Rodney McDonald posted a comment on Monday 29th August 2016 4:58am

Excellent story.

kitsu524 posted a comment on Monday 29th August 2016 2:25am

Truly this was a great"one shot" I really enjoy your style of writing. The pace is great and neither overly embellished nor rough and under develope. At times it did feel out of character from cannon but honestly I don't care because this is fanfiction if I wanted more "cannon" I would re read the original. Plus it's more fun this way. I will admit when you were describing death I was wondering but knew for sure when he spoke in his way. I truly love Terry Pratchett's work after all a mind that can think "Water is only a more dense form of air thus further down there is also a further dense form of air in whitch the under sea resides and sunken ships sail with skeletal crews" is a great mind. I shall toast to his works every year for he is the second author to inspire my love for books. And finally thank you for everything you have given us of yourself in your own works. For there is always something given of one's self when such love is put into the written word.

vanessa94us posted a comment on Monday 15th August 2016 10:57pm

You're younger than me! I turned 40 last year. I feel so old now. Anyway, good story. Are you going to write an aftermath the shows what happened to Harry and the other characters? If so, then can you put in what Parkinson did to Draco for revenge after what he said about half-bloods?

Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 13th August 2016 5:19am

A genuinely entertaining fic, filled with laughs, appreciative nods and raised eyebrows.

Thanks for sharing your time and talent! M

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2016 10:04am

It is once agaim my pleasure to thank you for a great story as you are one of my favorite authors. I believe that I have read all of your stories that I could find and liked them all. Keep up the great work and looking forward to seeing you update some of your works in progress.

James

Deric posted a comment on Sunday 24th July 2016 9:04pm

@jhm5 comment on Friday 22nd July 2016 I believe you are missing the actual Ball being written up. Or, possibly, no follow up on how Ron actually decided to accept Harry's 'betrayal' by not doing things only as 'The Golden Trio'? It was mostly glossed over as spending the summer with Sirius. Very nice original ending of Volde, Tim. I mean having Death be the one to grant Volde's desire, total dominion over everything. Not so much the immortality, which has been done before. In one of the others that I remember, Harry placed Volde in stasis, then cast his wand in a block of Lucite, then timed the release after the last human on Earth died.

jtork posted a comment on Saturday 23rd July 2016 2:15am

Very nicely done. I liked the process of driving Dumbles insane by forcing him to attempt to do all three of his jobs. It was also nice to see a fic where the wards on Malfoy Manor were actually worth something.

And yes, harry & Astoria were very cute together!

jhm5 posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2016 7:36am

Fantastic story, I loved it. A bit of an odd ending point, but I'm not sure I can even point to where I think it should have ended, it just seemed off. Dunno. Anyway, love all your stories.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Saturday 9th July 2016 10:34pm

Nicely written. I enjoyed that Ron was an improved character, while Harry was a lot smarter and more confident.

lwj2 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2016 1:17pm

This was brilliant, thank you. Thanks also for setting up and maintaining this wonderful site.

Encarnia22 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2016 10:15am

Superb story. I really loved the various characters and their interactions. The turnabout from Malfoy Sr is hardly something I can imagine from the cannon, but I didn't mind at all. it showed an actual mind instead of just brainlessly following Moldyshorts.

I also really liked the OC being introduced, and was very glad they where mostly used to make a point about the main characters and then they left again. I felt previous stories like Blue Steel and Hogwarts Dawn were so swamped with OC that the main story got lost to me. This one had the perfect balance for me.

Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.

soki posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2016 6:51am

Very enjoyable story. Your writing has always impressed me.

MasterBralia posted a comment on Sunday 26th June 2016 11:24pm

First of all, happy belated birthday! Hope you had fun with the skydiving and the concert.

Second, love this story and while I do wish there was more to this, I can understand cutting it off where you did. Looking forward to any updates you do next though, I've read all your stories and while I find some that are kind of hard for me to get through, overall I really enjoy these stories and hope you enjoy writing them as much as I, and a lot of others, enjoy reading them.

Diana75 posted a comment on Sunday 26th June 2016 8:36pm

Great story, thanks a lot for sharing with us. Very well-written dialogues!

Heiko posted a comment on Sunday 19th June 2016 9:54am

Hi Jeaconais,

happy belated birthday. Turned 40 myself this year. The fic was awesome as always. I especially like the new views you always bring into the world of fanfiction. Also your fics are always very well written and fun to read. Thanks to you and your betas for this!

Please continue the splendid work! I'm always looking forward to read your stories! Heiko

erbkaiser posted a comment on Sunday 19th June 2016 1:01am

Excellent story with a lot of needed changes from Canon. Good use of the "named ocs" like Susan and Astoria and a relief to not see the Ice Princess grope.

The one let down is the cheap end to Voldemort's physical form and Bellatrix, if wards can do that it makes little sense for anyone to ever be attacked at home.

Luan Mao posted a comment on Saturday 18th June 2016 1:07pm

A note for anyone inclined to take Jeconais's "as well as fixing my awful typing and grammar" at face value: it's by no means awful. Unless Kokopelli is doing major fixes before I see a draft, Jeconais's fresh-off-the-keyboard work is about average for the pro writers I've edited and better than most of the fan writers. Heck, half of the time the grammar "errors" aren't even errors, simply differences between English and American usage. (Commas, now, that's another story. I have a theory that Jeconais follows the advice of sticking in a comma everywhere he'd pause if reading the story aloud ... and he's a heavy smoker and thus can say only about three words before having to pause for breath. I'm not saying that's it for sure, but my theory would explain a lot.)

KathyH84 posted a comment on Saturday 18th June 2016 9:49am

I really enjoyed this story. I initially thought that Astoria's manners of speech were a bit unusual, but by the end of the fix I understood your reasoning for it. I liked your different take on familiar characters such as Lucius and the way you gave them more depth. Keep up the great work!

Western-Otaku posted a comment on Thursday 16th June 2016 9:53pm

This story was freaking awesome!

There were so many things about this story that I loved, you did a great job on this!

adafrog posted a comment on Thursday 16th June 2016 9:19pm

Loved it! Thanks.