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K Gibbs Winters posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 11:41am for Chapter 12

But but but I wasn't ready for the chapter to be over... :(

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 5:59am for Chapter 12

Great update! I both love and hate that you keep ending with such enticing endings. It keeps me wanting more, but then you would have no more chapters available and I get upset. Anyway, I hope that you continue to keep writing. While I am a diehard Harry/Hermione fan I make an exception for your fics cause I love your writing. Thanks and looking forward to more!

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 5:23am for Chapter 12

Thanks, and yes, i did catch that acronym and wondered if it was intentional or not 'til your closing words. I really liked this chapter (no surprise there, i always do) and about your changing style, it was quite apparent here. I like it as it gives my imagination more to do. However, a few more environmental notices, or comments on the speaker's inflections during long spoken passages makes it a tad easier to read. I'm still enjoying this massively, and i have full understanding for your streamlining needs. I'm looking forward to the XF-story as there's very few good ones out there like that, and as you treated both of them in Wild Horses, it almost has to be brilliant..=)

Bad things? Yes, i got this update notice on my phone, and had to wait days before i was in front of a proper screen to read it..=)

Keep it up. You are the Master.

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Jades_steele posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 5:06am for Chapter 12

Once again, Thank you very much for the beginning Author's note - Billy Sparks

Chiyo posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 3:57am for Chapter 12

Really enjoying this entire story - tons of fun up one side and down the other.

Great news that you're posting more stuff... However is there any way to beg and plead enough to ask that Wild Horses be finished first before you post the Xander/Faith story?

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 12:39am for Chapter 12

Will Dudders ever learn? Really enjoying this story, please keep it going.

Bilyp posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 11:15pm for Chapter 12

Oh no I cant believe you stopped there:'(

great story I really love it

Rhyssia posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 8:58pm for Chapter 12

Lovely, lovely, lovely. The /only/ thing I could possibly pick at is I think at one point you called Andrew Adrian. Or vis versa. And I am totally looking forward to the rest of the stuff you are plotting out here and elsewhere.

LuxEterna posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:54pm for Chapter 12

i love you

i just reread this fic and though 'now what it needs is just that someone from little whinging stumbles upon harry's success/girls' but your idea with the fight against dudley is even better and i cant wait to see what happens next (and the reaction form the older guys at smelting that now harry has a third hot girl hanging around him/coming for him)

rey_naldo posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 6:36pm for Chapter 12

You can't just dressed up and Aurora and make a cliffhanger like that please update soon this is a great fic and i love it

The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:45pm for Chapter 12

What a fun chapter! Only you could make nearly 15,000 words seem way too short. I was shocked when I reached the end and only hope you have the next chapter well under way. Or something on Harry and Wednesday.

Regardless, thanks for this chapter. Highlights for me included the spot on depiction of an upper-middle class Brit bitch. Loved how the Smelting equals gave it back to Megan, plus an extra amount because she had them then blew it by not knowing when to stop. As soon as you wrote Smeltings, we knew Harry would meet Dudley. Loved how you had Harry dance around him first round, then put Dudley on his arse at the start of the second. Let's hope Dudley is capable of learing the lesson taught, though it's doubtful.

Best of all, though, was Dawn's increasing humanization, as aided by your transcendant Gabrielle. It is my opinion that you created one of the iconic HP fan fiction characters when you wrote Gabrielle in your incredible Hope. Before that, she was an almost blank canvas from canon. This iteration is that one's equal, and there is no higher compliment I can give.

Next chapter promises to be sensational, with Aurora showing up at Smeltings, the deconstruction of the slag Megan, maybe some reaction (growth?) from Dudley, and some kickass kick boxing between Harry, Ben and Ivan, who is an amazing OC.

As always, thank you for your very much appreciated update and for all the time and work you put into them.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 5:12pm for Chapter 12

Dudley is lucky that Harry does have self-restraint, otherwise he would be a pile of bleeding bones. I wonder just how much trouble Harry is about to find himself dealing with when it comes to Aurora?

DizzyG posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:44pm for Chapter 12

Every time you post a new chapter of this I feel compelled to go back and read the entire thing again. And after I've done that I want the next chapter even more. I'm eagerly awaiting your next efforts - and I may have to finally force myself to catch up on whatever the hell Naruto involves. Ah, too much entertainment and too little time - damn having to work for a living.

Hansi_Rahl posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:59pm for Chapter 12

good chapter. I'd love to see some ne BtVS stories. There aren't enough out there!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:56pm for Chapter 12

I can understand Harry's position to a certain degree but he was more than willing to do what was needed to help himself and Hogwarts. Nice bit with Dudley and should be interesting to read how he deals with Megan. Oh, please post your out-there writtings as they are always quite entertaining and enjoyable to read! Thanks for sharing.

GlennCLP posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:52pm for Chapter 12

You amazing person you! I've been waiting for this chapter and you did not disappoint! It was spectacular, it had length and it had a few curveballs that I wasn't expecting. This chapter did seem edgier than your previous ones but it was still really impressive. Although you did lack a lot of Fred and George in this, I can't recall them having a single line? And surely they would be second in the hierarchy rather than Hermione and Fleur? Nonetheless, I'm really excited for the rest of your stuff! Hopefully Konoha's Legion soon?

gara5289 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:17pm for Chapter 12

So glad to seen an update to one of my favorites. I will say though despite how long this chapter was, i don't feel like it made it very far. I kinda expected Aurora to at least show up before the chapter ended and for all the fallout of Harry beating Dursley, Aurora showing up and forgiving Dawn to be next chapter. Regardless of that, i did love the beginning with Dawn.

And ironically, BtVS still has a bigger following then you'd think - or that's how I choose to rationalize being forced to watch season 6 a month ago by my female friends. Seriously, I can handle the early seasons, but i can't stand the latter episodes. Pyscho buffy is as painful to read as she is to watch.

Mike C. posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 2:15pm for Chapter 12

I love your stories and am a big fan of BTVS and Harry Potter. I will check out that story if it is up and if it isn't I will when you put it up. I have reread this story at least a 1/2 dozen times and am waiting on baited breathe for the next chapter. I would have liked to see Dudley get more embarrassed by Harry then he did buy I still was lmao over that scene.

Pai posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 1:14pm for Chapter 12

The hell? So "dawn" admits to doing what harry wanted and figered was going to happen in the first place. And the rest of the chapter is him freaking out about it?

Do you read your own stuff? The chapters at the start basicly cover potter being aware his ageing faster from screwing around with time.

halhawk posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 12:02pm for Chapter 12

Another chapter at last! I keep re-reading this, so it's great to have another update and hope for more soon. Interested to see what happens with Dawn - she'll have a lot to learn about how to cope with her new 'age'. Not sure that Dudley will learn a lesson from the fight, it was all a bit quick, but it could be interesting to see. Sarah Perks? As in Sally Anne Perks? or just a coincidence?