Chaossama posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:14am

True that Katie was paid to set Harry with Fleur, but as with George and Fred, she's started to change.

I don't see that as being wrong.

Meh, again as I mentioned in my last review, I'm pretty biased against this Fleur.

Not because of an inherent dislike of Fleur's character (this time), but just because as it is, Harry has grown more confident, more mature, and much darker. Fleur is not matching him at all. She's not secure in her own body, she's not secure in her own power, how the hell can there be anything in a Harry/Fleur relationship except physical lust? They have nothing to connect over. Literally, all they have is Gabrielle and I honestly don't see that relationship working out if the only thing that they can bond over is Gabrielle.

The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:10am

You're one of the few writers who can supply a large amount of highly expressive details and keep the story moving forward. In this chapter, that applies to the fights, as well as the dancing at the club, which strongly reminded me White Knight, Grey Queen.

After the super-Harry action, first Fleur's, then Gabrielle's comments about Harry made for a very fitting, though worrisome, ending. In being all things to all people, will Harry be able to have someone for himself? Kate seems to have walled herself off from that possibility. Fleur's comments showed how overwhelmed she was by him, in both positive and negative ways. It almost seems like Gabrielle is best suited for Harry, since she both sees him as he is and accepts it. But the age difference is a stumbling block for the next 8-10 years.

Suffice it to say, I'm looking forward to your subsequent chapters.

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:10am

i love this story thank you for sharing another wonderfull chapter please continue as life allows

lancelw posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:01am

Thank you for the update. Love it. One of my fav stories of all time.

again thank you. looking forwared to where you take us next in this story, and in your other works as well.

Sincirly;

Lancelw.

lord_silver posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 3:55am

Hey loved the chapter.

National Champion Harry Potter? Would love to see the look on the Dursleys face when they see the championship on tv or read about it in the newspaper. Are you planning a scene about that?

About Kate - I think that her part in the story is done. She has taught Harry what he needs & she would not be the correct person for him. As shown in the chapter she is getting attached to Harry & she needs to distance herself from him.

Looking forward to the new chapter. Thanks for posting this.

supergirl3684 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 3:54am

too awesome! So glad to see this up! I just started to re-read yet again this week!! Look forward to the next chapter!

gara5289 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 3:46am

Really curious where you're gonna go with Harrys connection to Hogwarts. Great chapter and I'm just as curious how you're gonna end this pairing wise. Can't wait for the next chapter for this.

wrhicks13 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 3:33am

my only problem with this chapter is that there is no prior qualification for harry to be in a championship of any kind most championships require at least one regular compitition participation and one qualifiyng round

Fibinaci posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 3:33am

This chapter almost got to be too much for me with all of the "HarrySuperWizardMan" stuff, But I think you pulled it out at the end, first with his admission he couldn't fairly beat the other guy, and then with Fleur's thoughts on the downsides of doing what he did, and how he has hurt himself. The irony of it is quite nice, he did it to protect his friends but now he has become someone who coudl hurt them worse(emotionally) than any spell.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 1:39am

This is a very good chapter

Tammin posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 1:31am

Great Chapter. It's interesting how you are keeping the story flowing. That was a nice piece of exposition from Gabrielle, and the way you keep it moving, it seems that Harry is either going to be with Kate (which could be a disaster as her head is, for her own reasons, firmly overriding her heart; not that there's anything wrong in this situation) or Gabrielle. I look forward to reading your next chapter.

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 12:21am

As always awaiting more.

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 12:11am

This was a pleasant surprise! I wasn't expecting an update of this story so soon, so thank you!

Interesting look into Fleur's feelings, and I liked Kate's introspection as well. I had to laugh at Albus' comment to Harry about giving Gryffindor 100 points.

One question, how did the twins see Harry and Snape on the map if they gave the map to Harry in 3rd year?

Red

Xylion posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2013 7:15pm

This story is really good :D

Keep up the wonderful work !!

Tchouss

azurehart posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd January 2013 10:25am

I've just read the 8 chapters you have up in one go staying up past 2 in the morning to do so. This is a wonderful idea. Too many people have Harry just using his wealth for clothes or maybe buying the Prophet and that's it. Loving Fred and George's take on keeping Harry alive with body guards and lessons in seduction. The food fight scene had me laughing so hard my dog fled the room. Thank you so much for a very enjoyable read!

butch6167 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 4:51pm

glad 2 see u r back in action. been 2 long.

santiln posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 6:13am

2 great updates. As always this is one of the best ff WIP at the moment and the story that makes the most about Harry's money. I don't know why everybody makes him rich and then only buy material things for him or for the war. Never to enjoy life and make it better for his friends and himself.

I can't wait for your next update.

Greetings and Happy Holidays

Tutenstein posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2012 8:15pm

I frankly don't understand the Fleur fixation you've got going when Kate seems to be doing all what a loving gf does for Harry even if she was an escort at the begining. Both Harry and Kate seem to be really emotionally invested in each other.

Aberbadger posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2012 6:25am

I believe the full phrase is "cold enough to freeze the balls off a brass monkey"

LordNemesis posted a comment on Thursday 29th November 2012 8:33am

Not really sure what to say about this story. Its ok and its flows but dose it really get you wantting the next part. The trueth I have to say no it just leave me dry. Sorry will I read more of this story sure but will I be waitting for the next part no. Keep writeing your story and when it done I might read it as a whole.