Wolf470 posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 10:04pm

I can only say - wow. I probably could have seen this coming but I was enjoying the ride and mindreading takes it out of a fella. Great story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 8:17am

That was great. I just reread this story and just WOW!!! Please can we have some more.

M4RKL4R posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 7:13am

WOW!!! Great writing.

I liked the very apt comparison of Harry to Batman and Ironman.

Please keep up the good work.

-M4RKL4R

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 7:11am

Love how you write Gabrielle this. And if any every does their own version of this idea I hope that they are at least has good has this.

David Thacker posted a comment on Sunday 24th November 2013 11:17am

Hope to see more like this story out there. Rereading it now and must say if I did not know you do not write Harry/Hermione I would have thoght that was the ship with the way she acted about the books.

red jacobson posted a comment on Saturday 16th November 2013 11:07pm

Hey Tim; it's been several months, and I remembered you saying that you were planning on updating a little while back, after your relatives left. Any news on that front?

Red

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Sunday 3rd November 2013 5:42pm

This is one of my top three HP stories. The way you've portrayed Harry sings to me. He is someone that can and will change the world. For the betterment of all, not the one. A good soul, a guardian, a protector. It is a truly pleasing read. I do hope that you will someday continue it. It deserves to be completed. Thank you for what you have posted so far. It was brilliant.

Vision-138 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd November 2013 2:29am

Wonderful story I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for more.

Jason

Secca posted a comment on Friday 1st November 2013 5:26am

Not sure where the Brass Monkey's originated (probably from European sailors to the Orient in the early 19th century), but it makes sense when you remember that the whole saying is "colder than the balls on a brass monkey".

Starman800 posted a comment on Thursday 31st October 2013 1:17pm

This is a GREAT Story, Please write more.

GBTtown posted a comment on Thursday 24th October 2013 3:07pm

Wonderful story. I was at first going to read the story and accept that during the Hogwarts years the Twins would help guide Harry through the Tournament, then conquering Voldie and in between laughs were had by all. Which, if I remember correctly has been done at least a couple of times. The great "Financial Plan For the Future" in still up for judgement. It is a bit too close to another fic's "Great Idea" but, again, I will reserve judgement until I see how your story proceeds.

The Kate character is a great addition, again, that has been done similarly before, but I would not have necessarily drawn a line in the sand about a Harry/Kate/Fluer ship. It seems, as you have written them, that they compliment one another and support one another. Also, I can see the distinct possibility of Gabby joining the family once she is old enough. No, I am not considering this should be turned into some smirking, deviated Harry/Harem story. Instead I keep looking at the characters and there individual strengths and weaknesses as you have written them. They all seem compatible.

I like the superhero comparison as long as he really doesn't outfit himself in tights and a cape. That would be too over the top. The manner in which you treated the death of Snape was inspired! Dark but not unredeemable Harry action.

Hogwarts manifesting a human body is not new so I am reserving judgement on how you treat this. No, she is not human, she cannot join in some harem fantasy!

Katherine posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd October 2013 3:32am

Please tell me you are going to post another chapter soon. I want to see the reactions of the other students. Will Harry claim that Dawn is his daughter? Or tell the truth?

command posted a comment on Friday 18th October 2013 10:37pm

I liked this, which surprised me given how SUPER! Harry it feels. But after taking a step back, I realize that's not the issue. The issue is that Harry almost seems too good to be true, too perfect to be real. But thats not the case. If you step back you can see enough issues to make him real. The issue, is you put too much into the story. I think you've easily got enough content here to make at least 4 fleshed out stories. I think that in cramming it all together you, quite naturally, ended up glossing over much of the conflict in the story. That said, your doing so wasn't nessisary wrong. Sometimes we need these tremendously overdone, over plotted stories. For all I tink you brushed over some of the conflict and could have done four stories in place of this one, I like this a lot. And I'll look forward to more.

MizukiYumeko posted a comment on Thursday 17th October 2013 2:55pm

Wahhahhha that's it?!?!?

Come on, there's got to be more! Right?

It's fantastic!

Zpenergy posted a comment on Saturday 12th October 2013 5:40pm

Cool chapter I totally wasn't expecting Dawn.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd October 2013 1:22pm

Interesting, but very odd. You have several layers here - and a *lot* of explaining to do!

Please avoid making this just another 'super Harry' story. Your story's charm is in how you've involved other characters.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd October 2013 1:01am

" . . . meeting of the Weasley twins . . . "

I love it!

gtgrouch posted a comment on Tuesday 1st October 2013 10:36pm

It's common for readers to say, at any part of JK Rowling's books, "This is *not* what I would do in this situation. Why didn't Harry just (whatever) instead?" This is a great example of "Why didn't Harry just rely more on his friends?" Sometimes it's a spoof bordering on a crack-fic, but it's a great story so far!

Keena3105 posted a comment on Saturday 28th September 2013 8:10am

i love this story so much, i can't wait for the next chapter to be up :D update again soon! <3

ibskib posted a comment on Friday 20th September 2013 12:15pm

Oh, I always thought the title was meant to allude to the dawn of a new era, or something like that.

One thing I found positively cringeworthy was the way the other characters kept praising Harry for basically being awesome in all manner of ways, it felt pretty heavyhanded, and showing is better than telling, as long as restraint is used, which this chapter especially could use a bit more of.

The whole flying into the air when giving Hogwarts energy in front of everybody made Harry seem a bit too much like a showoff. Something to be wary of when creating a wishfulfilment/super! fic.

With great power, should come at least a modicum of humility and discretion to avoid creating an attention whore ;-)