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motherjenjen posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:25am for Chapter 12

Omg I loved this chapter. Cant wait for more. This would have to be one of my favorite stories ever.

Robert1 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 1:57am for Chapter 12

Between the comics, the rumors of a reboot movie, and the steady stream of stories and updates on Twisting the Hellmouth and FF.net, I'd say the audience for Buffy fics is still going strong. Buffy and Harry Potter fanfics make up 90% of my total reading material. I'm still patiently waiting for an update of Wild Horses, my absolute favorite Xander/Dawn story. That said, I love everything you've written so far and I do a little happy dance whenever I get an email alert. I'm now going to have to start watching Naruto, about which I know absolutely nothing, just so I can properly enjoy your story when you post it.

MrHolbyta posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 1:08am for Chapter 12

Great to have HD back. A minor quibble with this chapter: straight kickboxers tend to use the same closed gloves boxers do, even Muay Thai boxers which allows far more grappling than Taekwon Do. It's only MMA and true vale tudo fighters who use the open gloves because they need their fingers for wrestling and jiu jitsu. The open fingers are a huge downside, because they lead to numerous eye pokes when fighters extend their hands to keep their opponent at distance. As a side note, in your kickboxing sequences, don't neglect shots to the liver and solar plexus. Both have the ability to end a fight just as soundly as a strike on the jaw or behind the ear. Search for "Bas Rutten liver" and watch some examples. For the blow to the solar plexus, watch Anderson Silva's fights with Chael Sonnen and Stefan Bonner. I love the tale you're telling. Keep being awesome.

Wolff posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 12:45am for Chapter 12

Once again, fantastic. This one'll put a smile on my face for the rest of the day. Thank you!

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 12:31am for Chapter 12

Great! I like the setup here for the Dudly/Harry confrontation, and Dawn's introduction here.

Also I do look foward to your Xander/Faith story. I admit that while I do read a lot of Buffy fiction, the vast majority of it is crossover fiction.

Thanks for taking the time to write and share this with us. I usually enjoy your writing, and this has been a lot of fun.