but things come to an end and I suppose that this fic is nearly finished. So congratulations for the story, I'd like to see some other story of yours soon but we can only Hope .pun intended...

Ben10 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd June 2007 4:01pm for 12 - London(2)

A Beautiful ending that makes me wish I'd fall in love young, but alas . . . hopefully when college starts next fall my chance will arrive!

Ben