Lottii posted a comment on Friday 12th March 2010 11:51am for 12 - London(2)

Thank you! This story is just brilliant, awesome read! I'm usually not a fan of Gabrielle/Harry pairings but this story may very well change my mind!

Cheers

RyokoTenchi posted a comment on Sunday 7th March 2010 5:33am for 12 - London(2)

well i for one will miss the epilogue Tim. but i an understand if something does not fit how you imagined it. i hope to see more from you soon.

RyokoTenchi

LifeScientist posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 8:36pm for 12 - London(2)

I've already written you about this long ago but hadn't had the chance to test the review system under the new code release until now.

Kathleen posted a comment on Tuesday 16th February 2010 2:15am for 12 - London(2)

Came back to reread the Hope story. Loved it yet again. It is the perfect romance.
But hey, I miss the epilogue! I liked it! Will you please reconsider?

prateek91 posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 7:25am for 12 - London(2)

Very well-done!!!!

ficbob posted a comment on Saturday 16th January 2010 2:24pm for 12 - London(2)

Boot to the head for Snape is priceless. I hope that something long and nasty happened to Dumbles. Great fic . Thanks

fallenhunter posted a comment on Monday 14th December 2009 11:54am for 12 - London(2)

I left a review on an earlier chapter(9, long after the last chapter had been released). But now that I have calmed down somewhat and read the rest of it. Hmm... nope, not changed my mind one bit, Someone find a talent scout and get this gal/guy a contract!

I would have been interested to have read the deleted epilogue that did not pass muster with the artist, just to see what (s)he thinks is NOT up to snuff. If its half the quality of what I have read, its still a well worth read.

Fallenhunter
Wooster, Ohio USA

Silo posted a comment on Saturday 12th December 2009 5:21am for 12 - London(2)

what the hell man i thote hope had 13 chapters and when r u going to start posting new fics

Silo posted a comment on Monday 23rd March 2009 12:05pm for 12 - London(2)

hey r u going to update your fics soon

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2008 11:53am for 12 - London(2)

Outstanding chapter. I love this story and really enjoy reading it. This is my third or fourth time reading it.

gunny

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd April 2008 6:54pm for 12 - London(2)

this was a good tale of nothing but like i have been saying in every comment HOPE.

i agree with the last comment

... power of hope, because without it you were lost, but with it you could do anything

. i think that is so true when i or my friends have a problem i just look at them and say no matter the problem always keep the most important thing HOPE. yea HOPE.

but anyway it was a great tale and that was a great chapter.

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Wednesday 7th November 2007 10:26pm for 12 - London(2)

Ahhh, wow. I sincerely thank you for writing this wonderful fic. Harry/Gabrielle is my favorite ship, and I'm eternally grateful to you for writing such an excellent novel-length story about them. :D

BloodRedJawz posted a comment on Wednesday 5th September 2007 4:51pm for 12 - London(2)

It hit me right then, at the part of this chapter where all those people are outside Harry's doors.

Whatever happened to Ginny? I know she and Harry weren't close anymore, but you'd at least expect she be a friend. Unless she really did become a whore like Fred/George implied?

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 1:31am for 12 - London(2)

Now THAT'S the way to use foreshadowing; ever since chapter one thre's been the recurring clue to Dumbldore's interference as Gabby referred to 'suddenly' getting the idea to Bond with Harry. After reading the mess that JKR passed off as the last book, it's clear that either she never learned how to do it properly, or the major plot elements used to finish the series were dreamed up long after the series started.

I'm one of those fanatical Harmonians everyone talks about; I firmly believe that the books should have ended Harry/Hermione, not Harry/Ginny, and while I can read Harry/Others, reading Ron/Hermione (the seemingly inevitable default pairing when she's not with Harry) squicks me no end.

That being said, you are one of the very few authors whose non-H/Hr stories I can read and enjoy. Your versions of Powerful Harry/Strong Partner are always thoughtful, creative, and three-dimensional, and are a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for sharing them, as well as providing space for some other truly talented authors to display their work.

Fenris

PS -- I do wish that you would try your talents on a multi-chapter Harry/ Hermione fic. You consistanty write a Ron who grows into an acceptable partner for Hermione, how about a tale where it doesn't happen, and Harry has to pick up the pieces?

thebfsgf posted a comment on Wednesday 1st August 2007 12:38am for 12 - London(2)

I loved this chapter! It took me three sittings to finish it, but it was awesome, and I will read the epilogue tomorrow, seeing as I'm yawning non-stop now. Loved the story!

Rebecka M.

Rage and Light posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2007 12:32am for 12 - London(2)

Hi

I love this story, and I hope there is still a bit more to come soon. I think you have a very good writing style which brings the characters out very wel, keep it up

david

pnthrgrl343 posted a comment on Tuesday 17th July 2007 7:53am for 12 - London(2)

Apparently our opinions on "a couple of days" differs greatly.

No matter though. Still love the story, and alls well that ends well I guess. =)

I realized something recently. You never really spoke of Ginny during this story. Seeing as how all of her brothers are firmly entrenched in Harry's life, I found it rather surprising that she didn't even have a cameo. I guess it makes sense though to not add another plot element to it. Nevermind, I guess I just answered my own rambling question.

Jonathan Parker posted a comment on Monday 16th July 2007 4:39am for 12 - London(2)

Once again, great story. Loved your "This Means War" too.

I appreciate the plot where Harry doesn't end up with Ginny but with someone else. It's startling how many stories are based on that. Let the poor bloke find someone else :).

When is the next chapter coming out? Can't wait for it!

Aelfwine posted a comment on Friday 13th July 2007 7:39pm for 12 - London(2)

Lovely, so lovely.

I like the way you've developed some of the secondary relationships, such as Harry's friendship with Viktor, without losing sight of the primary thrust of the story, i.e. the romance between Harry and Gabrielle.

Am looking forward to the epilogue. ;-)

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 12th July 2007 7:11am for 12 - London(2)

I just saved the entire story to my hard drive - so I can read and re-read this at my leisure.
I wanted to thank you for a couple of things;
1st the fabulous stories you write - every one a treat, thought provoking, logically consistent, excellent word choices, great word pictures, living breathing characters.
2nd - For creating this website which regroups all of the fanfic authors that I most appreciate.
I had not seen Jberns work before it appeared here, yet cannot count the number of hours that I have spent reading his gripping tales - and the others are all of the same caliber.
Thanks and warmest regards
Ken