Hidohebi posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 11:15am

Wonderful to see the update, im having just as much fun following this story as I did with Hope. Keep up the good work.

Hansi_Rahl posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 11:04am

Great chapter! ^^

preier posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 10:30am

very good chapter.

the finale to the tournament was great, especially good to see harry earning his victory.

very interesting reaction from fleur too. gabrielle's thoughts were ... impressive and the connection to hogwarts, already foreshadowed, is nicely mysterious.

thank you for sharing your stories.

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 10:11am

Heh, funny situation - 3 girls, each missing something to be his match. :D

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 8:28am

Fine chapter. It is very nice to hear from you again. Thanks for writing. W.

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 7:47am

Amazing.

The only thing that felt a bit out of place was Annie. As you introduced her as rather normal, her responses felt odd. They do fit the story and the tone you've set, but not the character.

See? I had to dig and think a bit to find something to critisize. Your writing is indeed stellar.

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Thomas posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 7:33am

I think I' m going to have to re read this. The chapter was nice to read, in a grammar and spelling kinda way, but i've forgotten who some of the side characters are.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 7:14am

Iiiiiiiinteresting! It's good to see a new chapter of this :) I'm looking forward to how the situation between Harry and Kate resolves :D

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 7:11am

I don't recall if I left a review for this chapter prior to this or not. As it is, I'm rereading it and finding it just as enjoyable as the first time.

It's interesting, funny, a great fic which has a smile on my face almost from the start.

Many thanks for sharing it.

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 7:06am

Well done, as always!

Darkcloud02 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 7:05am

And as always, your chapters leave us begging for the next, well done. I myself eagerly await the next chappy ^_^

joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 6:43am

Nicely entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

Comosicus posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 5:45am

Nice to see this story moving on. While the plot itself did not advance much, it did help set up the settings for explaining background things. I'll look forward to the next chapter.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 5:37am

Great chapter as always. It's really nice to read a story so full of emotion and interspection. Thanks for sharing!

jewles3837 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 5:32am

Love this story. I was so happy when I got the notice it had updated.

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 5:11am

awesome update! can't really think of anything else that fits :)

Silo posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:58am

nice to see an update on this wonderfull fic so hope to see more soon and i do so hope that harry gets with fleur and not kate solly becouse i think that gabby would lose her shit if harry didnt end up with fleur

Pennywise posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:52am

Awesome chapter. Glad this story is still going strong. Harry deserves all three girls, after all the shit he has to put up with lol.

Stick97 posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:42am

For a moment there, I expected to see Gabrielle have a discussion with Hogwarts, and try for some time dilation of her own. Nice chapter, well paced, and strong. The kickboxing makes for a nice unique facet of this Harry. He now has both magical, physical, and sexual confidence in spades. Of course the hardest part is the emotional confidence. Yes he is more self assured, and is not so damaged, but Gabby hit it on the head. He has built up some strong stone walls around his heart. Counting down the seconds till the next update.

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 4:32am

Great chapter, the direction that things are moving with Fleur is very interesting.