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DJPotter posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 12:01pm for Chapter 12

Is not Sirius' trial that Saturday?

And I loved IT!

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 11:23am for Chapter 12

A good chapter but not my favourite.

"Smasher, Crusher, Thrasher, and Nasher" really are great names.

I wonder what kind of wand will choose Gabrielle.

I liked the Uncle Salazar comment and "oily oik" comment.

I wonder where Draco ended up his schooling options should be rather limited now and I doubt his parents would be impressed with him being home schooled.

I wonder if Gabrielle's mother will want a picture of her daughter and Dawn together it would be a cute picture.

A good line "as you sought a way of increasing your power without losing your soul"

A good explanation for the changes in Harry although 6 years is nothing for a magical person given their long life span.

A Veela with hands on hips would be hard to argue with I think. Gabrielle is acting like a wise big sister I wonder what Fleur makes of the changes in her.

A nice twist to involve Dudley's school I am glad Dudley got taught a lesson and that Harry got closure as he really does need it given all that the Dursley's did to him.

It would be funny if Fleur did sleep with a Teddy Bear and Gabrielle had a Harry Plushie.

Some welcome changes in Hermione as she would be hard to deal with blindly following authority and not thinking for herself. She would hold Harry back too Hermione did need to grow up.

I look forward to the next chapter and I hope Harry spends time with Gabrielle and Dawn. Thanks for this chapter.

preier posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 10:56am for Chapter 12

not a fan of the huge exposition with dawn in the first part. and a castle not being completely humanly socialized is not a huge surprise ^^

liked the kickboxing part and laughed at the extended "cabal of gay men rules over britain" ^^

good job letting dudley have respectable traits as a boxer and on harry not ripping him apart.

not seeing the point of megan to the story at large, though in the context of someone with everything having wasted it, it's nicely done.

thank you for sharing your tales

asvaldson posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 10:01am for Chapter 12

Holy crap! I just want MORE! this is excellent, I always enjoy your writing though.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 9:22am for Chapter 12

This is a very tumultuous chapter. First Harry finds out Hogwarts has finally found a physical form and then he finds out she betrayed him and used him for her own reasons without asking for his help. That and 6 years of his life. Now Harry is in a fight with Dudley that he easily wins. He has a bitch stalking him and Aurora is coming to save him from the bitch. I look forward to how you work this all out. Very well done. Thanks for writing. p

Zooxle posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 7:18am for Chapter 12

Sometimes i hate you so much, sometimes i love you. I did not expect to wake up today and see an update to HD. I had almost given up on you ever releasing another chapter but didnt want to remove the story alert for just incase it did happen and lo and behold it did. I love HD, i've read it chapter by chapter since you first posted it. I do hate that you are such a good author that you know exactly when to end a chapter on a massive cliff hanger and now i know i can't change my alert ever because i might miss the next chapter. Well done on another great chapter, now post the next one tonight if possible :)

Zooxle

joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 7:04am for Chapter 12

Entertaining chapter, thanks for the update.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 7:01am for Chapter 12

Excellent chapter like always please continue again soon can´t wait for the next chapter.

rusty32539 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:47am for Chapter 12

Post it all, even the stuff you call crap is better then 97% of the other stories I read. That being said great chapter, just wished you would have gotten to the Harry/Aurora meet up scene.

HP-DG-SB posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:23am for Chapter 12

I think this was a great chapter. I was actually hoping that Hogwarts' personality manifested but didn't get along perfectly with Harry, right off the bat. That was really important. I think it would have taken something away from the story. I liked that Harry went and took out Dudley like he did, that was an important point that need to be resolved, at least on Harry's part, it would have probably eaten at him for a long time otherwise. I think it's also going to be hilarious to watch that girl utterly fail at trying to catch Harry's attention in the way she is trying; especially with Aurora showing up, that is going to be especially entertaining to watch unfold. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

HP-DG-SB

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:21am for Chapter 12

yay an update! :)

great chapter and am so looking forward to Aurora causing havoc at smeltings.

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:44am for Chapter 12

Enjoyable chapter, and I'm really looking forward to seeing Harry's reaction to Aurora's outfit. I'm sure that the Head Girl of SLAG will be eating her heart out, and try something stupid to get slapped down.

Wonder what's going to happen when Dudley whines to his parents about getting beat up by Harry?

Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter

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TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:39am for Chapter 12

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:29am for Chapter 12

Awesome chapter! I love this story, and to see you work something that seemed to be a random pull for martial arts into something so far from where it was introduced just shows that you are that good of an author! Keep up the awesome work!

I would love to see ALL your stuff posted, but maybe that's just me :)!

Lia1 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:00am for Chapter 12

I've yet to read something of yours that I didn't immediatey love. I'm up three hours after I ought to have gone to bed and I blame you entirely! :) In the best way, thank you for writing - it gets me out of my own head and lets me relax. Great chapter and looking forward to more from you! Thanks!

ladysavay posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:52am for Chapter 12

SOOOOOOO glad you updated this. It was like going off cigarettes not to have an update. Thank you.

Have to say Harry is almost too mature. Just laying out Dinky Dudley with a well placed shot to the chin doesn't quite seem like enough payback to call it 'closure', more like the beginning of closure. I know, I'm vengefull and nasty.

Anyway, great bit with Dawn and all. Loved the Malfoy disposition. Looking forward to more of this great story.

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:50am for Chapter 12

I love this story thank you for sharing another wonderful chapter please continue to update as life allows

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:47am for Chapter 12

Well, Megan Charters certainly lives up (or down, depending on your PoV) to the acronym for her school and I suspect she literally embodies her title, too (not that any guy would trust her any more). It's certainly once more an interesting time to be Harry potter or part of his entourage. I daresay that Aurora Sinistra is going to upset a lot of folk as Ms. Charters finds out that Harry is well beyond her and anything she can offer; I suspect Harry's dispatch of Dudley Dusley as well as his shooting Ms. Charters down completely is going to make him exceedingly popular with the students of Smeltings (I can just imagine Vernon going spare when he finds out, especially since none of it was done with magic). I'll be looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.

Chessicfayth posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:34am for Chapter 12

Yes! Been waiting on this update for so long. Great work, I love this story.

Thanks for the time and effort, Jeconais.

Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:51am for Chapter 12

Very good part. Duds is a lucky guy Harry is nice.