Content Harry Potter Naruto Buffy the Vampire Slayer XMen Translations

Reviews

  • Previous
  • Next

ichaos posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2017 12:09am for 12 - London(2)

I really liked this story. I think that Gabrielle & Harry make a great couple. It's too bad that there aren't more stories based on this pairing around.

Tetron posted a comment on Sunday 1st January 2017 1:35am for 12 - London(2)

Great story

Rlpj4 posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2016 1:33pm for 12 - London(2)

I have to say that re-reading this story is always entertaining. Somehow, I find myself coming back to this story when I get tired of the usual stuff that tends to come out of FF dot net and other sites nowadays. Granted, my HP stories are about the same, which is why I've got dozens of unfinished stories.

Anyway, I just thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed re-reading this story. It will, along with several of your stories, remain on my re-read list when I get the time and hankering for something good to do to pass time.

bkronks posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2016 2:14am for 12 - London(2)

This is quite possibly one of the best stories I have ever read

atacama posted a comment on Sunday 4th December 2016 9:38pm for 12 - London(2)

I like this story.

There are some small issues, but I noticed no major problems.

Ok, it is a Super!Harry story.

Regards

Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 4th June 2016 8:06am for 12 - London(2)

Thanks for a great (re)read!

JackPotr posted a comment on Sunday 8th May 2016 12:43am for 12 - London(2)

This has to be one of the best fics I have ever read. In fact, I think this was at least my fourth time through it. Well done! It also happens to be one of my favorite pairings and I really like how you portrayed the connection between Harry and Gabby. I also liked your portrayal of Ron. I think you showed him as the man we all hoped he would become.

nimistar posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2016 5:05pm for 12 - London(2)

you know, i keep comming back to this website thinking i've seen all the good stories only to be surprised. this was an amazing story and i thank you for writing it.

Shadowdog posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2016 4:09am for 12 - London(2)

Great story. I've read this several times and it's still awesome.

Katsuhito posted a comment on Thursday 17th December 2015 12:41am for 12 - London(2)

Just rereading this story for the umpteenth time. I'm actually kindof sad that the epilogue is gone. While it may not have lived up to your own standards, it definitely did to many of your readers - it still engendered an emotional response from me, at any rate.

It is, of course, your perrogative as the author to do whatever you like with your stories, but I remind you that an artist's worst critic is usually themselves. <G>

-Kat Ps. I don't suppose you'd be willing to send me the old epi? ;)

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 16th October 2015 7:09am for 12 - London(2)

Simply stunning, one of the best stories I've read, fic or ff, amatuer or pro.

You had me laughing, frustrated and choked up. You used excellent puns and obscure references, yet had a clear and solid plot. Your characters had depth and developed naturally. I'm hooked on your writing and am quite happy to see you've finished several other works, I can't wait!

Blessings, Majerus

xxaugustasxx posted a comment on Tuesday 30th June 2015 5:42am for 12 - London(2)

Bloody amazing story!

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 11:45pm for 12 - London(2)

So, just testing the rules on this site for repeat reviews on the same chapter. Also, I'd just like to say that this is probably the best Harry/Gabby story I'm ever read, it was fantastic, I forgot to give it the kudos it deserved in the other review. Also, I got through the story without reviewing it every chapter, I was that absorbed in the story, I didn't really notice switching chapters.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 11:40pm for 12 - London(2)

I loved this story, and I love the pairing of Harry and Gabriel. I mean, Harry doesn't have any more connections with Ginny than he does with Gabby(Sister of best friend vs Sister of friend(who happens to married to brother of best friend) and has a crush before he saved her life and the crush is based on his fame vs has a crush based on him saving her life and being himself). Anyways, I have many more reasons than that, and it's also fun to read stories about them, because while she is always depicted as somewhere around ethereally beautiful, her personality is very different from one story to the next, due to her being only a small supporting character(albeit one who has a basis for a strong connection with Harry that authors can play up). Anyones, those are some of the reasons it's my favorite pairing, and why I infinitely prefer it over Harry and Ginny(I have many more reasons for this and why it is my favorite pairing above anything else). Also, most stories end up with Harry embracing his power and/or fame and riches, and living a long and fulfilled life with a beautiful wife. So yeah, the ending is always better than what most Harry and Ginny stories end with, which from what I've seen is usually Harry just being a pretty good minister and having some kids who go to Hogwarts, which isn't very deep and puts Harry into the position of doing what he hates(from what I've seen, he hates being in politics a lot and is more content to just endorse people or spend his money for the betterment of everyone, from the background, all legally(had to add that because while Dumbledore seemed to be trying to better everyone, he did so illegally and ruined Harry's life, along with a lot of other people's dreams of doing anything related to potions or being an auror when they grew up, and Harry is definitely not like Dumbledore). Jeez, I keep telling myself to stop ranting and get on with the review of this story, and then launch into another one, sorry about that. Anyways, I love how you made Gabby in this story, making it(the bond) an enslavement that she found her way around and maintained control of her free will, along with having her be the perfect match for Harry because she worked hard to make herself so. I mean, instead of where Harry and Fleur/Gabriel have a bond and their personalities are immediately changed(I know you said that was what would have happened in this to most Veela). I was really not expecting the thing at the end with the Death Eaters, as I'd been used to most of the story, which was happy and upbeat(not overwhelmingly so), as your usually are(that's a good thing for me), and I had to reread it to make sure I was seeing it correctly. I like OP Harry, as long as he doesn't abuse his power or turn weird and dark(or like the fanfics that say he's turned grey, while he's gutting people with magical flying knives and saying it's all about the intent. -_-). I also like stories that focus on Harry's Quidditch, and the fact that in the books he's described as any amazing seeker, a natural on the broom, and the best in centuries, when he's just barely beating out his competitors, who aren't that great, to the snitch. And then he doesn't pursue the obvious career that he has the skill for, when he loves to play Quidditch(in canon I mean). Anyways, I liked the overall plot, the characters, Malfoy dying, and it was a fun and interesting read. Great work, sorry for the rambling in the review, and keep it up. I can't wait to read all of your current stories and some future ones of yours.

r00ney posted a comment on Monday 4th May 2015 4:51pm for 12 - London(2)

Excellent story, thank you for writing.

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 24th February 2015 11:00am for 12 - London(2)

Just finish this after another read-through. Still excellent. But what is this 'Object Lessons Trilogy' you speak of?! :-S :-S

theshadow603 posted a comment on Sunday 8th February 2015 7:28am for 12 - London(2)

Hope is quite simply, a masterpiece. This is an OUTSTANDING piece of writing.

HWLLHP posted a comment on Saturday 7th February 2015 8:24am for 12 - London(2)

I recently reread this -- enjoyed it as always.

But I still think, as I always have, that there's a good argument Ron and Hermione should make in their own defense: Their "manipulation" didn't take options away from Harry, it gave him an option that he otherwise would not have had: to fall in love with Gabrielle without the pressure of knowing that saying no would mean abandoning her to insanity. It was always in the plan that if he had not fallen for her, he would have been given the information in time to act on it if he'd wanted. And he could've been told about the Bond after falling for her if he had.

KSpringer posted a comment on Sunday 4th January 2015 5:09pm for 12 - London(2)

Always a good read. I really like your writing.

Thank you for the stories!

mahaffe posted a comment on Sunday 21st December 2014 1:35pm for 12 - London(2)

This is one of my favorite stories that I have read. Is there anywhere that the epilogue is posted? It is what helped to make it one of the best in my opinion.