heffronma4 posted a comment on Thursday 15th November 2012 5:17am

This story is the BEST ! I look forward to the next exciting chapter. Until then thanks.

-Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK )

brad posted a comment on Friday 9th November 2012 11:57pm

Oh dear. I don't like this Harry. He's pushing all of my UGH buttons. Prostitutes. Murder. Flirting. Flirthing with a *male*. An earring, even! :-) Ugh.

I guess you're enjoying pushing him where no Jeconais!Harry has gone before, yes? BRING BACK OUR NICE!Harry!!!! :-)

Gabrielle's cute but a bit overdone on the hug-toy front I feel. And I don't like her candid reflection of Harry's sex life (see the above).

It's still an entertaining read, but a bit too silly/unlikeable for me in those and other places. 'Smasher', 'Crusher' and the rest?

I'll keep reading - your stuff is fun - but this story, these chapters, surprised me on the 'ugh' front. Don't push yourself and your Harry too far just for the sake of it Tim! Cheers.

Ancalador posted a comment on Friday 26th October 2012 9:21am

Red Jacobson is now my god... or something. Thank you for updating one of my favorite stories (although a lot of your stories could be considered as favorites) and I look forward to any future updates.

00_Knight posted a comment on Wednesday 24th October 2012 11:59pm

Great to read something of yours again!

kitsu524 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd October 2012 6:58am

Im really sorry I have to ask such a stupid question for such an amazing story but where in the world did you get ""Hey" "its Dumbledoor everone wave" I died laughing over and over XD you are truely an amazing wordsmith XD thank you

Zamia posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2012 6:49am

Rereaf this yarn again and still get a good laugh out of it. So glad Hogwarts didn't try to soothe Harry's pain by saying "it was for the greater Good". Great interaction between the lot of them. Cheers.

Z

firedrakegirl posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2012 5:02am

This was wonderful!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Lia1 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2012 8:00pm

"Tricksey Weazies" is my favorite part :) I love this story and I'm very excited to see that your internet connection is allowing you to give us treats again!

marcelhm posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2012 4:34pm

well let me thank you for the blast I had reading these 2 new chapters, I'm lately reading less and less fanfiction since in my opinion the quality is diminishing quickly but when I saw you had 2 new chapters up I didn't stop (well I did actually stop when I was laughing too hard at the everybody wave part to continue reading) till I finshed it all.

hope your internet will clear up and any other niggles you'll undoubtedly experience having just moved and till the next time

Mliyanagamage posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2012 11:00am

Great stuff.. Looking forward to whatever you cone up with next.

Fic Chick posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2012 8:21pm

Thanks for the update. It was good.

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2012 10:57am

Another fine chapter. Almost any end for Snape is good, while it may be OoC for many Harrys, a person can only take so much crap. Viva la revolution! Thanks for writing. W.

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2012 10:30am

Great chapter. I never get to parties like that any more, what a shame. Thanks for writing. W.

arun kumar posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2012 7:58am

This chapter was the most enjoyable one- not that the others lacked anything. Only hoping that the other chapters do not take a long time in coming. Thanks for a good story building up.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2012 6:46am

thank you, thank you, thank you for giving Snape, and the students of Hogwarts what they deserve.

I have loved fanfics, as well as the 1sst 4 books of canon since I read them - fanfics since about 2001 - the ultimate proof that canon Dumbles is no good is that he tolerates Snape's behaviour.

Thanks for 2 wonderful chapters - the interactions between the characters is a joy to see.

Warmest regards

Tenchifew posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2012 7:16am

Really glad to see this story continued. Great chapter!

Very intersting decision regarding Snape.

Very well written fight scenes.

Thank you for sharing.

MCDTC posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2012 3:03pm

Can't say how happy I was to see an update to this story. Let alone two updates. You have a talent along with Jbern to change the Potter world in crazy. and unpredictable ways, and make it awesome, and more entertaining then any other fanfiction i've read . Happily Ever After still stands as my favorite fanfiction story of all time, followed by Jberns The Lie I've Lived, but this story is getting ready to stike a knock out punch to Jbern. So keep up the amazing work, and I hope to see more from you soon.

karlii posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2012 2:48pm

I've spent last evening and today re-reading and generally catching up on this story. I wanted to tell you that I love your writing style, and am enjoying the story a lot!

It's too bad that Harry is so young, even after the time accelerator, and that Gabrielle is even younger. *sigh But we have to play with the cards dealt, eh? You always do such entertaining things with canon. :D

Thanks for updating, even with your slow and sporadic internet.. lol

Looking forward to the next part!!

karlii

Rexnos posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2012 9:50pm

HOLY CRAP, SOMETHING DARK HAPPENED IN JECONAIS FANFICTION!

In all seriousness though, it wasn't THAT dark. Sure, Harry murdered someone in cold blood, but Snape seriously had it coming. It's times like this that I both praise and curse Alan Rickman. He made Snape seem like a debonair and pitiable asshole instead of the irredeemably horrible excuse for humanity that he really is. It's bad enough that he spent about a decade belittling and degrading defenseless students, but keep in mind that he was a murderer before he was a teacher and he verbally and magically abused his "best friend's" son for another five years. Snape ONLY redeeming feature was his dedication to ending the life of a worse human being. There just isn't an excuse for his behavior.

Anyway, as to the story, it's typical Jeconais fare. Harry is more than a little bit overpowered, things are sunshine and daisies, and a respectable bad guy can't be found. I have come to terms with this characteristic of your writing and decided I like it. It's such a deviation for the typical grim-dark, realistic fan fiction that I typically read, that I just can't help but enjoy it. Hope is still in my list of top five fan fics and I hope you never stop writing in this way. Harry deserves more stories where he just gets to kick inordinate amounts of ass... and apparently GET inordinate amounts of ass in this story.

I also have to point out that Gabrielle is absolutely adorable, again I think. Your Gabrielle tends to act in the same manner in each story I read. She's bubbly, happy and completely devoted to Harry. It's just another facet of your writing style and it's always fun to read. Harry seems like he'd make the best big brother ever.

As for Hogwarts being the worst boarding school ever. YES. Just that. Rowling made a fascinating and wonderful world of magic and mystery, and then suddenly tried to make it dark and moody for her older audiences. Of course, this dark moodiness made everyone turn back to the older stories and observe them in the same light. The rose tinted glasses came off and there was a universal... wait a second... The amount of nonsense and outright danger that abound in Hogwarts is utterly ridiculous. No responsible parent would allow their child to attend.

Later,

Rex

aemilyl24 posted a comment on Friday 12th October 2012 9:03pm

Awesome two chaptes (I read 7 and 8). Such a great story. I love it so much. Keep up the amazing work and please try to update again soon. I can't wait to see what will happen next!!!!!