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elmoryakhan posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2014 5:04pm for Chapter 12

Nice chapter, but hate the cliffhanger! Please update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Lisagrace posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2014 7:50am for Chapter 12

Great chapter. Loved meeting Dawn, looking forward to seeing how a 1000 year old girl does with having a moving body. Glad Harry was able to get a little back from Dudley. The school bike isn't going to know what hit her. ;)

Lohoydo posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2014 12:27am for Chapter 12

This is a story I've come back to and re-read a couple times when I wanted a good fun story. I really hope you continue work on it, as it pains me to wait for the next chapter.

Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 1st June 2014 10:40am for Chapter 12

Enjoyable intoduction of Dawn and nice how Gabriellehandled it all. Good to see Dudley get what he deserved. Cheers.


adafrog posted a comment on Saturday 31st May 2014 3:54am for Chapter 12

Good addition, thanks.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2014 3:40am for Chapter 12

It's hard to tell if the story is approaching closure, or if it's expanding in scope. I hope the former. I think the story is interesting, creative, and well-written, and I'm glad the author is still active.

Thank you for taking the time to write this and to share it.

(I was one - of many I suspect - who missed the acronym.)

Lufio posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2014 12:45am for Chapter 12


Aww, you ended it | Before resolving the scene | With the SLAG Head Girl.

Commando987 posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2014 2:09pm for Chapter 12

Blahhhfhghfhfhfhf man, this story is awesome! Can't wait till you update again

ficbob posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2014 10:23am for Chapter 12


Great fic and it seems a long way to get Harry to smack Dudders around in the ring but that is a neat idea

I am enjoying this and looking forward to more of your fics and BtVS is still my favorite reading for fanfics


Peregrine829 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th May 2014 12:06am for Chapter 12

I am very glad to see you are still writing and posting!

keichan2 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 3:31pm for Chapter 12

“If I can’t have a hug from Harry, I go for chocolate” Bwahahahahahaha!

“Smeltings will appreciate having someone on display closer to their age.” :-D

“it looked like he was the perfect patsy” Ooh… I had wondered if Harry would be her target, or if he would just be the one to smack her down… It seems he will be BOTH! ;-p

“One of the more persistently irritating ones was closer.” Why do I get the feeling that she is talking about Dudley?

“How about you beat him up for us in the ring?” I saw this one coming… Too bad that Harry will not be able to really spend his anger on little Dudders, as he wouldn’t survive…

“And I’ll go and make a phone call.” :-D I was SO hoping for that… The only question, now, is: Kate, or Fleur? (Now that I think about it, Ben will contact his daughter, who will tell Fleur…)

“Especially as I’m now free for the day.” Ooh… I didn’t even think about Aurora!

“Fleur held up a blue dress, and then shook her head.” Hey! I just realized that not so long ago, Harry accused Fleur to dress as a nun… So… Why is she the one in charge of the clothes?

I DID notice that Dawn told everyone the reason Sal left Hogwarts… Though nobody reacted at the moment, I wonder when it will click, who will notice first, and what the consequences will be…

“You can acronymise the girl's school.” Snort! ;-p

I was so hoping that you would finish the Smelting arc in this chapter…

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!

mwinter posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 2:49pm for Chapter 12

Thank you for the update. Awaiting more.

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 12:51pm for Chapter 12

I like the direct line thinking that Hogwarts does. Harry likes Gabrielle, therefore taking her image would mean he likes her, too. Incorrect, of course, but believable process. Aging her appearance makes some sort of relationship with Harry far more likely/troubling, but . . . Wow, that'll end up being messy in all sorts of ways. She's might be older, but emotionally mature?

"Ivan" just has to be a cameo appearance for someone. You made such a big deal out of his accent and appearance.

Good to see you used that name for the girls school.

"Sally Parks". Hmm. Sally-Ann Perks might've altered her name a bit. Even better, Sinistra might recognize her. If both "The Hitman" and "his girlfriend" instantly recognize her, that would be even more of a slam on Megan's position. If Sally were her arch-rival, it would be worse, but for them to recognize / pay attention to anyone other than her? Actually,that could be a problem for Sally in the long run (if all of this were true), but just something that jumped out at me.

That follow-up scene is going to be all sorts of fun, destroying the harpy of S.L.A.G.

Glad to see the story continuing.

And don't think everyone didn't see the "the more out-there stuff I've written" line. Our curiosity is thoroughly piqued.

Astrodactyl posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 11:24am for Chapter 12

This chapter is close to 15K words, right? Only you make it seem so short...I liked the way Harry reacted, his actions were entirely justifiable. I liked the interactions between Dawn and Gabrielle too. Great work.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 11:15am for Chapter 12

Oh, how things have changed since TMW. I still always enjoy your writing! Seems an odd choice where you left off... leaving us wondering whether Harry will let loose his inner hurt child and whale the living snot out of his whale-like cousin, or whether his higher and better nature will prevail. Dawn's actions are a bit creepy, but utterly understandable - all that magic, all that experience, yet no actual knowledge of interpersonal relations. I love how Gabby took charge of her. And Gabby's personal development - as opposed to physical development, alas for her - is a joy to behold, too. Thanks for the update! Keep writing, my friend :)

darthme1011 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 9:51am for Chapter 12

Great chapter and Sweet i love xander/faith stuff looking forward to seeing what you do

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2014 7:55am for Chapter 12

I greatly enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 8:50pm for Chapter 12

As always I was massively dissapointed... when I reached the end of the chapter and realized I'd have to wait till I could read more of it. Exellent work! Kept me up when I should have gone to bed an hour ago.

BJH posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 12:39pm for Chapter 12

Kinda surprised that Ben and Ivan didn't comment on the fact that the 16 year old kid they knew is now 24.

And when does the a images thing come, or did I miss that?


Tumshie posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 12:28pm for Chapter 12

Wonderful once more, a great addition to a favourite story of mine